Talk:Assassin's Creed Odyssey/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: PerryPerryD (talk · contribs) 19:43, 3 March 2022 (UTC)

Hello. I am PerryPerryD, I will be reviewing this article thoroughly to the best of my ability, Due to the size of this article and high number of sources (Both are good things), I do request the help of other editors to speed up this process and catch anything I may have missed. Best of luck.

Just a quick personal note unrelated to this review. This will be my final GA Review for a while. With that being said, I will now begin. PerryPerryD 18:19, 5 March 2022 (UTC)

Citations, Noting by the names attached to the citations alone, I can verify that they come from reliable sources, such as IGN and Gameinformer. I have seen reliable information come from these sources in the past, and I have good faith that they are accurate and equal weighted. I am going to re-read the article carefully, and check for conflicting information.

After carefully re-reading this article multiple times, I can verify that all claims are sourced properly with third party sources. I give a pass on citations. PerryPerryD 16:35, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

MOS,

These are general notes for the manual of style itself, Each note will describe a section of interest.

"They also need to equip the player character with armor, boots, helmets and gloves" I would advise changing this to "The player may also need to equip armor. boots, helmets, and gloves". PerryPerryD 16:35, 7 March 2022 (UTC)


 * Self-Fixed PerryPerryD 18:54, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

In terms of weight, I am considering placing the review on a one week hold due to the dlc discussion in talk, However, other than that, the article is equally weighted and balanced. PerryPerryD 16:35, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

"The world of Greece was designed to be "colorful" and "vibrant," and each region was given a unique visual characteristic" If you are quoting someone, please say their name. i.e john smith said "the world of greece...". PerryPerryD 16:35, 7 March 2022 (UTC)


 * Self-Fixed. All that remains is the dlc discussion. PerryPerryD 19:13, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

"(then codenamed "Project Stream")" Cite Please. PerryPerryD 16:35, 7 March 2022 (UTC)


 * Self-Fixed PerryPerryD 19:02, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

"Loveridge believed that Odyssey had refined and streamlined elements from Origins, making it a more enjoyable experience." Please use quotations around words like "Enjoyable Experience" if they are used in a review to defer you from Loveridge to prevent balancing issues. PerryPerryD 18:54, 7 March 2022 (UTC)


 * Self-Fixed PerryPerryD 18:55, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

"In its week of release, Assassin's Creed Odyssey was the second best-selling retail game in the UK, only behind FIFA 18. " Not required for GA, but I would advise removing this detail due to WP:GAMECRUFT. PerryPerryD 16:35, 7 March 2022 (UTC)


 * Self-Fixed PerryPerryD 19:00, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

Due to the revisions in regards to dlc, due to the revisions being 3 and not 4, It does not count as edit-warring, however. With the dlc situation I will be putting the review on hold. PerryPerryD 16:35, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

Structure, The structure of this article is in-line with the advised template. Pass. PerryPerryD 16:35, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

Media, the article features screenshots of the game and in context images with the sections of the article. All images are not in copyright violation, so Pass. PerryPerryD 16:35, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

As far as i can tell, Due weight was given to each section, and no clear bias is shown. Pass. PerryPerryD 16:35, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

With the issues i stated above, mainly the DLC issue, I am placing this article on a 7 day hold. Please try to fix these issues as much as you can. Thank you. PerryPerryD 16:35, 7 March 2022 (UTC)


 * I intentionally signed every note here to allow an easy reply once said issue is fixed. PerryPerryD 16:49, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

I have self fixed the issues listed, and the DLC situation appears to have been resolved. Therefor i see absolutely no reason to deny this article. Congratulations. — Preceding unsigned comment added by PerryPerryD (talk • contribs) 19:31, 7 March 2022 (UTC)