Talk:Astrology/Archive 17

We're exactly nowhere, so back to basics
Reading the most recent discussions about astrology I am struck by the evidence of a fervent desire by some of the editors here to plead for an understanding and accommodation of their personal beliefs. Knowing I'll be burnt in effigy for saying so, I'm nevertheless bound to say that this is not what encylcopaedia are about. It is telling that a recent post suggested that the 'pro-astrology' ideas of banned editors be resurrected! So that the same arguments will be mounted again and again? If that is to be the case, the entry for astrology should read only: 'it is such an arcane branch of knowledge, beliefs and practice that it cannot be adequately defined in clear, plain English'. Is that really what anyone here wants?

So let's go back to basics. It seems already agreed that astrology concerns a set of practices and beliefs. Beliefs begin with epistemological assumptions and taxonomy, which lead to ontological propositions, including those about praxis. Each step in the journey through these steps in determining the nature of astrology closes off avenues not chosen, and therefore not available as defining features as well as those that were chosen. White can't be white as as well as black because that would make it gray, and thus neither white nor black. Taxonomy alone tells us that astrology is other than scientific. This doesn't make astrology 'wrong' or 'right'. It just makes it a methodology to derive meaning about people and events that cannot label itself a science while also remaining aloof from scientific methodology. To argue ad nauseam that astrology should not be discounted as a science, or that it deserves the same status as science, is an ideological, futile claim analogous to arguing that Soviet communism was a branch of Western capitalism. If that claim were to be made nonetheless, it must be subject to a credible cited reference in an appropriate section about opinions or controversies or contradictions.

On that basis I propose that we stop being 'sensitive' to those who want to have their cake and eat it too, and we shorten the introduction considerably to remove from it the currently implied notion that there is still somehow some doubt about the scientific status of astrology, or some 'special' status that deserves endless semiotic hair-splitting.

I propose the following --


 * Astrology is a metaphysical belief system relying on a set of traditions and practices to derive from observed positions of planets and stars information or meaning about human personality and activities, and about natural events. Characterized as a pseudoscience because its methodology is counter-scientific, it is nevertheless a craft practised by astrologers from antiquity to the modern era.


 * The word "astrology" comes from the Latin term astrologia ("astronomy"), which in turn derives from the Greek noun αστρολογία: ἄστρον, astron ("constellation" or "celestial body") and -λογία, -logia ("the study of"). Originally astronomy and astrology were closely linked by many scholars in theory and practice until the emergence of the discrete scientific discipline of astronomy during the European Renaissance.

The intro shouldn't be much longer than this. Other controversies, facets, intricacies and variants on themes belong in the body of the article, and can be labelled as such there.

As a complete aside, I got to the Wikipedia astrology page by way of a search for Mayan belief systems completely unrelated to my activities as a Wikipedia editor, and I was disappointed to see Mayan civilization mentioned by name without any detail or sources to tell me why the Mayans had been invoked here at all. In other words, we are still debating the semantics of the introduction but we appear to have some other problems elsewhere in the article we haven't even considered yet.

Regards Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   16:40, 22 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Since a huge amount of astrological verbiage is dedicated to denying that it's a pseudoscience, we do need to be clear in the lede that it is a pseudoscience. — kwami (talk) 20:32, 22 March 2011 (UTC)

The Astrology Page is not for that. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, it is not a place to conclude what is deemed a 'science' or what is deemed a 'pseudoscience.' Those arguments are more than specious and wholly ideological POV. It comes from those who need to clearly understand what an encyclopedia is - a vessel for as much knowledge as possible on any subject.

The so-called 'astrological verbiage' belongs on the subject of Astrology. Moreover, after a thorough review of the edits on the Astrology Page, I have found that not one editor on this topic has conclusively proven that Astrology is indeed a 'pseudoscience.' Not one.

Those demanding the 'pseudoscience' tag are clearly ideological and pushing POV that has no place on Wikipedia.

Moreover, the editors who were banned should be immediately unbanned as to allow the discussion to continue, showing Wikipedia Good Faith. One does not deny knowledge on any encyclopedia, but includes it.

Anyone who supports the 'ban' is therefore ideological and against the very concept of an encyclopedia and Wikipedia's guidelines of good faith. Eagle Eye 21:09, 22 March 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by EagleEye (talk • contribs)
 * We don't need to prove that Astrology is a pseudoscience. We just need to show that this is the general viewpoint. This has been shown by the fact that 3 our of 4 encyclopedias refer to astrology as a pseudoscience. (the 4th uses a euphemism to the same effect). This is a POV that is true, but it is the dominant pov, and therefore according to WP:NPOV this is the viewpoint that should dominate the article. NPOV doesn't mean no criticism. It means weighing viewpoints according to their degree of general acceptance. It is generally accepted that Astrology is a pseudoscience. Therefore we write this.·Maunus· ƛ · 23:08, 22 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Kwami, what are you getting at? Is my draft wording too unclear?  Do you have alternative wording in mind?  Maunus, you are persuasive, but I think it won't matter what you say to committed astrological contrarians.  EagleEye, your argument didn't fly in December 2008, January 2009, and won't do as a recycled time-waster now.  Complaints about user bans should be taken up in the appropriate administrator forum, but then you know that, don't you.  BTW, your idiom has changed remarkably since December 2008. Been taking classes?  It shows: much more elegant now than in 2008, but still not quite as crisp as it was in 2006.  Regards -  Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   00:49, 23 March 2011 (UTC)

Peter, what my 'argument was in December 2008 has nothing to do with what we are talking about today. Moreover, you are in no position to tell me what my 'idiom' is? If you are to focus on the quality of the Page, then I suggest you focus on raising the quality of the page itself, rather than in member bashing - that fosters negativity, is rude, presumptuous and goes against Wikipedia's guidelines. Try maintaining good relations, assuming good faith, rather than using such specious comments which have nothing to do with improving the quality of the page. Cheers. Eagle Eye 05:56, 23 March 2011 (UTC)


 * "Characterized as a pseudoscience" suggests that there's legitimate debate on the issue. The debate is framed in such a way that "consider" and "characterize" do not mean scientific consensus, but rather merely one POV out of many: Some scientists characterize it as a pseudoscience, but there has also been empirical support, and it's too early to know who will be proven right. There are innumerable variations on that argument, as when denying the validity of any consensus. What I've seen lately is that all of the empirical studies that have falsified astrology were based on misconceptions as to what it claims, that there have since been better-designed studies which support it, and that the scientific consensus is shifting toward support. So generally scientists consider it to be a PS, but their arguments are dated, and we are beginning to see the Truth. — kwami (talk) 01:59, 23 March 2011 (UTC)

Kwami, this debate has been put, resolved, disputed, and ruled on (see template at the top of this page). Unless and until your POV gains credibility through specific and credible references, the 2006 ruling stands. If you want to argue that ruling, do it on an administrator page, not here. Move on. Regards Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   02:42, 23 March 2011 (UTC)


 * ...And if and when the scientific community recognises this 'Truth', we can revise the article. Until then, since astrology is making claims that are testable by scientific methods, but have not as yet been supported by such tests, it must be referred to as pseudoscience. You can't have it both ways. Saying it is 'True', and 'will later be shown to be by science' is a statement of belief, not of scientific reasoning, and basing claims of scientific 'truth' on faith is pseudoscience. AndyTheGrump (talk) 02:40, 23 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Who are you addressing? — kwami (talk) 02:53, 23 March 2011 (UTC)
 * You, kwami. Don't you recognise your own argument?   Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   03:05, 23 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I was showing why we shouldn't allow a foot in the door for that argument, not supporting the argument itself. But you see how easy it is to take "generally" or "characterize" to mean that there is legitimate debate. (Which, in case I'm still not being clear, there is not: Astrology is pseudoscience. Period.) — kwami (talk) 03:09, 23 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Agreed. The burden of proof lies on those who make claim that astrology works, because extraordinary claims require extraordinary evidence.  Noting that this article completely lacks any serious supporting evidence, that, in itself, supports the claim that it is pseudoscience.  And since it is pseudoscience by any definition, I'm not sure what else there is. Orange Marlin  Talk• Contributions 03:31, 23 March 2011 (UTC)
 * The way I read it neither AndyTheGrump nor I were confused at all about what we said. Until you, kwami, are published in a credible source, we are, alas, stuck with citing sources that fit that description.  Nothing in an encyclopaedia just is; there must always be sources to cite who said so.  We have the citation for who said astrology is a pseudoscience and no one appears overly confused about that, or are you, kwami?  The word 'characterized' can be replaced easily enough.  Nominate your alternative. Regards  Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   03:44, 23 March 2011 (UTC)

Synthesizing comments above, what about altering my proposed first sentence to read -
 * Astrology is a pseudoscientific, metaphysical belief system relying on a set of traditions and practices to derive from observed positions of celestial bodies meaning about human personality and activities, and about natural events.

This phrasing asserts pseudoscientific status (which I think was what kwami required), and refers to celestial bodies instead of specifying stars, planets and detritus (which I think addresses the quibble kwami had about mentioning stars).

Regards Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   04:46, 23 March 2011 (UTC)


 * We once worded it similarly, but removed "pseudoscientific" as the first adjective after arguments that being pseudoscientific is not essential to astrology the way being divinational or about the planets is essential. That is, it is in essence astromancy, and it is the astro- (planets) and -mancy (divination) parts which are what it "is". Being pseudoscientific is a secondary matter. That was our one concession to the astrologers, as we thought they had a valid point in this case. — kwami (talk) 18:54, 23 March 2011 (UTC)

Peter, while I agree with you on being clear and concise, the above phrasing asserts something that has not be proved. It is conjecture that Astrology is a psedudoscientific..." I'm sure that a sentence, even a well-written paragraph could easily deal with the arguments about using this term, however, from the looks of it, what I understand is that those who want the term 'pseudoscience' placed high up are simply pushing POV - a clear sign of it. However, I do appreciate your work in trying to get common sense back into quality depictions that are concise and non-POV.Eagle Eye 05:45, 23 March 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by EagleEye (talk • contribs) Eagle Eye 05:56, 23 March 2011 (UTC)


 * EagleEye: the matter of pesudoscience and POV has been adjudicated and arbitrated. We cannot address that decision here.  If you feel it needs to be re-examined, go to the relevant administrator pages and raise your concerns there.  Until the 2006 arbitration is overturned, 'pseudoscientific' stays as the correct phrasing.  The scientific or other basis for that arbitration is not a valid subject for discussion here at all.  Regards  Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   05:59, 23 March 2011 (UTC)

17 edits, five users, less than 24 hours
This is insane, people. It's supposed to be an article, not quicksilver. So many edits so quickly, and yet the quality of the edits has done nothing to clarify the introduction. For example, what's this nonsense about astrology not really being about the position of the stars rather than planets, said in the same breath as emphasising the position of the planets in relation to the signs of the zodiac, which are incontrovertibly comprised entirely of stars? Pure internal contradiction, stemming from unclear thinking.

Why do we need to place the entire debate about astrology in the opening paragraphs? Every ill-considered wording tweak destroys the integrity of any sentence as a whole. Why rush into these edits? It's already clear that someone will undo/edit/revert soon enough if some kind of agreement isn't reached in talk first. Have you five recent editors read what the page now says? It's pretty close to meaningless gibberish, and will be different again by the time I finish this comment.

Regards Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   02:20, 23 March 2011 (UTC)


 * The signs of the zodiac have nothing to do with the stars, apart from being named after constellations. The ref under naming, from a well-respected astrologer, even goes so far as to say that "astrology" is a misnomer and that it should be "planetology". (A sign of the zodiac is 30° of space orientated relative to the vernal equinox. The names for the signs come from the constellations that happened to occupy them 3000 years ago. In Hindu astrology the signs are fixed relative to the stars, but they are not equivalent to the constellations, which are not 30° across.) The fact that so many people don't realize that is precisely the reason for presenting the issue up front.
 * Anything else you see that is gibberish, and wasn't before? — kwami (talk) 02:27, 23 March 2011 (UTC)


 * So the zodiac has nothing to do with stars, except for being named after them, and being based on 30 degrees of arc relative to one of them (Sol), and being based on the movement of the planets relative to Sol and therefore all the stars in our galaxy? Is that right?  And all stars in every constellation associated with the Zodiac are 3000 light years away?  Is that right?  Otherwise it would be impossible to claim that the constellations we speak of are composed of 3000-year-old stellar positions relative to ours!  Give me a credible reference for 'well-respected astrologer' and I'll accept that characterisation.  Gibberish and sophistry.  It goes to what I said last night: you cannot insist on non-scientific methodology as well as scientific status.  Your POV has been put, tested, found wanting and ruled on.  Move on.  Regards  Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   02:56, 23 March 2011 (UTC)


 * I think you've misread what I wrote. If you think there's a connection to the stars, other than the trivial one of naming, and apart from Sol (that is, to the fixed stars, which is what non-astronomers generally mean when they say "stars"), please say what you think it is. — kwami (talk) 03:01, 23 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Correct that: even astronomers are probably not thinking of Sol when they use the phrase "the stars" colloquially. In any case, that's how I intended the phrase above. — kwami (talk) 03:03, 23 March 2011 (UTC)


 * I read what you wrote, not your mind. The more you write about this topic, the less clear your meaning becomes, and the less relevant the discussion becomes to this page.  Move on.  Regards  Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   03:29, 23 March 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Peter. He's right. There is no need to place the entire debate about astrology in the opening paragraphs? Correct. He's spot on. Finally, a person who gets what an encyclopedia actually is supposed to be.

