Talk:Artwork of the Gundohinus Gospels

Please finish this revision by 11/29 and email me when it's up. Looking forward, ALMc

AMcClanan (talk) 19:14, 26 November 2018 (UTC)

Feedback from Prof McClanan
Kenan, Here are a few thoughts for your last round of revisions: subject matter maybe works better than artistry in next session being exemplified   is a little unclear--maybe just illustrated Also, this is a little nitpicky but 8th Century Merovingian books should be 8th-century Merovingian manuscripts. (technically a book is printed and a mss is hand-written) Another fine-tuning: would all Merovingian types of manuscripts be more accurate as all surviving Merovingian manuscripts later era's
 * the opening section works well for a general intro, but the sub-head (Artwork...) is a little misleading and should probably be omitted. Other details are to use CE instead of AD
 * iconography   or
 * in Dec Init sec:
 * possessive for

Please touch base w any questions!
 * double check how to cite the images pulled from Wikimedia commons, I've not seen them cited in references before

AMcClanan (talk) 16:49, 2 December 2018 (UTC)

From Prof McClanan, 12/7
This doesn't seem to be included yet in the Gundohinus Gospel entry, please email me as soon as you've added it and I'll reassess your grade.

AMcClanan (talk) 19:49, 7 December 2018 (UTC)