Talk:Asama-Sansō incident/GA1

GA Review
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I have decided to pass this article for GA. In my opinion it is interesting, well written and well sourced, although it could stand to be a bit longer and more detailed on the longer term effects of the incident. (An image would be nice as well). I have two minor comments below which are not significant enough to hold up promotion, and I have conducted a simple copyedit on the article. Congratulations.--Jackyd101 (talk) 23:05, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
 * What other incidents mentioned in background preceeded the incident? This might actually be another article's territory, but I'm still curious.
 * Without getting too graphic, in what manner were the beating deaths conducted? i.e. were they ritual? sudden? How did approximately half the group manage to kill the other half apparently unopposed?
 * Thank you for taking the time to review the article. Those are good questions and I'm going to try to find more sourced information to answer them in the article.  Thanks again. Cla68 (talk) 23:41, 29 May 2008 (UTC)