Also, there's plenty of room on the Astrology Page to include arguments for and against, since this topic is historical as well as relevant. People can think what they want to, but the point of Wikipedia is not pushing POV ideology onto the reader. Let the reader make his/her mind as what to think about the topic.

This subject requires clear, concise writing that is neutral as possible, wholly inclusive, which also includes the history of astrology, its relevance to scientific, religious and theological streams, etc. Those who are exclusionary and biased should question their own reasons for banning those knowledgeable about this topic and stop with the games. It is against what Wikipedia is about and does not foster good intentions, or community.

Whether or not it Astrology is considered to be a 'pseudo-science,' by some is not the point of the Astrology Page, nor has it been proven that Astrology is one. This is not the point.

I agree with Peter in getting things clear and concise without the POV. He's right. Let's stop with the silliness and get back to the work of getting the best page possible. It would also help that the personality bashing and banning of Wikipedians with knowledge of this subject cease immediately. That is not practicing 'good faith' and is hypocritical to say the least.Eagle Eye 05:35, 23 March 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by EagleEye (talk • contribs)

Proposed 29 March edits from Peter S Strempel - now moved to workpage for editing and discussion
Just so no one can announce surprise at my proposed edits on 29 March, here's what I have in mind if no citations are added for the material I intend to redact.
 * See Talk:Astrology/Workpage. Moreschi (talk) 11:30, 23 March 2011 (UTC)

Before responding, consider the following -- Arguments that references are provided in linked sections are not persuasive: what if those linked artyicles change? Besides, Wikipedia should not cite Wikipedia. If the references/citations are valid, repeat them on this page.

Any text referenced by a citation that throws an error for lack of necessary detail (see 47 in this example) will also be deleted.

Infoboxes and diagrams/illustrations are not being considered by me for any redaction at this time.

Proposed edit starts — - see Talk:Astrology/Workpage - Moreschi (talk) 11:30, 23 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Yes, there is some good info there, but it should all be verifiable. We need to ref things if they're "likely to be challenged", and nearly everything about astrology is likely to be challenged. — kwami (talk) 18:41, 23 March 2011 (UTC)

Astrology bannings
Please see. Moreschi (talk) 16:53, 21 March 2011 (UTC)
 * PS - do people want this unprotected now? Moreschi (talk) 20:53, 21 March 2011 (UTC)


 * What do you think would be best, considering we should probably restore some of the deleted content (see next)? — kwami (talk) 22:53, 21 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Give it a try, but semi-protection should remain in place. If more meet up and behave the same way, just revert and move on. -- Brangifer (talk) 05:08, 22 March 2011 (UTC)

A couple of things on the bans - first, it is childish, but I am not surprised that it has once again happened on this topic.

One of the problems with those who say they are anti-astrology is that these are the people most unqualified to write on the topic.

It is odd that those with knowledge of the topic, mainly astrologers who have studied the subject, or those who are historians of astrology, would be 'banned,' citing POV. Is not Wikipedia an encyclopedia?

Those citing 'pseudoscience' have not proven their case against Astrology at all. Opinion is one thing, but facts are another. Astrology has plenty of history to include, so those who complain loudly are those who are pushing personal views onto an encyclopedia - which has no place.

Moreover, the subject can be argued on the Talk Page, but the constant POV and personal bias on astrology has disrupted the Astrolog Page. Moreover, if Astrology was a pseudo-science, we've seen no evidence, nor proof on this matter, but conjecture and opinion.
 * That is because astrology is not seriously studied by scientists, because the assumption is that it is not worth researching. No one researches the virgin birth either. User:Fred Bauder Talk 01:35, 25 March 2011 (UTC)

Another thing is that arguments 'for' or 'against' astrology, including those who have obvious POV on this topic belongs elsewhere and not on the Astrology Page. The point of any Wikipedia page is to provide as much knowledge as possible on any subject, again, in encyclopedia form.

These 'bans' clearly show that the person who instigated and enforced the bans should be removed since they obviously are not well-informed on the subject, nor on Wikipedia's guidelines on POV. Eagle Eye 20:57, 22 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Given the fact that you haven't edited the encyclopedia for 2 years I'm assuming one of your buddies was banned and now you've come here to express your opinion on the matter. Please do not pick up where they left off.  On the other hand, now that you're back here please do put yourself to work on any of our millions of articles that all need attention.  Cheers.Griswaldo (talk) 20:50, 22 March 2011 (UTC)

Actually Griswaldo, you assumed wrong. You see, this is the problem here. You make a presumption, then run with it as if it were true when it is not. I do not know any of the people you assume are my 'buddies.' This is a clear example of POV that does not follow Wikipeda's guidelines of being neutral. This is an encyclopedia Griswaldo, it is not a place for you to rooster sit on a topic you obviously have problems with yourself. The Astrology page is also one of those 'millions' of articles on Wikipedia that need attention. What is your point? Cheers.Eagle Eye 20:57, 22 March 2011 (UTC)

References needed
The 'citations needed' template I have just applied to the article in various places indicates that much of the description of what astrology was in the past and is today, what its practices were in the past and are today, is badly referenced. A corollary is that the needlessly wordy introduction to the article summarizes content that could be justly regarded as contrived or unfounded.

It appears that the sections on Indian astrology and scientific debate about astrology are indeed well sourced. That suggests to me that the debate about pseudoscience, scientific status and 'truth' has been settled some time ago by the principles of notability and credibility as recognized in Wikipedia.

If citations cannot be provided for assertions, these should be removed. This is particularly the case with a topic as hotly disputed as this one has been. I think it reasonable to allow a week before I start removing unreferenced assertions. I am going to do so openly, stating my reasons on this page before editing anything. In the meantime, I intend to bring any vexatious or tediously repetitive debate about the need for citations to an arbitration rather than to allow it to drag out the process of creating a creditable article here forever: three-and-a-bit-years is long enough. It is time to assert that this article is not subject to whim, fancy or subversion by edit warring.

Regards Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   05:46, 23 March 2011 (UTC)

I have no problem with this, but first, the issues regarding the bans should be settled. It does not follow the practice of 'good faith.' The edit warring comes from those who aggressively edit before allowing what was edited to be digested. Moreover, how many 'citations' do you require before this page becomes cluttered to read more like a dissertation or legal document than an encyclopedia page? Let's not go 'citation crazy' here. References at the end of the page are wholly sufficient.--Eagle Eye 06:05, 23 March 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by EagleEye (talk • contribs)


 * I could not disagree with you more. I have already addressed the issue of the bans.  References are absolutely needed for every assertion in what is unarguably a controversial and hotly disputed topic.  The page is not some fire-side chat, but an attempt to provide authoritative information that will bear all rational scrutiny.  So, when someone tells me, for example, that 'there are many astrological traditions that are historically important, but which have largely fallen out of use', I want to know who, specifically, says so, and preferably also some examples.  Making the bare assertion without a citation is the same as free invention, even if references exist but are not cited.  If citations aren't given, assertions should be removed.  This is fairly basic Wikipedia policy.  See Verifiability: 'The threshold for inclusion in Wikipedia is verifiability, not truth; that is, whether readers can check that material in Wikipedia has already been published by a reliable source, not whether editors think it is true.'  Let's get it all out in the open and cut out everything that can't be justified.  Regards  Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   07:07, 23 March 2011 (UTC)

Nonetheless, this is obviously not the intent on the Astrology Page. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, and citations, references are included to enhance the information given on the page. It is not included mainly for verifiability. As a professional writer I know the difference. Readers can link to citations and references so they can enhance the information, not merely to assess it something is said to be 'true' or not. That assumes that anyone who writes anything on a page can determine what the 'truth' is or is not. That is personal and has nothing to do with an encyclopedia. Readers can think for themselves. It is not the job of anyone to tell the reader what to think.--Eagle Eye 01:11, 27 March 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by EagleEye (talk • contribs)


 * Yes, controversial topics should read like a dissertation, if people are willing to put in the work. Read the Israel & Palestine articles. — kwami (talk) 07:29, 23 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Per WP:PROVEIT, any unsourced information could be removed now. If information is controversial, it needs a source.  If information is uncontroversial, it should be easy to provide a source.  Either way - source.  WLU (t) (c) Wikipedia's rules: simple/complex 11:03, 24 March 2011 (UTC)

Science as a matter of law
This is truly remarkable. User:Fred Bauder Talk 23:12, 25 March 2011 (UTC)
 * "Astrology is a science, court rules" User:Fred Bauder Talk 01:00, 26 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Happy for you that this makes your day. The quotation is 'it is "science" in India', which really means that it ain't anywhere else.


 * I hope you read far enough to note: 'Advocate for Maharashtra government, Bharat Mehta too supported the stand taken by the Union government. Mehta submitted an affidavit filed by the food and drugs administration (FDA) department which said that necessary action is being taken against the guilty under the Drugs and Megical Remedies Act.' In other words, separate action is being taken to prevent people from selling snake oil remedies.


 * Cite the article, but don't join the legal action in these pages.

Regards Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   23:50, 25 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Fortunately, Wikipedia isn't bound by the laws of India. And neither is reality. Courts have tried before to make rulings on issues of scientific fact - and ended up looking stupid in consequence. We don't need to follow their lead. AndyTheGrump (talk) 01:20, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Well.........in Kitzmiller v. Dover Area School District, the court ruled that Intelligent design wasn't science. I happen to agree with that ruling.  :)   Orange Marlin  Talk• Contributions 01:24, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Yes, but they ruled that what was 'science' was determined by scientific consensus, not by the wishes of a POV-pushing minority. AndyTheGrump (talk) 01:31, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Where in the case did that ruling occur? My own amateur reading of the case notes suggests that the citatiuon was a viepoint being represented to the court, not as matter of fact, but as opinion.  Did I get that bit wrong?


 * Peter S Strempel &#124;  Talk   01:55, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
 * We're getting off topic. Yes Andy, you're right.  And I was also trying to be amusing.  :)  Peter....again, way off topic, but Dover lost the case on the facts and on the law.  In Federal Court, opinions=law, until overturned, and it was not overturned.  The US has a long history of case law that prevents the teaching of creationism in public schools.   Orange Marlin  Talk• Contributions 01:59, 26 March 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, Orange, I was talking re the Indian case, not Dover. I shoulda outdented my comment. Regards Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   08:23, 26 March 2011 (UTC)

