Talk:Asmara Moerni/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 14:09, 11 August 2013 (UTC)


 * In the lead you seem to assert that the film is certainly lost but in the lower section you say "The film is likely lost" which confuses me a little. Perhaps say that the film is considered to be lost in both?
 * Fixed. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 21:25, 11 August 2013 (UTC)
 * No imdb entry on the film?
 * None that I could find. These early Indonesian films don't have much of a presence on the Western databases. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 21:25, 11 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Makes you wonder how many notable films are missing for other non Anglo countries on there!♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld  21:29, 11 August 2013 (UTC)


 * filmindonesia.or.id I gather is a reliable source?
 * Short answer: Yes, as a digitalization of Kristanto's Katalog Film Indonesia. Longer answer at Template:Did you know nominations/Panggilan Darah. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 21:25, 11 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Yes I thought it would be fine, I'm just trying to be picky on an article which is as sound as a pound!!♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld  21:29, 11 August 2013 (UTC)


 * A novelisation was later published by the Yogyakarta-based Kolff-Buning. Do you have the year of publication?
 * Yes, done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 21:25, 11 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Perhaps you could say "production house Tan's Film" as by itself it sort of looks like it is referring to the film of a director!
 * Alright, done. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 21:25, 11 August 2013 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:

Very difficult to find any fault with this... It is technically sound and I'd imagine that you've already done well to find so much on a 1941 Indonesian film.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld  18:11, 11 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 21:36, 11 August 2013 (UTC)