Talk:Assassin's Creed Origins/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: ProtoDrake (talk · contribs) 23:45, 25 February 2021 (UTC)

I'll take this one on. If I haven't gotten back with comments and suchlike by Friday next week, ping me. --ProtoDrake (talk) 23:45, 25 February 2021 (UTC)

It's generally looking very good. One think I'd ask, is there a different but still illustrative gameplay image you could use? That one's cropped almost to 4:3, when the original game's 16:9, and chops out UI elements. I looked at the image history and saw your original upload had a watermark, but is there a different image you could use? --ProtoDrake (talk) 19:41, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I have uploaded a new screenshot. OceanHok (talk) 09:52, 6 March 2021 (UTC)

Alright, here's my review comments. Also, last note on the gameplay image. The image's name and summary section are now inaccurate, and you didn't update the image source. --ProtoDrake (talk) 15:00, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Comments
 * The statement in the lead about the ratio of developers is the reverse of what's described in the Dev section. Which is correct?
 * In "Gameplay", do we need to know Bayak's story role for the gameplay? You can just transfer the links to the Plot section.
 * In the Plot section, do we need to define Akhenaten as monotheistic, unless it's specifically a mentioned and important point in-game? Can't we just say he worshipped the PoE as the Aten?
 * In "Development", there's excessive repetition of 'the team'.
 * There's no need to link US Gamer, just say "in a later interview" or something similar.
 * "Actress Alix Wilton Regan voiced Aya..[53]" - Two full stops.
 * In "Release", I can't see anything about the Amazon Luna release.
 * In "Reception", it's not strictly a fail factor I think, but there's rather a lot of quotes used in the prose.
 * - I think I have addressed most of the problems listed here. I cannot find a source that explictly say Origins was added to Amazon Luna (though I can find news about Ubisoft+ which contains Origins launching on Luna). OceanHok (talk) 17:10, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the long delay for a reply. I think this article merits as a Pass. --ProtoDrake (talk) 16:01, 12 March 2021 (UTC)