Astrology as belief
We have lots of information on Wikipedia about Christianity, another elaborate set of beliefs and practices. We do not, I think, have edit wars over whether the resurrection or the virgin birth are scientific fact, nor do we label Christianity as "pseudoscience". Likewise, debates over the scientific basis for astrology should be rather short and to the point, it is dismissed by the scientific community and not researched. (Although there are some psychological possibilities with respect to personality of those who believe in astrology or are influenced by it.). Thus the bulk of the article should be material about the beliefs of astrologers and drawn from books expounding those beliefs. User:Fred Bauder Talk 01:45, 25 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Fine: "astrology is a religion followed by astrologers and their followers. Astrologers believe that...": now tell us where we can find reliable sources on what these beliefs are, on what competing strands of the astrology faith there are, etc. Find sources that tell us what, if any, sacred texts astrology has. Most importantly, find external sources that also discuss astrology as a faith: from theology, sociology, anthropology etc. Actually, I think that it makes a lot more sense to analyse astrology as 'religion' than as 'science', but unfortunately, the 'faithful' have persisted in making claims about it that clearly assert its 'scientific' credentials, in spite of evidence to the contrary. Fundamentalist Christianity is religion, but creationism driven by fundamentalist Christianity is a pseudoscience - because it asserts that 'science' is wrong. I think that by analogy, one should look at our article on creationism, and not on Christianity if one wishes how best to tackle the subject. AndyTheGrump (talk) 02:04, 25 March 2011 (UTC)
 * With respect to sources, you can start by searching for "astrology" on Amazon, "Showing 1 - 16 of 22,289 Results". As to creationism, I don't doubt there are similar problems there, but we are here now. Wikipedia has a neutral point of view policy, not a rational point of view policy. User:Fred Bauder Talk 13:43, 25 March 2011 (UTC)
 * (ec) Fred, there's a fundamental difference between astrology and Christianity. Christianity does not make predictions about the future based on an empirical method (if that is the right phrase). Astrology was a science. Christianity never has been. Your comparison is superficial. You also seem to have missed out on what happened here, which was a sustained campaign aimed at removing or de-emphasizing "pseudoscience" from the lede. See . And yes, arguably the "astrology and science" section is too long, but it's not grossly so IMHO. Moreschi (talk) 02:08, 25 March 2011 (UTC)
 * The nature of Christianity is not at issue here, but we do not hesitate to use the books of Christianity, a specialized press, if you will, to elaborate at length on the Christian world-view. As to missing out on the blow-by-blow, maybe, but I'm not new to the policy considerations involved, I drafted Requests for arbitration/Pseudoscience/Proposed decision. I will look into the editing history of the article and the talk page though. My notice of this dispute was here. Judging from the tone of this discussion, there seem to be issues with NPOV and reliable sources. User:Fred Bauder Talk 13:22, 25 March 2011 (UTC)
 * The nature of Christianity is at issue when you introduce Christianity as a point of comparison.Griswaldo (talk) 13:52, 25 March 2011 (UTC)




 * Griswaldo, sorry I overlooked your comment. Here's how I answer that: the entirely honourable intentions of many of our ancestors (or us) to represent their opinions has never been challenged.  What did occur was that for 30 years the Europeans (take note, Yanks, that incluees most of you) layed waste to their own homes and people.  It was such a destructive war that it is estimated  2/3 of all people living in the area known today as Germany were killed (raped, tortured, slain).  We will not repeat that horseshit here if I am still breathing.

The singular incidence of the 30 Years War entitles all who know about it to call the ensuing tendentious, sanctimonious bullshit exactly that.

I don't want to know what your faith or convictions are, and you insult me every time you assume I will change my mind if only you berated me some more. What I want to know is that I can trust you as a neighbour, friend, colleague. What I want to know is that I can leave children with you because you won't harm them. What I want to know is that I can trust you to look out for the best interests (not necessarily yours) of friends who come to my door and find me absent.

But Wikipedia doesn't care about that, so I don't waste sentimentality on it here. In my Wikipedia mode what I want to know is whether I could be confident defending your edit in front of any government in the world, and the highest courts in any land in Western civilization. If I can't be confident about that, the rest is indeed bullshit. Regards Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   00:24, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm 100% perplexed by this response. I was responding to Fred, who I took to be claiming that the nature of Christianity was not apropos to the discussion despite the fact that he compared Astrology to Christianity.  I have no idea what you mean by your response or why you responded to me at all.  Cheers.Griswaldo (talk) 03:08, 27 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Certainly; where we do not use the Bible - or try to avoid it, anyway - is in establishing actual historical facts. It is obviously fine to apply the works of modern astrologers to our section on, well, contemporary astrology for an "in-universe" perspective on what they do. It is not entirely clear to me, however, why such people and their works get much recognition, if any, when trying to write about the history of astrology - as some here have tried to make out. Moreschi (talk) 13:31, 25 March 2011 (UTC)

No, no, no. Mr Bauder, we will not repeat the faith-and-religion shit-fight here. We have an extensive discussion history and an extraordinary editing history; read it and digest before anyone starts this bullshit again. References. Sources. Citations. Rationality. Definitely. If I was a good guy, I'd even cite you the Wikipedia policies, but I expect you to find and read at least the hisory of this chat page on your own before spending any more time on well-known mountebank diversions.

If we do it the way you suggest, anyone could publish some words like: 'Peter Strempel is an unbearable pedant but why do all the gorgeous girls go for him.'. I'm sure that's not really what you want to be saying to the world. References. Sources. Citations. Rationality. That's how we do stuff here.

Let me see some proposed prose, plus citations.

Regards Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   10:35, 25 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Christianity is a religion with a moral system that tells you what you should do. Astrology is an ostensible divination/prediction system that tells you what will (supposedly) happen. Different. A moral system doesn't make testable predictions, it doesn't even try.  A divination system sets up testable predictions and purports to influence reality and thus an empirical system.  Not to mention the astrologers who have attempted to test the predictive value of astrology through scientific research.  I have no problem depicting astrology as a religion as long as we remove every and all mentions of astrology predicting or making claims about how the sun, moon, planets and stars can influence human personality and actions, and essentially any ability to exert a meaningful effect on events on earth in any way.  Makes for a short article.  WLU (t) (c) Wikipedia's rules: simple/complex 11:04, 25 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Fred, appreciate your opinion, but the specific context here matters. The debate was not about including details of what Astrologers think and do.  I, and others, asked for more of that.  The issue was how we should describe astrology's scientific status.  They are completely separate, and being strict (or rational) about one, since that's what RS overwhelmingly support, means nothing against richly describing what Astrologer's believe, think, do, and even 'wish or falsely hold as true, against or without evidence'.  Ocaasic 14:06, 25 March 2011 (UTC)

Apology
Dear all. It has been put to me that I have conducted myself uncivilly in these pages, that my words carried intimidating tone and intent, and that I have thus made Wikipedia a lesser place to visit and work.

To all who felt that this is what I did, I apologise unreservedly. This was never my intent, but I accept the need to ensure my words also don't create a doubt about this.

Following some reflection on comments made to me very courteously by Fred Bauder, I had reason to review exactly what I'd said and how I'd said it. Mr Bauder did indeed have a valid reason to tick me off. I did not assume good faith when I should have.

An issue that therefore arises is exactly what to do about preventing the relapse of this page into a fruitless and never ending spiral of circular arguments about metaphysical aspects of astrology. It is my intention to prevent that from occurring.

So allow me to state as a principle that discussions about faith, belief and truth are inherenctly tendentious because they seek to represent particular viewpoints as ascendant against others. If such discussions are enegaged in here, I will be a sharp critic. That said, I will attempt to be a little less brusque with newcomers who do not yet understand the highly charged environment of this particular page.

Regards Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   01:02, 27 March 2011 (UTC)

Thank you Peter. This is something that I hope to see from others. It takes a courageous person to apologize and this is a standup thing you have done. I accept Peter's apology because it shows that he is not being intellectually dishonest and intends to be less brusque while at the same time stating his principles without violating the good faith policy of Wikipedia.

We need to see the same from the admins who banned the writers on the Astrology page. Need they be reminded of Jimmy Wales policy - " There must be no cabal, no elite, and no hierarchy or structure to get in the way of this openness to newcomers. Any security measures to be implemented to protect the community against real vandals (and there are real vandals, who do occasionally affect us), should be implemented on the model of “strict scrutiny.” Strict scrutiny means that any measures instituted for security must address a compelling community interest, and must be narrowly tailored to achieve that objective and no other." Eagle Eye 01:24, 27 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Eagle Eye, thanks for your kind words, but don't confuse my apology as a reversal of my support for admin decisions, particularly not those by Moreschi, who has been completely open about his/her reasons. Moreover, discussion of those decisions should now be be conducted in the appropriate administrator pages.


 * To be absolutely clear about this, if I were one of the banned editors, I would make my appeal to Arbitration, quoting (not paraphrasing) each specific point of contention, and then citing specifically why specific (note the double emphasis on specific) Wikipedia policies are in question. I think the longer blanket demands for unbanning are made, the less credible those appeals will sound.  To be absolutely clear about my intent here, I am not an administrator, I do not know Moreschi or the other involved admins except for my involvement here at astrology, and I'd be having a go at them if the available evidence suggested to me I should.  In my opinion the evidence vindicates the decisions made, and actually exposes those decisions as being far more patient and reserved than I might have been.


 * Can we now move on from this topic of unbanning here? These pages are about an article on astrology.  I have spent too much time in discussions and not enough actually contributing.  I note that Robert Currey has been the only person since I started taking an interest to propose specific wording and references (except for the hit and run changes that were never discussed).  If something is not clear about what I'm trying to say, consider my opinion of rationality, which can be safely assumed to underpin all my work at WP.


 * Regards Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   02:57, 27 March 2011 (UTC)


 * I was concerned about the banning, but after looking at the edits by the banned users, I can see the sterility of the edit warring involved. Particularly I am struck by the focus by them on the validity of the astrological world view, its rigor, akin to scientific rigor but nevertheless assuming that the lack of causal connection between astronomical objects and life is not be prominently and definitively noted. Nevertheless I am quite distressed by the lack of an adequate explanation of how astrology is practiced and its theories; a problem for me, as I have very little interest in buying astrological reference works and doing the work of crafting an adequate picture; someone with a passion for astrology will have to do that; certainly not skeptics or someone like myself who dismisses it out of hand other than as an annoying aspect of popular culture. User:Fred Bauder Talk 03:43, 27 March 2011 (UTC)


 * May I amplify this comment to suggest that proponents of astrological practice work a little harder to provide encyclopaedic contributions about their craft. It looks to me that currently this is the most conspicuous weakness of the article.  Regards  Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   05:52, 27 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Peter S, I trust you were not referring to me when you mentioned 'the hit and run changes that were never discussed'. I have only made changes to the main page that have been openly discussed or corrected a broken link.  I agree that the article needs better referencing.  I am working on this, but each sentence requires a lot of research.  We need help from experts especially in areas like Hindu astrology.  Besides, the lack of citation, the article is inaccurate in many places, lacks coherence and has an unwarranted sceptical bias. Robert Currey  (talk) 19:09, 27 March 2011 (UTC)

No, I did not mean you as a hit and run editor; I thought I'd been clear to separate you distinctly from that category, knowing that it is a concern to you. I don't think the tone or content of the article should be changed at all just because the necessary citations aren't available. Scepticism should be removed where it is unreferenced, but not as a matter of decorum. If the references exist to evidence scepticism about astrology, let's see the prose.

Regards Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   23:25, 27 March 2011 (UTC)

Education section
Checking out the places listed at http://www.education.nic.in/circulars/astrologycurriculum.htm#List%20of%20Foreign User:Fred Bauder Talk 15:11, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
 * And how about providing evidence that these 'places' have any recognition, rather than adding spam links to random astrologers? Seediff for an example of how not to do it. If Noel Jan Tyl's 'Master's classes' are recognised, or at least acknowledged by the outside world, they might be relevant, but you need to demonstrate this. Even the (stub) article on Tyl makes no mention of this. AndyTheGrump (talk) 15:22, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
 * The link is to the Department of Education, Government of India which lists them as sources of astrological education outside India. You can find his master class on his website. User:Fred Bauder Talk 20:36, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
 * The Indian DoE list is just that - a "List of Foreign Institutions where Astrology is Beong [sic] Taught". It tells us precisely nothing about whether Tyl's course is recognised by anyone but himself. Without evidence of external recognition for the 'qualification' he offers, there can be no justification for including his course in the article. AndyTheGrump (talk) 20:48, 26 March 2011 (UTC)

With respect to this edit we have an article about him and his master class is listed by the Government of India, Department of Education http://www.education.nic.in/circulars/astrologycurriculum.htm#List%20of%20Foreign User:Fred Bauder Talk 20:31, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Yes, we have a stub article about Noel Tyl, with no real references indicating any notability, and no mention of this 'course'. I'll probably AfD the Tyl article soon, unless meaningful evidence about this course is provided. The Indian DoE list is just that - a "List of Foreign Institutions where Astrology is Beong [sic] Taught". It tells us precisely nothing about whether Tyl's course is recognised by anyone but himself. Basically, it looks like second-hand spamlinking. AndyTheGrump (talk) 20:42, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
 * It does, and is, but it is published by a reliable source, The Government of India. As to Tyl, he is clearly notable if you research a bit, as an opera singer, if nothing else. User:Fred Bauder Talk 20:48, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
 * There is no point in discussing this in two places at once - please keep discussions to the astrology talk page, where others can see what we are debating. AndyTheGrump (talk) 20:51, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
 * 21 published books on astrology listed on Amazon. User:Fred Bauder Talk 20:52, 26 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Google him and master class and you'll find many hits from people who list his certificate. Also take a look at http://www.iiihs.org/confarchives/conf07/speakers2007.htm and you will see he is prominent within his reference group. User:Fred Bauder Talk 21:05, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
 * See http://www.iiihs.org/ User:Fred Bauder Talk 21:07, 26 March 2011 (UTC)

Fred Bauder, if you are going to start cut-and-pasting other users comments from talk pages without indicating that you have done so, as above, I am going to play no further part in this discussion. This is a breach of talk page etiquette, and disruptive. AndyTheGrump (talk) 21:12, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm not going to carefully merge talk pages. I have other things to do, sorry. If you want it all on one page, I'm willing to put it there, but not fiddle around with it. User:Fred Bauder Talk 22:16, 26 March 2011 (UTC)

Mr Bauder, what is your intent in pursuing these links? What, specifically are you trying to reference with them? Regards  Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   23:41, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I wish I knew too. It's kind of confusing. Orange Marlin  Talk• Contributions 23:45, 26 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I was exploring where one might learn to be a professional astrologer, and what that might consist of, especially the professional practice of astrology. To tie this in with Noel Tyl, who seems quite successful and prominent, how would one establish that for our purposes. For example, who are the dozen most prominent astrologers and what are their characteristics? Another matter is the question of astrological counseling; what is involved with that? How much is it used and by whom? User:Fred Bauder Talk 03:30, 27 March 2011 (UTC)
 * By the way, most of the educational resources on that Indian list are junk, but what differentiates them from one another; reputation, I think, but where and how does an astrologer establish a reputation? User:Fred Bauder Talk 03:30, 27 March 2011 (UTC)


 * This is a pertinent point that Mr Currey and I have been discussing. If astrologers cannot make their oeuvres known in conventional ways, what are the credible references likely to consist of?  As I ventured to Mr Currey, though, I believe the problem is one for those who want unconventional sources to be accepted as conventional.  Without disputing the possibility that a rational argument can be made for this proposition I nevertheless think it's a tough ask.  I would need to be convinced that the evidence of someone somewhere in the world pursuing a rigorous study of astrology translates into credible citations.


