Talk:Article 12 of the Constitution of Singapore/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cwmhiraeth (talk · contribs) 13:16, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

I shall be starting this review in the next few days and welcome input from others. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:16, 4 March 2012 (UTC)

Some initial comments
I have now looked more closely at this article and find in general that it is well written, has good spelling and grammar and a satisfactory layout. I am not knowledgeable on the Constitution of Singapore and am not considering whether the legal matters in the article are correct but whether it is well laid out, is generally broad in its scope and considers the various aspects and deals with them satisfactorily.

One thing I notice is that some of the paragraphs have an in-line citation in the middle of a paragraph, such as #2 and #3 in the section, "Three-tiered scrutiny". This leaves the remaining sentences in the paragraph unsupported by a citation.
 * the footnote was in the wrong place. — SMUconlaw (talk) 13:52, 7 March 2012 (UTC)

In the lead section, I think the second sentence of #1 should be rephrased.
 * . — SMUconlaw (talk) 13:52, 7 March 2012 (UTC)

In the section "Stage 2: Intelligible differentia", the last 2 sentences of #2 could do with some extra punctuation.
 * OK, added a comma and did some rephrasing. — SMUconlaw (talk) 13:52, 7 March 2012 (UTC)

In the section "Unreasonable legislative objectives", the second sentence of #3 needs attention. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:19, 6 March 2012 (UTC)
 * the grammatical error. — SMUconlaw (talk) 13:52, 7 March 2012 (UTC)

Great! Thank you. — SMUconlaw (talk) 17:11, 8 March 2012 (UTC)