Talk:Asian house martin/GA1

GA Review
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Overview
Looks pretty good from a lookover. Comments below.

Comments

 * Prose - It is mainly blue-black above, apart from its white rump, and has pale grey underparts. above where? Should be explained here in addition to being explained further in the article.
 * It has mainly blue-black upperparts, other than its white rump, and has pale grey underparts  Jimfbleak  -  talk to me?  08:08, 27 December 2009 (UTC)


 * Its three subspecies breed in the Himalayas and in central and eastern Asia, and winter lower in the mountains or in Southeast Asia.. - Ambiguous; "and winter..."
 *  and spend the winter lower in the mountains or in Southeast Asia.  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  08:10, 27 December 2009 (UTC)


 * Sources - Look good.
 * Images - Look good.

Final Review
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:


 * Comment, fix the prose niggles and this should be ready for GA.  ceran  thor 19:23, 26 December 2009 (UTC)

Reviewer:  ceran  thor 19:23, 26 December 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for taking the time to review. Are the changes above OK - I wasn't sure quite what the ambiguity was in the second one?  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  08:10, 27 December 2009 (UTC)
 * I just got back from Maryland, sorry. Thank you for making the changes, I am now passing this article. Congrats.  ceran  thor 13:18, 31 December 2009 (UTC)