 * I commented recently on the article dealing with LSD mind-control experiments, not to decry Timothy Leary, but to question what, if anything, emerged from those experiments that said anything about LSD as an adjunct to interrogation. All I could see is that a bunch of scientists, keeping careful note of doses and frequency, could say that people dosed with lysergic acid diethyl amide were pretty 'fucked up' (stoned? hallucinating? irrational?).   So, was that science or just Leary's pet project?  In terms of astrology, if an Indian university offers a unit of study in astrology, what does that actually evidence?  I submit to you that what it says is that Indian universities permit the study of astrology; no more, no less.  (Oh, and in terms of Leary, its says he was allowed to experiment with hallucinogens, not that he reached any rational conclusions.)


 * Regards Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   04:07, 27 March 2011 (UTC)

Noel Tyl
He is described as "Noel Tyl, the legendary Astrologer and author of 29 books," in Meta Arts Magazine and alongside his column there this runs:"Noel Tyl (no-ell till) is one of the foremost astrologers in the world. His twenty-nine textbooks have led the teaching of astrologers for two generations."

"Tyl has written the professional manual for the field, the 1,000-page text 'Synthesis & Counseling in Astrology' that has securely placed astrology in pace with the most sophisticated disciplines of humanistic studies extant today."

"Mr. Tyl is a graduate of Harvard University with his degree in Social Relations (Psychology, Sociology, Anthropology), lectures throughout the Western world, serves his clients from his office in Phoenix AZ, maintains perhaps the most sophisticated astrological teaching website on the web, noeltyl.com, and leads his highly esteemed Master's Degree Certification Correspondence Course throughout 16 countries."

Thus he is not only notable, but the author of a reference work that someone could probably cite as a reliable source. User:Fred Bauder Talk 00:28, 28 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Introduction to an interview in The Meta Arts:"Astrologer, teacher, opera singer, and the prolific author of 29 textbooks on Astrology, Noel Tyl is a legendary conceptualist in contemporary Astrology. He is regarded as one of the world's most gifted Astrologers, whose work has influenced and shaped the art of horoscope delineation. We are grateful for the time he gave us out of his busy schedule, and the viewpoints he shared. One cannot help but be taken by his eloquence and magnificent voice as he speaks about his beginnings in the field of Astrology, and his development as one of its greatest writers, teachers and analytical talents."User:Fred Bauder Talk 00:47, 28 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Can you provide any evidence that The MetaArts Magazine is (a) notable itself (it is apparently only published online), (b) the magazine has no connection with Tyl, or with his publisher, and (c) the fact that it published the 'interview' was in no way related to Tyl apparently paying to advertise on their website ? AndyTheGrump (talk) 01:13, 28 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Good question; he's a columnist; they publish half a dozen astrology columns. When I asked "The Crestone Astrologer", he knew who he was. We need to resolve how astrologers are recognized as prominent. They have an associations and conventions. He seems to have pioneered humanist astrology which is less deterministic. User:Fred Bauder Talk 04:49, 29 March 2011 (UTC)
 * AFAN Association for Astrological Networking, which he co-founded, might be part of the answer. User:Fred Bauder Talk 04:52, 29 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Following up on the links at Astrological organizations might be helpful. Also, I wonder if there is not a mainstream book somewhere about astrology from an outside perspective. You know where I'm going to look? In Brittanica... User:Fred Bauder Talk 04:59, 29 March 2011 (UTC)

Major edit now made
The major edit announced by me last week, scheduled for today, and discussed on the Astrology workpage has now been completed. Substantial prose was removed, and some was replaced by me with wording provided by Robert Currey, on whom I call to now check that I have made changes faithfully to his edits on the workpage. I am indebted to Mr Currey for the constructive comments he has offered in this process, but recognise that his contributions are subject to the scrutiny of all editors.

Regards Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   08:43, 29 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Thank you Peter S Strempel  for your guidance on this.  I have inserted the more recent (27th March) version of the Western History section with minor modifications.  Otherwise all other changes look in order. Robert Currey  (talk) 09:46, 29 March 2011 (UTC)

Astrology practice and theory discussed
It is not easy to come back after being banned. I am very aware of the extreme hostility that many editors have shown toward astrology. As I was doing before being banned, I'll continue to confine my comments to the Talk page only.

Mr. Bauder mentioned: "I am quite distressed by the lack of an adequate explanation of how astrology is practiced and its theories." I am not an astrologer but I can discuss this, having studied astrology for over 30 years. Most astrologers are amateurs. They "practice" for the most part on friends and family. They attend society meetings at libraries and community centres, they go to conferences. They'd rather learn astrology at universities, but universities don't teach it. Most learning is derived from patterns of case studies, which is to say extreme cases of personality and events. Because of its amateur status, this is about the only type of research that is open to astrology today.

Most astrologers believe that there is undiscovered science in astrology, provided you can accept that statistical correlations are "scientific." Since Paracelsus, astrology has been considered to be a question of correlations, which means it broke with causal science. This is when it really happened. Since Francis Bacon, these correlations are thought to increase in magnitude with extremity of cases. This is what Prof. Ertel, for example, successfully demonstrated with the Gauqelin (and the skeptic) data.

Astrology is like psychology, and I believe there has always been some cross-fertilization happening, but does not follow the medical model of psychology, which is to say pathologies. It is the very positive outlook of astrology, of making a better world, learning from a detailed analysis of mistakes and bad habits, and being the best you can be, that affiliates astrology with New Age thinking.

People who study astrology also tend to have an amateur interest in science, particularly chaos concepts and quantum concepts. Anything that is difficult to grasp and requires non-intuitive thinking, like quantum mechanics, attracts a lot of amateur interest and some quantum concepts are entering into the astrological discourse where similarities of non-intuitive thinking are found. String theory is not so interesting. It is far removed from anything currently testable or falsifiable, yet it is unaccountably scientific. There must be many esteemed scientists who flatly declare it to be a science, just as they flatly declare, by their own authority and nothing else, that astrology is not.

Adding this all up, I don't know whether the pejorative "pseudoscience" should be applied with an "is" or a "considered to be." From my personal POV, I don't believe pejoratives belong anywhere in Wikipedia, but mine is not a neutral POV and I'm sure someone will tell me I should take this up with the people who decided that this particular instance was okay because it seemed neutral to them.

Hope this helps. Let me know if you have any questions. Apagogeron (talk) 17:35, 27 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Banned does mean banned, and I did include the talk page as well. Although I may actually change my mind on this one (Apagogeron), give me a couple days to think about it. Striking rather than redacting because this post was actually constructive. Moreschi (talk) 19:26, 27 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Yes, I agree that was constructive, and I'd be happy to have astrologers in the discussion if they are willing to be this reasonable. (Couple factual errors, though: Of course statistical correlations are scientific; science is not causal, tough causality is valued when it can be determined. "Pseudoscience" is the category that is used; it's irrelevant whether people find it offensive, any more than if they find offensive the myths of the Bible being referred to as "myths" (which many theologians do). String theory has not been verified, but then, unlike astrology, no-one claims that it has been. It's almost the opposite of astrology: astrology is a falsified claim of statistical correlation without a theoretical model; String Theory is a theoretical model which has failed to be verified, and which many physicists (such as Feynman) openly opine is nonsense.) — kwami (talk) 23:11, 27 March 2011 (UTC)
 * It helps, but the 'pseudoscience' language is non-negotiable, since it's in sources and the research opposing it is slim and considered fringe by our policies. No offense.  Maybe it's actually true.  Our policies require us to default to the judgment expressed by more mainstream sources, and minority views need to reach a certain threshold before they can be mentioned seriously.  The sources you've mentioned don't meet that threshold.


 * The key things you mentioned are that Astrology has a broad gap between the 'amateurs' and the professionals, that the research that is done is based on case studies of extreme situations, and that it's 'correlational' not 'causational'. That, we can include, if we can find some sources which echo it.


 * The statistics behind even the best case for astrology, however, are simply not widely repeated or published enough in good enough sources to qualify. Again, they could be true, but you'd need tens of Ertel studies before Astrology had 'minority' status as a science, and hundreds if not thousands before it achieved legitimacy.  So, you're way off.  The most we can do is maybe describe that some astrologers believe Astrology is a science, on the basis of a few studies that have not received widespread recognition.  I suggest helping Fred Bauer on the Astrological Education section, and fleshing out the practices of what 'modern' astrologers actually do, when they are trying to be scientific or not. Ocaasic 18:07, 27 March 2011 (UTC)


 * I agree that the pseudoscience references are well sourced, however I'm not sure I like the way it's handled in this article. Bit heavy-handed at points, no?  Reading this, I kept thinking about that old cartoon short, Bambi Vs. Godzilla: was science ever meant to be used as a giant crushing claw?    -- Ludwigs 2  19:00, 27 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Giant strawman. Science is meant to provide evidence that brings out of the dark ages.  Not only is there no evidence supporting this pseudoscience of astrology, there isn't an imaginable way that it works unless you implement more pseudoscience.  Science enlightens.  Pseudoscience has no purpose whatsoever but amusement.  So, using your weak metaphor, science is just a normal person, and astrology is a pathetic little amoeba that's causes dysentery, but is otherwise crushed out.   Orange Marlin  Talk• Contributions 19:39, 27 March 2011 (UTC)
 * OM, that's not really helpful or necessary. You might like to consider refactoring, off-topic rhetoric of that strength is certainly not needed nor wanted given the recent history here. Moreschi (talk) 19:53, 27 March 2011 (UTC)
 * No clue about past history, I wasn't around and I wasn't involved. However, others around here were around and apparently were blocked/banned/smacked with a trout.  I'm an NPOV-pusher, and the article is really good right now.  It says astrology is a pseudoscience.  Couldn't be more pleased.  As for my statement, I was just expanding upon a strawman metaphor, not sure what to refactor.  If you want to delete it, be my guest, as long as the crushing claw comments are likewise.  :)   Orange Marlin  Talk• Contributions 20:07, 27 March 2011 (UTC)
 * You can't fight in here; this is the war room!
 * Considering the very long and often angry debates that this talkpage attracts, I think the last thing we need is more drama. I'm not going to insist that anybody strikes out or otherwise refactors recent comments, but it may be appropriate to keep metaphors and strawmen on a short leash in future. bobrayner (talk) 20:49, 27 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Eh, OM's original research is just a red herring. He can think what he likes about science and astrology; it has no bearing on the discussion.  the point is that the language here is a bit over-the-top.  There's a difference between pointing out what scientific community says about astrology, and engaging in overt efforts at debunking on our own.  would anyone objet if I trimmed back some of the more punchy statements?  -- Ludwigs 2  22:38, 27 March 2011 (UTC)

Ludwigs2, the debate about the word 'pseudoscience' is extensive and settled. I invite you to read the history of it before demanding a language change. In considering astrology from an encyclopaedic perspective, it is important to separate scientific disciplines from others that are not. This is a historical progression in Western civilization dating from post-Roman European traditions. To argue that this taxonomy needs to be changed now is an endeavour you'll need to pursue in the academy, not here. We describe what is, not what someone thinks should be. Our work takes place in contemporary Western civilization, where astrology is not considered a science within the academy.

