Talk:Asikni (goddess)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cerebellum (talk · contribs) 09:57, 7 June 2021 (UTC)

Hello, I will be reviewing this article. --Cerebellum (talk) 09:57, 7 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you. . 245CMR . •👥📜 10:25, 7 June 2021 (UTC)

Good work on this article! Just a couple comments below, the only one that is a showstopper for GA is the page numbers for citations. I'll place the article on hold until you can add those. --Cerebellum (talk) 10:51, 8 June 2021 (UTC)

Comments

 * WP:LEADCITE, it is up to your discretion but you do not need citations in the lead if the information is cited in the body.
 * ✅, Moved to body. . 245CMR . •👥📜 12:29, 8 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Our article Prajapati does not italicize the term, what is the reason for the italics?
 * The word Prajapati refers to a creator deity (Brahma), as well as a group of deities who help Brahma in creation. Here Prajapati is a title.


 * The word "Asikni" means "dark" or "not white". I would add "in Sanskrit" for clarity.
 * Changed to The Sanskit word "Asikni" means "dark" or "not white".


 * The word is used in the Rigveda (c. 1500 BCE) to describe the river Chenab. WP:CITEKILL, you have four citations for this sentence but only need one.


 * The second image is the family tree for Surya, but the article never mentions Surya. I would remove the image or add info on Surya to the article text.
 * Changed caption to "Like many other deities, the sun god Surya descended from Daksha and Panchajani (Asikni)." Asikni's daughters being progenitors is mentioned in the body.


 * Some references are missing page numbers, for example 1, 2, 3. This is important for the GA criteria.
 * Added for most sources, but Debroy (Harivamsha) and AC Prabhupada (Bhagavata Purana) doesn't provide page numbers.


 * Are there articles on the Hindi (or other Indian language) wikipedia for Virana or Panchajana? If so you can link them using the interlanguage link template, like this: Jamal al-Din al-Watwat.
 * No there is no such article. He is not notable and nothing is known about him other than him being a Prajapati and Asikni's father. . 245CMR . •👥📜 11:07, 8 June 2021 (UTC)

--Cerebellum (talk) 10:51, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
 * I have finished the corrections, you may check. . 245CMR . •👥📜 12:29, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Great thank you for the fast response!! Pass. --Cerebellum (talk) 13:18, 8 June 2021 (UTC)

Thank you very much. . 245CMR . •👥📜 13:33, 8 June 2021 (UTC)