Talk:Arthur James Nesbitt

Article issues
This article has several problems, most related to the uncritical tone and unprovable hyperbole. This is contrary to Wiki style guidelines as discussed in WP:PEACOCK. The lack of independent third-party references and citations adds to a promotional tone which is inappropriate to an encyclopedia.

Peacock terms that should be rephrased, cited, or removed:

"would get his big break" "brilliant young business investor" "significant success underwriting" "largest and most successful in Canada" "enormously wealthy" "widely respected" "earnest member" "very substantial gift"

Alpha Ralpha Boulevard (talk) 19:44, 28 June 2008 (UTC)