As for metaphors, I'm not sure I understand the claw pitch, but I prefer to employ a simile: astrology, like shamanism, is a recognised practice with a significant role in some societies. We should endeavour to promote an understanding of both by describing in as much detail as sources permit what they are, how they function, and how they are practised. But we are not here to misrepresent either as part of the scientific canon.

Regards Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   23:16, 27 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Peter, per policy, consensus can always change. The way that happens is through discussion of issues that arise.  Right?


 * Now, please do not misrepresent what I said - I said nothing about removing the word 'pseudoscience'; I said that some of the debunking language in the article is overly-strong. If you don't care to discuss the matter, you don't need to do so, because I can talk about it with others.  If you care to give me a chance, I will either make revisions or present them here on the page for you to consider.  but please give up on the rhetoric, because that kind of thing doesn't work for me.  thanks.  -- Ludwigs 2  00:01, 28 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Well, not literally. We may seek consensus to settle disputes here, but our consensus doesn't have the power to overturn facts, scholarship or rationality.  In addition, just because a majority of editors may vote, say, to 'burn the witch', that vote doesn't bind me to murder.  Moreover, it would be ethical cowardice not to oppose such a consensus.  If you think that's 'rhetoric', you'll get a real blast out of the What Wikipedia is not article.


 * If you check out my proposed edits you will see that I have not approached statements on the basis of my feelings about the tone, but entirely on the basis of whether credible sources exist and are cited. And no, I can't give up on the 'rhetoric' so long as there's a risk of a return to internecine debates about tendentious metaphysical opinions.  If you haven't done so already, I highly recommend reading the history of debate on this page to avoid repeating pointless metaphysical debate that has undermined the astrology article for years.


 * Wikipedia is pretty clear in respecting neither your nor my opinions about matters, only our adequately referenced prose. As for the invite to exclude myself from debate here, I'll pass.  All of us who work here are subject to scrutiny and challenge by anyone.  Learn to love it or take your own advice.  On that note, any constructive contributions are always welcome, but removing properly referenced material just because it is judged to be unsympathetic to a particular point of view is vandalism.


 * Regards Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   01:08, 28 March 2011 (UTC)


 * @Ludwigs: not sure what you have in mind, but would you mind posting them at Talk:Astrology/Workpage first? Thanks. Moreschi (talk) 08:52, 28 March 2011 (UTC)

I don't think Apagogeron was questioning the use of the word "pseudoscience," but rather whether it should be characterized as "is" pseudoscience or "generally considered to be by the scientific community" as the arbitration committee clearly stated it should be characterized. (It's plain English, people...) Unfortunately the consensus here seems to be to ignore the arbitration committees decision and treat it as if they didn't make a clear plain English distinction between the way "obvious pseudoscience" and "generally considered pseudoscience by the scientific community" are treated. Obvious pseudoscience: Theories which, while purporting to be scientific, are obviously bogus, such asTime Cube, may be so labeled and categorized as such without more consideration. Generally considered pseudoscience: Theories which have a following, such as astrology, but which are generally considered pseudoscience by the scientific community may properly contain that information and may be categorized as pseudoscience. Why do have an arbitration committee if we are simply going to ignore their decisions?Mystylplx (talk) 20:49, 28 March 2011 (UTC)

P.S. For those who think their use of the language "categorized as pseudoscience" means it can simply be labeled as pseudoscience should look at the language under "obvious pseudoscience" which says "may be so labeled and categorized as such." The word "categorized" (from context) clearly refers to Wikipedia categories, else there's no distinction between the two groupings whatsoever. I can't imagine they made a distinction between the two groupings and the way they should be treated if they hadn't intended there to be a distinction between the way the two groupings should be treated. Mystylplx (talk) 21:13, 28 March 2011 (UTC)


 * So, can we see your proposed wording. Regards  Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   22:11, 28 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Harder to read crossed out Mystylplxl, but I read: "I don't know whether the pejorative "pseudoscience" should be applied with an "is" or a "considered to be."  as covering both cases, or at least the up to the more specific version of the second you offeree (...considered by scientists...). If you're absolutely sure that ArbCom meant something in a ruling, we should perhaps approach ArbCom for clarification.  It's a different bunch, and I don't recall there being situations where clarifications are given without opening up new cases, but maybe that's something they could do.  Meanwhile, I don't see much difference between 'is', 'is considered', and 'is considered by scientists'.  That's a single sentence in a long article, and the word 'pseudoscience' is going to be in it pretty much regardless. Ocaasic 22:24, 28 March 2011 (UTC)
 * That's a very fine little piece of wording to take to arbcom, and I suspect the original ruling was not intended to be finely chopped like this. However, if a clarification from arbcom is the only way to settle the matter, then go ahead. bobrayner (talk) 22:52, 28 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Would you consider putting it to an RfC or requesting a third opinion? (Hmm, we have more than two people involved). Or maybe those nice folk over at the fringe theories noticeboard could lend their experience for a moment. bobrayner (talk) 22:55, 28 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I don't see any reason why anyone shouldn't seek third-party input, but for goodness' sakes, lets not start a war again. If that were to occur I would personally take it to arbitration and we would all have to live with the fact we couldn't sort this out among ourselves for behaving like pre-schoolers fighting over lego blocks - and we'd probably all have to live with wording none of us could stand.  My suggestion is that we wait until after the major edit I will undertake later today, as announced a week ago, and that the phrasing in the intro (lead, lede, summary) must reflect the referenced definition given in the body of the article.
 * Regards Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   01:27, 29 March 2011 (UTC)

@Ocaasi, I agree there's not "much" difference, but that was the specific proposal over... during?... which a bunch of people got banned from the article. I know there was more going on immediately prior to that proposal, but that was what was going on right then. And the reason there's not 'much' difference is probably because we are talking about two only slightly different "groupings" that the arbitration committee distinguished between.

@Bobrayner, it seems to me the original ruling is unambiguous. They made a distinction between four different "groupings" of pseudoscience and the way those groupings should be treated. Four, not three. The way it's being interpreted is not only not what the committee said, it's also being interpreted as if the first two groupings are identical, as if the arbitration committee made a rather silly distinction-without-a-difference.

@Peterstrempel, I suspect there will be controversy as long as the ruling remains at the top of the talk page while the article continues to contradict the ruling. Mystylplx (talk) 07:02, 29 March 2011 (UTC)
 * the phrase "that information" refers to the facts that

1. Astrology has a considerable (non-scientific) following. 2. Scientific consensus is that astrology is pseudoscience.


 * There is, however, no difference between "astrology is pseudoscience" and "scientific consensus is that astrology is pseudoscience", because said consensus is the relevant WP:RS for the purposes of Wikipedia when determining what is pseudoscience or what is not. Moreschi (talk) 18:47, 29 March 2011 (UTC)


 * I think there is a difference between "astrology is pseudoscience" and "scientific consensus is that astrology is pseudoscience." The AC certainly seemed to think so as they are the one's who made the distinction. If they didn't intend to make that distinction why would they have done so?Mystylplx (talk) 18:55, 29 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Because what actually matters is distinguishing between pseudoscience that doesn't have any popular following and pseudoscience that does. Articles on the latter need to spend considerably more time discussing their following over time (in spite of scientific consensus) and the reasons for this (as this article does in places). As far as encyclopedia-writing is concerned, that's the relevant distinction. Moreschi (talk) 19:01, 29 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Look specifically at the language regarding the different ways the different categories should be handled--


 * "Obvious pseudoscience: ... may be so labeled and categorized as such..."
 * "Generally considered pseudoscience: ... may properly contain that information and may be categorized as pseudoscience."
 * I agree that the main 'real' distinction is between whether it has a following or not, but they aren't saying anything about spending "...time discussing their following over time ..." They are distinguishing between the ways it should be characterized and whether it should be added to the pseudoscience category. In the next two groupings they are also talking about the way it should be characterized. All four groupings contain guidance on how it should be characterized. None of them say anything about "...discussing their following over time..." Mystylplx (talk) 19:22, 29 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Note: By "the main real distinction" I meant the way they are defining the groupings. The distinction in how the groupings should be handled is noted above. I agree with the way you characterized what the phrase "that information" refers to. But there's really nothing in there about discussing their following over time. Mystylplx (talk) 19:42, 29 March 2011 (UTC)


 * No, that's just the next obvious place to go - the logical conclusion, as it were. We're 5 years down the line from the case and we are allowed a touch of leeway :) The main point of the distinction between the two categories is to show that articles about theories without followings and articles about those with should be written differently, in the various ways I pointed out above. Wikipedia is here to report the conclusions of WP:RS - that's all we do - and as a result there's no difference between "X is pseudoscience" and "science says X is pseudoscience". They're the exact same thing because science is the arbiter on what's pseudoscience and what isn't. Moreschi (talk) 19:48, 29 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Homeopathy, BTW, puts "...to be described as pseudoscience" in the passive voice, adding "quackery" and "cruel deception". The "to be described" is not attributed to to any particular group or person; X can't be pseudoscience-according-to-science and not-pseudoscience-according-to-others. Not on Wikipedia, anyway. Moreschi (talk) 19:58, 29 March 2011 (UTC)


 * I'm not sure what the word "that's" refers to in the sentence "No, that's just the next obvious place to go..." WP:PSEUDOSCIENCE says, "Thus, when talking about pseudoscientific topics, we should not describe these two opposing viewpoints as being equal to each other. While pseudoscience may in some cases be significant to an article, it should not obfuscate the description of the mainstream views of the scientific community. Any inclusion of pseudoscientific views should be proportionate with the scientific view. Likewise, the pseudoscientific view should be clearly described as such. An explanation of how scientists have received pseudoscientific theories should be prominently included."
 * 1. None of that is inconsistent with what the AC said.
 * 2. The AC said nothing about discussing their following over time.
 * 3. Which brings back the question of what is the difference between
 * "...may be so labeled and categorized as such..."
 * "...may properly containthat information and may be categorized as pseudoscience."
 * If it's fine to label astrology as simply "is pseudoscience" what was the point of the 2nd grouping? Quoting you now-- :the phrase "that information" refers to the facts that
 * 1. Astrology has a considerable (non-scientific) following.
 * 2. Scientific consensus is that astrology is pseudoscience.
 * The above is perfectly accurate. If there is "no difference between "astrology is pseudoscience" and "scientific consensus is that astrology is pseudoscience" then why the resistance to the 2nd phrasing? Neither phrasing is inconsistent with Wikipedia policies RE. pseudoscience, but only one is consistent with what the AC said... Mystylplx (talk) 20:17, 29 March 2011 (UTC)
 * The article on Creationism says, "have been characterized as pseudoscience by the mainstream scientific community." I'm not sure we should take our cue from either of those articles as they both look a mess to me. But neither of them bluntly describe their topic as "is pseudoscience." Mystylplx (talk) 20:28, 29 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I think you're missing out on a chunk of what I meant, but it doesn't matter and I won't pursue it, otherwise we'll be chasing each other's tails for hours. To cut this short; I'm personally fine with either phrasing since they mean the same thing, but editorial consensus here actually does mean more than arbcom guidance from 5 years ago (who carefully used "may..." anyway). Moreschi (talk) 20:34, 29 March 2011 (UTC)
 * OK. :) Mystylplx (talk) 21:10, 29 March 2011 (UTC)
 * FWIW, there is a perfectly good reason to distinguish between "obvious pseudoscience" and "pseudoscience by scientific consensus" that has nothing to do with phrasing: Something may be obvious pseudoscience, but nevertheless not pseudoscience by scientific consensus! How many scientists have even heard of e.g. hologram therapy, and how many have chosen to write about it? I don't think you could find sources about such topics that would allow you to describe them as pseudoscience by scientific consensus, even though they are "obvious" pseudoscience.
 * Also, the argument that the word "labeled" is missing from the "Generally considered pseudoscience" category cuts both ways: In "Questionable science", arbcom goes to pains to say "may contain information to that effect, but generally should not be so characterized", but a statement to this effect is conspicuously(?!) missing from the previous category. Taken at face value, the ruling does not say whether in this case the topic may be labeled as pseudoscience or not, because no mention at all is made of labeling. -- Coffee2theorems (talk) 10:52, 3 April 2011 (UTC)


 * You say there is a good reason to distinguish between the two. What is that reason?  You say the 'label' consideration cuts both ways.  And so?  Regards  Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   01:48, 4 April 2011 (UTC)

Pejorative intent
I would like to clarify here that it is possible to use the term 'pseudoscience' without pejorative intent, but entirely as a matter of taxonomic differentiation. That is how I have attempted to use the word.

