Talk:Astoria Park/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

 * Add alt text to every image being used.
 * "pool and bathhouse was" "pool and bathhouse were"
 * Remove the comma after "glass brick columns".
 * "local resident" - is "local" necessary (both times)?
 * "grand stands" should be one word.
 * "play field" should be one word.
 * "a playground and a restroom on the pool's southwest side was" "a playground and a restroom on the pool's southwest side were"
 * "northern playground and its restroom was" "northern playground and its restroom were"
 * "Ssome" - typo?
 * Wikilink The New York Times and Robert Moses.

Progress

 * Thanks. I've fixed all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 01:05, 10 July 2021 (UTC)