Talk:Así Fue/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MX (talk · contribs) 19:26, 9 January 2019 (UTC)

Review
Article is short and ripe for promotion. Please stay tuned for more information. MX ( ✉  •  ✎  ) 19:26, 9 January 2019 (UTC)

Below is the full review. I will re-read it again later tonight, but I found no major issues. Placing article on hold. MX ( ✉  •  ✎  ) 20:00, 9 January 2019 (UTC)

Lead paragraph

 * – sections says it was the boyfriend. Please reconcile the information.


 * – I would stick with "Juan Gabriel" throughout the entire article. Gabriel is not a surname and from what I've gathered by reading online (and being from Mexico myself), we use "Juan Gabriel" in all mentions.


 * – There are a few things in the infobox that are not cited in the body and need to be, per WP:INFOBOXCITE. I think we discussed this before in one of your past GAs, so let me know what does not need a reference here. But here are a few things uncited: B-side "Ojos Azules Como el Mar", Length	5:25, Label RCA.

Background and release

 * – Should you word to: "... an album written and produced by José Luis Perales"? Not sure what "with track" means, but if it can be merged for better flow, the better.


 * – remove "Panoja" or "her".


 * – Tú

Juan Gabriel version

 * – Should be be Juan Gabriel's version? Not sure.


 * – I would recommend you move the "in Mexico City" phrase to the first mention of Palacio de Bellas Artes in the first section. You don't want to confuse readers that there could potentially be two palaces in different cities and that you're trying to differentiate.


 * – per above, a few things uncited: B-side Ya No Vuelvo a Molestarte, Length 5:50, and Label BMG.

Other cover versions

 * – Juárez