It appears to me that in the endless discussion of 'pro' and 'anti' astrology, we are missing the point that science and astrology are different as a matter of the rules of the game, not as a matter of qualitative or ethical consideration.

If an NBL star player who'd played some college football said to me that it was unjust he had not been granted a place in the NFL hall of fame, I'd be perplexed. I'd try to be polite about the fact that he may have played a handful of minor league football games, but that he was notable in his career as a basketball player, and that the NFL gets to make the call about its own hall of fame. I might go so far as to comment that he should have played more football to get recognition in that sport. If the basketball player then challenged me irately not to refer to him as a basketball player, but to call him a football player instead, I might demur as matter of keeping the peace in that social interaction, but I would regard it as an irrational demand and as no reason to do so in any other context.

I am in the same situation with the 'astrology as science' argument. If astrologers had notably adopted scientific rules and tests in practising, developing and discussing their craft, I would see no problem at all dropping the word 'pseudoscience'. However, astrology is not notably a part of the international and peer-reviewed scientific debate which determines what is science and what is not. And it is in that debate that many of the arguments presented here should be made if the status of astrology is to change in Wikipedia. We are not empowered to alter scientific taxonomy as a matter of debate, consensus or wishful thinking in this forum. We are obliged to report the notably accepted consensus that governs the entire Western civilization. Count the number of contributors to this page over the past three years and tell me truthfully that this small number who argue a change of taxonomy is representative of views in any one suburb, let alone the entire Western world.

In that context, when I use the word 'pseudoscience', I am not being discourteous. I am using notably accepted taxonomy the way it should be used in an encyclopaedia. My judgement, if I have one, about the qualitative or ethical standing of astrology should be opaque in that discussion.

If you personally don't like the word 'pseudoscience', devote a lifetime, or just a brilliant and so recognised short burst of academic work to having it changed, and I will use whatever new word you thus gained notable recognition for. Until then, please don't repeat assertions that the mere act of using the word 'pseudoscience' makes me or anyone else here enemies or opponents of astrology, astrologers and their adherents.

Regards Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   03:53, 29 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Actually, it is not necessary to use the word, other than as Category:Pseudoscience. It is sufficient to say that the discipline is not recognized as scientific by scientists. AND LET IT GO AT THAT. User:Fred Bauder Talk 04:58, 29 March 2011 (UTC)


 * That may be, Mr Bauder, but I do choose to use the word, and I stand by what I said about my use of it. Regards  Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   06:48, 29 March 2011 (UTC)


 * I agree the word should be used. The AC agreed as well, five years ago. But I have to assume there's a reason the committee made a distinction between "obvious pseudoscience" (which could simply be labeled and categorized as pseudoscience) and "generally considered pseudoscience" (which "may properly contain" the information that it is "generally considered pseudoscience by the scientific community" and be categorized as pseudoscience.) I can't know what exactly the AC was thinking, but I suspect it may have had something to do with preventing the type of "wars" that we've seen recently. I'll ask again--why do we even have arbitration committees if we are simply going to ignore their rulings? Mystylplx (talk) 07:17, 29 March 2011 (UTC)
 * My reading is that there might be a perception the ruling was not granular enough, leaving doubt about every specific application, which I don't think was an arbitration committee intention so much as a presumption of goodwill in applying the ruling. It may be that this goodwill should be considered as absent from this specific discussion, given the repetitive nature of the comments pertaining to the word itself.  It was for that reason that I commented if we couldn't play nicely with each other, I would take it back to arbitration to get a definitive ruling for specific application of the policy to this article.  As I stated above, none of us may like the specifics of such a ruling, but we would then be bound by it definitively, word for word.  It is for that reason that I'd recommend every interested party devise a specific wording, which is what I'm working on next, and one that will stand the scrutiny of all editors here as well as the arbitration committee.


 * In that regard, I draw everyone's attention to the fact that I have made the major copy edit announced last week and discussed in the sub-page to this talk page. The current wording of the intro (lead, lede, summary) was not part of that edit, but no longer reflects the content of the article and needs to be changed in any case.  I suggest we focus on that task for the time being.::::Regards  Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk  08:56, 29 March 2011 (UTC)


 * I don't see any "doubt." Look specifically at the language regarding the different ways the four different categories should be handled--
 * "Obvious pseudoscience: ... may be so labeled and categorized as such..."
 * "Generally considered pseudoscience: ... may properly contain that information and may be categorized as pseudoscience."


 * (See how those are different? Not the same, but different.)


 * "Questionable science: ... may contain information to that effect, but generally should not be so characterized."
 * "Alternative theoretical formulations: ... are not pseudoscience, but part of the scientific process."


 * I may be missing something, and if I am I'd appreciate it if someone would point it out to me, but as far as I can see there's only one reasonable interpretation for that unless you believe they intended the first two groupings to be handled identically.


 * As for the exact wording, I'm not attached to any specific phrasing as long as it's true to the AC ruling. The AC wording of "generally considered pseudoscience by the scientific community" would be fine. Or something like "Astrology has a wide following in spite of the fact it is considered pseudoscience by the scientific community." would also be fine. Mystylplx (talk) 16:48, 29 March 2011 (UTC)


 * I proposed the language in the arbitration decision. The main problem was characterization of ideas as "pseudoscience" when no scientist had in fact commented on them, or even investigated them. "Obvious pseudoscience" not commanding enough attention by the scientific community for comment to have occurred, thus no source. The decision means you don't have to have a source from a scientist to describe something as pseudoscience or categorize it as pseudo science if it is obvious. Subjects generally considered pseudoscience such as astrology suffer somewhat from the same problem, as they are seldom examined or considered seriously by scientists, thus there is little or no research by scientists of the propositions advanced. Nevertheless, despite the paucity of reliable sources, they may be categorized as pseudoscience, or it may be noted that the findings and discoveries of the practice are not seriously considered by scientists. Obviously some statements by scientists have been found, but they are not, in fact, based on scientific research, but on opinion. Such opinions would not ordinarily be considered reliable sources as they are not based on actual research, but the arbitration opinion makes an exception.


 * The other two possibilities, questionable science and alternative theoretical formulations, are within the broad umbrella of science but lack general acceptance. The scientific discipline of parapsychology, in so far as it was carried on as serious scientific research is an example of questionable science. There was serious doubt that many of the investigated phenomena were worth studying. Nevertheless, as the research was carried on with scientific vigor it should not be characterized as pseudoscience. Even less so innovative theoretical innovations that have not yet met universal acceptance such as Einstein's theories once were. User:Fred Bauder Talk 03:52, 30 March 2011 (UTC)

Does Tyson's opinion add to the page?
I propose that we take out this paragraph for the following reasons:

Astrophysicist Neil deGrasse Tyson asserted that "astrology was discredited 600 years ago with the birth of modern science. To teach it as though you are contributing to the fundamental knowledge of an informed electorate is astonishing in this, the 21st century. Education should be about knowing how to think, And part of knowing how to think is knowing how the laws of nature shape the world around us. Without that knowledge, without that capacity to think, you can easily become a victim of people who seek to take advantage of you".

If anyone feels that this paragraph should remain, please state your reasons, otherwise I propose removing it in the next few days.
 * 1) 	Tyson’s comments are entirely based on the blanket and unsupported statement that “astrology was discredited 600 years ago”.  Is he referring to Copernicus 500 years ago?  This is a point of view without supporting evidence. WP:POV
 * 2) 	Besides being a personal opinion, Tyson’s comments about what people should do and victims are more like a preacher than a scientist. WP:NOTSOAPBOX   Nothing he says adds to our knowledge about astrology.
 * 3) Neil deGrasse Tyson is unknown outside North America.  The sceptical opinions of Dawkins and Hawking (mentioned in the previous paragraph) carry more weight given their international profile and unique contribution to science.  Tyson seems to be better known as a media presenter within one continent than for innovative research work.
 * 4) 	There is no shortage of astronomers hitting the headlines with controversial unsupported statements about astrology – a subject they have never studied, but are happy to trade off the public interest. Often this coincides with the publication of a book or TV series or raising funds for their planetarium society or just personal PR. The Press mistakenly believe that expertise in astronomy gives authority in astrology and so happily milk the story. However, Wikipedia is not the place for this. WP:NOTPROMOTION
 * 5) 	The science section is well covered but can benefit from quality input rather than this type of superfluous padding.

Robert Currey (talk) 10:38, 29 March 2011 (UTC)


 * I vote it stays. My reasons are —


 * 1) Tyson is a scientist speaking for a credible, notable institution, and is quoted in the section on astrology and science.
 * 2) Tyson's comments are not singular.
 * 3) We are quoting a scientist, not necessarily endorsing his views.
 * 4) Tyson may be relatively unknown outside the US, but a Google search returns plenty of entries, including, in fifth and seventh place for me, entries with the .com.au suffix (Australian sites; as an aside, I live and work in Australia, and I don't think this discussion is the sole property of Americans since Wikipedia has an explicitly internationalist perspective). I would need to be persuaded more convincingly that Tyson doesn't pass credibility/notability guidelines.
 * 5) I'm not persuaded by a blanket argument that astronomers cannot comment on astrology to represent scientific viewpoints.
 * 6) I have some sympathy for the argument that other scientific positions in the section are more persuasive, but I don't see that as a compelling reason to eliminate the Tyson quote (though it needs to be tidied up stylistically to meet the manual of style guidelines on using quotes).


 * Regards Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   13:12, 29 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I think it should stay, for pretty much the same reasons as those given by Peterstrempel. Is there a particular minimum depth of astrological study which is required before somebody with expertise in real-world physics is allowed to say that astrology is implausible? If an astrologer could provide some text of how astrology is actually done and how it's supposed to work, I'd happily read each line and compare it to widely-accepted physical principles.
 * Wikipedia is supposed to reflect what reliable sources say. Adherents of fringe theories do often try to discount expert testimony from those outside the fringe theory - of course it's assumed that anybody who disagrees simply hasn't learnt enough yet - but it's fallacious and should not carry any weight here. (Yesterday I had much the same experience with a homeopath, off-wikipedia; they felt sure that I must be ignorant of homeopathy because I disagreed with them, which allows some nicely circular reasoning). bobrayner (talk) 15:00, 29 March 2011 (UTC)


 * I hesitate to remove this statement as well, with some caveats. It's not WP:POV of us to neutrally describe the opinions of others, it merely requires in-text attribution.  WP:ATTRIBUTEPOV is more specific about this.  Tyson is not only credible but famous.  He's become a major spokesperson for science, physics, and astronomy ("American astrophysicist, science communicator... Frederick P. Rose Director of the Hayden Planetarium at the Rose Center for Earth and Space, and Research Associate in the Department of Astrophysics at the American Museum of Natural History, host of the educational science television show NOVA scienceNOW on PBS since 2006, and frequent guest on The Daily Show, The Colbert Report, and Jeopardy!, Neil deGrasse Tyson..." Neil deGrasse Tyson).  His standing to make such a statement is pretty self-explanatory, although a bit Amero-centric; the solution on those grounds would be to add a [European] commentator as well, not to remove Tyson.
 * We could perhaps provide the context to Tyson's comment so that the 600 year point makes sense. Do we have a secondary source on this that's not WP:SYN?  Tyson's views indeed express an opinion and a preferred direction, but again, with regard to NPOV, WP:SOAPBOX only applies to editors' views, not reliable sources'.  More famous practicing scientists don't always directly comment on practices considered pseudoscientific, since they aren't granted prima facie legitimacy.  We could perhaps use a different quote from Tyson, or another scientist entirely, perhaps one which is in a more academic and less rhetorical context, but I think the general point would be the same and should be represented in the article.
 * Robert, if you have a particular issue with Tyson, you might be in the position of having to find another skeptical quote which you see as an improvement in its specificity, tone, and authority. Tyson's claim isn't useful for informing us about Astrology, you're right.  But it does inform us of what a credible scientist thinks about Astronomy, and at least on that point it is quite relevant.  I agree that Dawkins and Hawking carry more weight.  If this quote is just piling on and not adding any insight, we can look at it on WP:UNDUE grounds or as a lower quality statement than one in an academic context.  We could perhaps replace Tyson, or add a comment by a scientist who goes into more detail.  But lack of the second, in this case, may not be sufficient reason to get rid of the first.
 * The accusation that Tyson is promoting a book is both unsourced, and also involves a misreading of WP:NOTPROMOTION. Tyson couldn't edit his own article about an upcoming book, nor could editors who were trying to give attention to it that hadn't already been given by reliable sources.  In this case, I don't know of any books recently by Tyson, nor do I have reason to believe they wouldn't have already received ample coverage in RS, in which case, NOTPROMOTION is not an issue.  (As long as newspapers, etc. covered it first, we should report on such books; indeed, that coverage is what makes them suitable for inclusion).  Tyson has received ample media coverage, and his views on these subjects meet criteria for inclusion, even if they are not the best quotes we could use.  Ocaasic 16:00, 29 March 2011 (UTC)

I'd say it's WP:UNDUE, and particularly stands out as such following much bigger names like Hawking and Dawson. I don't think it needs to be replaced before removing for that reason. If it stays it should probably be moved up a paragraph so that the section ends with the bigger names rather than ending with Tyson.

