Talk:Assassination of Talaat Pasha/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Guettarda (talk · contribs) 18:32, 24 April 2021 (UTC) This is a fascinating read, and something a knew nothing about. Guettarda (talk) 18:32, 24 April 2021 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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This is excellent. I have very little to add.

Talat Pasha's exile in Berlin

 * Neubabelsberg redirects to Babelsberg; I'm not sure if it needs a link to Neubabelsberg
 * Removed

Other testimony on the genocide

 * Is Mr. Terzibashian's first name known?
 * No, I checked the original trial transcript and it's not stated. Same with the prosecutor, Gollnick, whose first name is not stated in any source.
 * The following section begins with "His wife Christine..." A new section should be more "stand alone".
 * Reworded, thank you!

General
Guettarda (talk) 23:13, 24 April 2021 (UTC)
 * I'm curious about the choice to refer to Adolf von Gordon as "Gordon" rather than "von Gordon"
 * I double checked and that's the form both Hofmann and Ihrig use. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  01:40, 25 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Tessa Hofmann is linked twice in the body of the article, as is Carolyn Dean.
 * I feel like these mentions are too sparse and far apart so that the reader has likely forgotten who they were before getting to the second mention. (t &#183; c)  buidhe  01:40, 25 April 2021 (UTC)
 * Guettarda I believe I've addressed everything above. Thanks for reviewing the article! (t &#183; c)  buidhe  01:40, 25 April 2021 (UTC)