Talk:Asher Vollmer/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rhain1999 (talk · contribs) 01:23, 17 May 2015 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * "he was found himself playing with the arrow keys" - "was" appears to be a typo.
 * You could add the year of release after the mention of some games (for example, "Drop7 (2009)"), though I'll leave this up to you.
 * "Vollmer unveiled Close Castles in 2014." Is it possible to include the month of the unveiling?

Some very minor grammar/punctuation concerns (two of which are simply requests, not even requirements). It's great to see other articles about game developers nominated for GA (I've recently embarked on a similar project). I'll leave this on hold until I receive a reply, but it shouldn't be long before this is passed. Really great work on this. -- Rhain1999  (talk to me 01:23, 17 May 2015 (UTC)
 * , thanks! I made the changes, if you'll take a look. – czar   01:58, 17 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for addressing those concerns so quickly. Everything looks good to me! Here you go: . -- Rhain1999  (talk to me 02:06, 17 May 2015 (UTC)