The way it's quoted is also odd. The "astrology was discredited 600 years ago with the birth of modern science" part doesn't seem to be a direct Tyson quote but rather a quote of the sources cited. At least that part isn't in quotations in either source. Yet the way it's presented in the article makes it look as if that's a direct quote of Tyson. If nothing else it would make sense to remove everything that isn't a direct quote of his. Mystylplx (talk) 18:14, 29 March 2011 (UTC)


 * I checked out the sources. The "600 years" stuff does not appear to be a direct quote from Tyson but is rather the work of the Washington Post. Tyson himself is actually commenting on the accreditation of an astrology course, but whether he opposes the accreditation, or whether he is simply giving his generic thoughts on astrology, is not actually entirely clear from the source article, which is pretty shoddily written. This does need some cleanup work, and if we can find a better quote, either from him or from someone else, I would be sympathetic to replacement. Moreschi (talk) 18:31, 29 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Or we could say something like, "The Washington Post paraphrased Tyson as saying..." ;-) (Joke) Mystylplx (talk) 18:45, 29 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Thanks for everyone's feedback on this.


 * While accepting that I was wrong on some of my points including WP:NOTPROMOTION and WP:NOTSOAPBOX, Tyson’s quote is in my view not up to the standard for inclusion in this article for a number of other persuasive reasons listed.  I will probably be drummed out of polite astrological society for suggesting this alternative quote, but it is far more succinct and scientific than Tyson’s mystifying, judgemental, home spun philosophical rambling that may not have been his own words.   Stephen Hawking said “The reason most scientists don't believe in astrology is because it is not consistent with our theories that have been tested by experiment.” in his lecture in India in 2001.  http://www.beliefnet.com/Faiths/Hinduism/2001/01/British-Physicist-Debunks-Astrology-In-Indian-Lecture.aspx  (The link is on the page).  This quote reflects a collective opinion based on reason rather than clouded by judgement, emotion or personal taste.


 * If anyone still believes that Tyson’s quote should remain, could they clarify what he meant by astrology being discredited 600 years ago? It certainly was not any lack of mechanism as has been suggested and is the main criticism by astrophysicists today, as very few mechanisms were understood ca.1411!  Robert Currey  (talk) 20:14, 29 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I agree with Mr Currey that Hawking summed up scientific opposition rather more elegantly and with less fulmination than Tyson.  Regards  Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   23:18, 29 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Hawking's quote is succinct and obviously noteworthy. Let's use it.


 * We could consider moving Tyson to the Astrological education section, or a sub-section on Public Reception. Again, Tyson's quote is not exemplary in tone, but it does demonstrate the scientific community's exasperation that these ideas are still being entertained, and it also adds the criticism that people spend money on these beliefs.  I don't have an opinion on that here, but Tyson's is noteworthy, albeit a bit off-the-cuff in this particular quote. Ocaasic 15:43, 30 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Skinwalker, I am unable to see how replacing a rambling, baseless and partial misquote by Tyson with a more concise, scientific and sceptical quote by Hawking could possibly be a whitewash?


 * The main flaw with this Astrology Page is that it reads like a polemic from the Skeptical Inquirer and not Wikipedia. It stands out for being more about what astrology is not and not about what it is.  The page contains 7 paragraphs that are almost entirely negative or critical of astrology and another 8 paragraphs that contain criticism of astrology!  I have highlighted the controversial text in orange.User:Robertcurrey/draft-sandbox  To everyone who knows anything about astrology, it reads like propaganda pandering to the taste and outdated beliefs of those who are largely ignorant of astrology.


 * I am not in favour of removing all these many criticisms – that would be a whitewash. Some are totally valid, some are questionable but legitimately reflect controversial issues that need to be fully aired and some are irrelevant, incorrect and reflect ill-informed personal bias.  Tyson’s quote falls into the last category and even if it resonates with the personal sceptical beliefs of some editors here, this is no justification to cling onto it.


 * Skinwalker - it occurred to me that you may not be referring to Tyson's original quote, due to the location of my last post. Please note that attribution of this full quote to Tyson is questionable.  As Moreschi has already pointed out: The "600 years" stuff does not appear to be a direct quote from Tyson but is rather the work of the Washington Post.  If you still rate this quote as good enough to be included, could you please outline any specific events that occurred 600 years ago that discredited astrology?


 * So I don’t believe that Tyson’s inferior quote adds to an already overly critical page even if to add ‘colour’ to an already ‘colourful’ education section that lacks essential information and basic facts about astrological education. If editors felt very strongly about retaining it, rather than cherry-pick Tyson’s comment from the Washington Post, we should show the context including the response to Tyson’s criticism by the founder of the Astrological Institute that received accreditation, Jensen:"It's quite obvious that he (Tyson) hasn't studied the subject."   Robert Currey   talk  10:48, 14 April 2011 (UTC)


 * I would now like to proceed with swapping Tyson’s quote with Hawking’s as proposed as I think it will improve the article for all parties. This has been discussed at length and the strongest argument for keeping Tyson’s quote is that it reflects the opinions of astronomers.  So in response to a request from Ocaasi, I found a superior academic quote from a more famous (especially internationally) astronomer and scientist, Stephen Hawking.  Hawking clearly expresses the fundamental criticism that truly reflects the views of many prominent astronomers and scientists, while Tyson is expressing one of many opinions that follow from Hawking’s sceptical comments.


 * So when considered with other points made, the case for removing the quote IMO far outweighs the case for keeping it.
 * Partial misattribution of quote to Tyson. (This alone is reason to drop the quote).
 * The historical basis is incorrect.
 * Tyson's rambling opinion is not as succinct, scientific and as incisive as Hawking.
 * Tyson's quote requires the full context with the response rather than cherry-picking.
 * It is superfluous to the page. The entire article is already heavily weighed down with negative points or criticism of astrology rather than information – adding both astronomer's quotes would only exaggerate the problem.


 * So unless someone can show that the case for the switch put forward by several editors is unfounded and present a stronger case why Tyson’s quote merits inclusion, I intend to replace it with Hawking’s quote. Robert Currey   talk  11:29, 20 April 2011 (UTC)
 * I think it should stay, for the same reason as earlier. Some editors raised concerns about removing it, but you seem to have inadvertently glossed over that. There's no reason why a long article on astrology should be strictly limited to a quote from Hawking, and Hawking only; Tyson's comments have their own merit. bobrayner (talk) 12:12, 20 April 2011 (UTC)


 * Bobrayner, thank you for your response. You write “There's no reason why a long article on astrology should be strictly limited to a quote from Hawking, and Hawking only …”  This argument is not applicable.  In the Astrology and Science section alone, there are currently 3 quotes (Huygens, Kurtz and Tyson) that are all sharply critical of astrology.  It would not be “Hawking and Hawking only.”


 * However, I agree that the article is long but, I believe it needs more informative content not more criticism. If you consider that the quotes should not be limited to Hawking and you value the Tyson quote highly, are you proposing the the removal of the other two quotes instead or not adding Hawking ?


 * If you still feel Tyson's quote merits inclusion, please could you state your case (other than Tyson is of note and his opinion is not singular - which I accept) and clarify the following:
 * What event or development occurred 600 years ago that discredited astrology?
 * How can you justify the inclusion of quotes in a controversial Wikipedia page where there is uncertainty about the attribution and comments have at best been paraphrased by a newspaper?
 * Can you accept having the full context of Tyson’s quote including the response or do you want to cherry-pick the bits you like?
 * Would you support the inclusion of similar general unsupported opinions favourable to astrology?
 * Robert Currey  talk  17:26, 20 April 2011 (UTC)
 * As the case for this replacement has been made while fundamental shortcomings with Tyson’s quote remain unanswered, I intend to proceed.  Robert Currey   talk  22:45, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

Another Tyson quote
"Many people say alchemy predates chemistry, astrology, predates astronomy, and [they're], sort of, kindred spirits of the past. No! No, no, because no one today still does alchemy. It's recognized as a flawed approach to understanding the behavior of matter. You still have people today getting paid by other people to read their horoscopes. So one did not lead to another, astrology was, sort of, always there and is always still there. Meanwhile there are people actually trying to figure out the universe. Like Ptolemy. He had the wrong idea with his geocentric model but he's not invoking astrology. That's two thousand years ago. So, astrology, as old as it is, is not a modern precursor to modern physics the way alchemy is a modern precursor to modern chemistry. They are not corresponding enterprises." 
 * I've listened to Tyson talk about astrology a few times, and he is generally dissing horoscopic astrology. That criticism may be a bit hollow given the changes in some modern practices.  But he also raises criticisms about the sun being in a different position today than 2000 years ago, and how there are actually 14 constellations, not 12.  If we're going to take seriously the idea that astrological education and research is going on, we should include some of the more pointed and specific criticisms of it as well. Ocaasic 18:59, 30 March 2011 (UTC)
 * One of the problems with this page is there isn’t enough that informs people what astrology is and too much space devoted to what astrology isn’t. I have heard Tyson speak and he is very articulate on astronomy and physics.  However, this quote is another example of uncharacteristic verbiage.  Yet, again he starts with a fallacy but this time he adds weasel words; “Many people say … astrology, predates astronomy”  Who are the many?  An unqualified sun sign astrologer on a slow planet day?  Has this been argued here?


 * The history is clear that astrology and astronomy were synonymous until astrology became heresy in the Islamic world. No one knows for certain whether the ancient megaliths were for chronology, astronomy, astrology, religion, burial, gatherings … or all of the above.  This is a straw man argument and it’s the same with heliocentricity, precession and the 13 or 14 constellations arguably touching the ecliptic.  There are solid arguments against astrology: the lack of strong scientific evidence and associated with this the lack of a known mechanism.  Hawking says it all in one crisp sentence – anything else that we add is just diluting his substance with froth to an article that has become one big sceptical Cappucino.


 * What does Tyson mean “…astrology was, sort of, always there and is always still there…”? And what does he mean “Like Ptolemy … not invoking astrology.”?  And let’s drop his original quote especially since nobody can explain how astrology was discredited 600 years ago?  Maybe I’ve been gazing up at the stars too long but his comments make no sense to me - so how can we expect visitors to the page to intuit what Tyson means?  Robert Currey   talk  00:07, 31 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Reading the Tyson transcript makes me conclude that the purpose of the discussion was rather more 'infotainment' (what a crassly ugly word) than a serious refutation of astrology, so I lean towards Mr Currey's interpretation. I am also completely convinced that the present content of the article leaves a curious but detached reader completely clueless about astrological methodology, practices, artefacts and deliverables.


 * However, I'm intrigued by where Ocaasi is headed with the oblique reference that there are 14 constellations (aren't there actually many more than that?) and that Sol is not in the same position it was 2000 years ago (is that not accepted?). I suspect my interest is sparked by my failure to glean from the article any understanding why astrology places importance on only some celestial objects, and not others.  So, an explanation of this latter point, and an explanation of how the former point is relevant to it might be well worth the effort.  Regards  Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   02:54, 31 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Tyson is reflecting about as mainstream an understanding as we can get. If he thinks astrology is bunk on grounds a, b, and c, we should explain those grounds.  If they're incorrect debunkings, than we really need good sources to address why.  This might be too detailed for the main astrology article, but it belongs in Scientific criticism of astrology or somesuch.  Robert, I'm less concerned about using Tyson's rhetoric per se than addressing the points he addresses.  Remember, that our article is not supposed to reflect the truth but the reality of how reliable sources approach this subject.  The proving has to be published in a place we can cite, and only then can we make definitive statements in defense of astrology.  I take it you have such books; even then, it will still set up a bit of a he said-she said dialogue, since no astrology book will outright override a voice like Tyson's.  It's just not what happens in the scientific discourse, or in policy on WP.  WP:FRINGE will be most helpful here. Ocaasi c 06:11, 31 March 2011 (UTC)


 * OK, Ocaasi, this makes more sense to me now. What I cannot understand is why there is not already a page dedicated to Astrology and Science.  I think an outline of the principal issues is important on the main page, but you are right the scientific arguments, whether right or wrong are of interest and should be addressed in full.  It might save a lot of wasted arguments on forums.  I believe a page entitled Scientific criticism of astrology is too judgemental, narrow and will end up preaching the choir.


