Talk:Aryna Sabalenka/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:05, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

Shall take a look at this article. MWright96 (talk) 10:05, 4 January 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
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Early life and background

 * Whereabouts is Belarus' National Tennis Academy?
 * Added that it's in Minsk (with a new source to show that). Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:29, 6 January 2019 (UTC)

Junior career

 * "or any of the other high-level Grade A and Grade 1 events." - or any other
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:31, 6 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "she had a career-high ranking of just No. 225." - add the abbr template to No. for non-tennis readers
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:31, 6 January 2019 (UTC)

2012–16: Top 200, Fed Cup debut

 * "Sabalenka began playing on the ITF Women's Circuit in 2012, even before she played on the ITF Junior Circuit." - competed
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:32, 6 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "The first in Tianjin[11] boosted her" - put
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:32, 6 January 2019 (UTC)

2017: Fed Cup heroics, WTA 125K title, top 100

 * "Despite some early season success in Fed Cup" - in the
 * Actually, it should be just "in Fed Cup." See for instance here, here or here. I know it looks weird. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:52, 6 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "cracking the top 100 for the first time." - entering is more formal in this instance
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:52, 6 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "the previous year's runner-up at the event" - change this text so it reads the 2016 runner-up,
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:52, 6 January 2019 (UTC)

2018: Newcomer of the Year, Premier 5 title, world No. 11

 * "playing in tune-ups all three weeks before Wimbledon." - during the
 * Changed to "during each of the" Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:53, 6 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "she was named the WTA Newcomer of the Year for her excellent first full year" - performance in her
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:53, 6 January 2019 (UTC)

Early appearances

 * Wikilink dead rubber for non-tennis readers
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:33, 6 January 2019 (UTC)

2017: Surprise runner-up in World Group debut

 * "The quarterfinal tie against the Netherlands in February and the semifinal tie" - change the second mention of "tie" to game for the avoidance of the close reptition of the same words
 * Changed to "The ties in the quarterfinals... and the semifinals..." ("Game" means something else in tennis.) Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:57, 6 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "with no career WTA match wins outside of Fed Cup." - outside of the
 * Same as above with "in the Fed Cup". Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:57, 6 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "Despite finishing runner-up," - finishing as
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:57, 6 January 2019 (UTC)

Playing style

 * Wikilink serve to Serve (tennis) and groundstroke for non-tennis readers
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:41, 6 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "She commented "This year [in 2017]" - a comma is missing inbetween "commented" and the beginning of the quote
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:41, 6 January 2019 (UTC)
 * "However, she hopes that her grunting doesn't disturb her opponents." - better: However, she has expressed her hopes that her grunting has no distrurbance on her opponents.
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:41, 6 January 2019 (UTC)

Coaches

 * "former Swedish professional tennis players Magnus Norman and also Magnus Tideman." - also in this section is text is redundant
 * Fixed. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:35, 6 January 2019 (UTC)