 * I believe it should include details of recent astrological and sceptical research and an outline of the principles of natural astrology. A lot of the criticism is historical and has changed.  A century ago astrologers were criticised for being too deterministic and now they are criticised for not making precise predictions.  I suspect that if all the issues were vented on an Astrology and Science page, it would reduce the excess steam on this page and focus on relevant information.  In an Astrology & Science page, comments by Tyson et al are more relevant as they reflect the emotional base and tone of the general criticism and the lack of basic astrological knowledge by well respected astronomers.  It is arguable that we would be doing Tyson a disservice by drawing attention to what appear to be casual remarks.


 * Mr Strempel - I think 'infotainment' is probably the fairest way to frame Tyson's comments. It's not science just as there are also quotes of unsupportable claims by media sun sign astrologers.  I also agree that the Astrology article does have gaps as an explanation of what astrology is and the methodology.  I hope to fill some of these gaps.  However, astrology is a huge subject and we need experts in different areas (Hindu, Mayan/Aztec, Medieval astrology and in astrological education) to be encouraged to help with the edit.  A quick answer to your question about the constellations - there are many more than 14 (for example the IAU defined 88 in 1922, but it is highly subjective) - this is about the number of constellations that cross the ecliptic - the apparent path of the Sun.  Also, astrologers do know about Precession of the Equinox since astrologers discovered it and adjusted the zodiac accordingly. All of this requires a lengthy technical description and could be addressed in full in a section on the Astronomical basis of the Model in an Astrology and Science page.  Robert Currey   talk  10:58, 31 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Unless anyone has any objections, I propose replacing the Tyson quote with the Hawking quote with the following proposed new draft paragraph.     Robert Currey   talk  21:54, 12 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Personally, I'd rather keep the Tyson quote - I think it gives some good colour to how astronomers view astrology. However, it might be better moved to another position in the article. bobrayner (talk) 22:46, 12 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Removing the Tyson quote is whitewashing. I oppose this proposal.  Skinwalker (talk) 23:31, 12 April 2011 (UTC)
 * I don't care for that terminology. If we did remove the quote, it would only be because a more academic quote made in a more serious context replaced it.  This would not be whitewashing, but moving-up.  I personally think we should have both quotes (Hawking and Tyson), but move Tyson to a section on Public perception and criticism (Tyson, though definitely a scientist, is most notable not for his science but his science education, which fits better in that section imo.  Hawking, known for his science primarily, is ideal for the Science section itself). Ocaasi c 23:39, 12 April 2011 (UTC)
 * What does Tyson's quote add though? I thinkt he paragraph that Robert Currey posted above seems perfectly adaquate for capturing the essence of why the scientific establishment views astrology as a pseudoscience, whereas the Tyson quote is merely a reflection of his own personal view, and his notion that it was discredited 600 years ago does not bear up to scrutiny. Xpaulk (talk) 10:41, 13 April 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your responses. I am going to respond in the section above referring to the original Tyson quote as there may be some confusion between the original quote and 'Another Tyson Quote' proposed by Ocaasi.  Robert Currey   talk  10:31, 14 April 2011 (UTC)
 * I agree that the article needs a lot of work on it, I would be in favour of having a section "Criticism of Astrology", much like you see on other articles, and keep all criticisms confined to that paragraph, in other words remove them from everywhere else and place them there. For example, I don't think the statement "Psychology explains much of the continued faith in astrology as a matter of cognitive biases" has a place in the opening paragraph about what astrology is. This is much more appropriate for a section on the criticisms of astrology. For example, examine the Palmistry article, you have a section dedicated to 'Science and criticism' where such matters are consigned to that section. Saying in the opening article of astrology what the scientific community feels or does not feel is irrelevant to astrology which is unaffiliated with the scientific community. It would be like adding in that "The roman catholic church does not advocate the use of fortune telling in any form", it's irrelevant to the subject matter. Xpaulk (talk) 11:45, 14 April 2011 (UTC)
 * I would support removing the 'cognitive biases' line to the science section. IMO it doesn't read well. However, we need to be very clear upfront, in the lead, that astrology is a pseudoscience. That's central to what it is, and no complete coverage can be made without it. — kwami (talk) 10:55, 24 April 2011 (UTC)

Replacing Tyson's Quote with Hawking's
Kwami, my last edit was to undo all previous edits on this topic and to take the page back to the original state. By undoing this edit, you have now included both Hawking and Tyson’s quote. I can only assume that this was an oversight and you have not been following the discussion of this topic that has been running on the talk page since 29th March. If you had, it would be clear that I was proposing Hawking’s quote as a superior replacement for Tyson as a compromise for removing Tyson’s poor quality quote. Therefore, I request that you please undo your edit and, if after reading this, you still feel that Tyson’s quote should be retained, state your case (including addressing the shortcomings listed below) on the Talk Page.

Alternatively, if you were aware of the background when you edited, you are again inciting an edit war again as broke out with you and costmary. There was then in my view as much reason for banning you as there was costmary. This kind of action is not in the spirit of the work everyone is trying to do on this page. In fact, it is contrary to your own proposals. On 21st March on this Talk Page you wrote: “Basically, I was thinking of treating this as, say, the MOS, which is protected but which people edit after proposing new wording on the talk page.” This sounded like a reasonable suggestion to me and I have worked hard to follow your guidance. However, in this instance you have not followed your word and I much hope that you will correct this oversight and return to the page to the original state and continue to protect it so we can reasonably discuss how to handle these quotes.

Skinwalker, you undid my deletion of Tyson’s quote stating that there is “no consensus”. However, you then inserted Hawking’s quote even though there is no consensus about including both quotes. My argument has been that the quote of Tyson’s opinions has serious shortcomings besides being unclear and unscientific and should be removed from the page. Last Thursday, I asked you, Skinwalker to state your case for retaining Tyson’s quote and that you address the issues raised. I waited until Sunday and having received no response, I made the changes on the assumption that you could not disagree with these shortcomings or answer the following questions. I accept that Tyson is of note and that others may share his views. This alone does not justify inclusion. Both of the arguments recently advanced in favour of retaining the quote are not sustainable:
 * 1) 	What event or development occurred 600 years ago that discredited astrology?
 * 2) 	How can you justify the inclusion of quotes in a controversial Wikipedia page where there is uncertainty about the attribution and comments have at best been paraphrased by a newspaper?
 * 3) 	Can you accept having the full context of Tyson’s quote including the response or do you want to cherry-pick the bits you like?
 * 4) 	Would you support the inclusion of similar general unsupported opinions favourable to astrology?
 * Skinwalker's argument that removing this quote is whitewashing. There is no question of 'whitewashing' as the Astrology Page contains 8 paragraphs that are critical of astrology and 10 that contain criticism of astrology. Adding another critical quote is WP:UNDUE at this stage.
 * Bobrayner stated that "it gives some good colour to how astronomers view astrology." Also that "There's no reason why a long article on astrology should be strictly limited to a quote from Hawking, and Hawking only;..." In the Astrology and Science section alone, besides Hawking, there are 3 quotes critical of astrology and the critical opinions of astronomers: Huuygens, Frankenoi and Sagan are also expressed (as well as 5 traditional Islamic Astrologers).  So if anything there is a strong case for inclusion of quotes by more astrologers and fewer astronomers (especially opinions that are unrelated to astronomy or indeed science).

It is ironic that the page still lacks any mention of one of the most famous of all astronomers and astrologers, Claudius Ptolemy.

I apologize for any repetition of points, but I sense that some people are acting without responding or even reading the discussion.

I am travelling overseas on business this coming week, so I am unlikely to be able to respond during this time, but I trust that some editors here can work to sort this out in a reasonable way. Robert Currey  talk  15:10, 25 April 2011 (UTC)

Sections
Can we combine Traditions and Horoscopic Astrology into the History section? The History section is not too long yet, and those two sections are almost entirely historical at the moment. Ocaasic 20:27, 29 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Seems reasonable to me. All the sub-sections could stand being looked at again for consolidation.  Regards  Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   23:32, 29 March 2011 (UTC)


 * I am doing some research with a view to improving the entire History section with references. Traditions and Horoscopic Astrology could be merged pro tem.  The chronological sequence should be Origins, Horoscopic Astrology and then Traditions. Rather than Traditions, I would be inclined to use a term like Medieval Astrology.  But I am seeking advice from experts on this period of history, before proposing anything.  I will be away next week, but I hope to have something in the middle of next month if the task has not been done by someone else.  Robert Currey  (talk) 06:45, 30 March 2011 (UTC)

Notable astrologers
I asked the Crestone Astrologer who he considered notable astrologers and here is his list:
 * Dane Rudhyar
 * Robert Hand
 * Steven Forrest
 * Isabel Hickey
 * James Braha

He agrees that our article is a train wreck and, of course, considers calling astrology a pseudoscience an insult; also: "We don't claim astrology is a science; it is divination informed by intuition." We fail... User:Fred Bauder Talk 18:38, 5 April 2011 (UTC)


 * Considered a notable astrologer by whom and on what basis? Train wreck? A work in progress, I think.  Fail?  Nothing is ever a failure until it's done, and we're not done here yet.  Regards —  Peter S Strempel  &#124;  Talk   20:45, 5 April 2011 (UTC)


 * @Fred, Great to include those names. Hopefully we can also characterize their different styles/approaches, give some brief background on their education and notability.


 * Astrology may not be 'pseudoscientific' in all hands, but it's definitely 'unscientific' in most. If that's what we're trying to get across, we can always just say that "science doesn't accept that astrology is effective or that there is any non-physical correlation (tides, etc.) between planetary movement and human behaviors".  It may be true that calling astrology a pseudoscience is only in response to the small group of astrologers who claim that serious research supports their position.  Since they are representing astrology as backed by science, and often speaking in scientific terms about mechanisms and paradigms, for them 'pseudoscience' does apply, at least from the POV of scientific consensus.  On the other hand, to the extend that astrologers make predictions at all, it is kind of a pseudoscience, even as a form of structured divination.  Divination has a set of procedures to determine and analyze the future.  To the extent that divination process is more than intuition, and especially when it involves a purportedly non-arbitrary interface such as the planets (rather than tea leaves or dice or tarot cards), there is a similarity to science, a pretense to science, even if not intentional, that is basically pseudoscience.  Maybe a better term would be pseudo-rational, but that sounds even worse and just isn't the term used by RS. Ocaasi c 20:48, 5 April 2011 (UTC)


 * I don't think a list of notable astrologers (particularly historically as well) could be complete without including the likes of:
 * Ptolemy
 * Vettius Valens
 * Guido Bonatti
 * Liz Greene
 * William Lily
 * Evangeline Adams
 * All of whom are notable for the influence or fame in their lifetimes (Liz Greene is of course still alive). To not include Ptolemy on a list of notable astrologers, for example, would be mind boggling.
 * Xpaulk (talk) 12:59, 6 April 2011 (UTC)


 * The train-wreck analogy has too much finality for me. The train needs to unload some unnecessary freight and the carriages need refurbishment, but we are still on the rails.


 * The omission of traditional astrologers especially Ptolemy and Lily needs to be corrected. The problem I have with inclusion of late 20th and early 21st century astrologers like Steven Forrest and Isabel Hickey, is that there are many others who also merit a mention such as Bernadette Brady, Dr Nicholas Campion, Alexander Ruperti, Dr Richard Tarnas, Derek & Julia Parker, Noel Tyl, Bruno & Louise Huber, Howard Sasportas, Sue Tompkins, Dr Bruce Scofield, Dr Pat Harris plus many more.  Most of these are authors and outstanding educators.  It is difficult to establish their status objectively and impossible to know their impact on the field of astrology in decades to come.  Robert Currey   talk  13:24, 12 April 2011 (UTC)


 * "It is difficult to establish their status objectively and impossible to know their impact on the field of astrology in decades to come". Quite probably. Hence, per Wikipedia policy, we don't include them in the article. See WP:NOTCRYSTALBALL (and perhaps irony ;) ). AndyTheGrump (talk) 14:38, 12 April 2011 (UTC)
 * I agree. I'd be all for removing the majority of the modern astrologers unless they are exceptional in some way. For example Evangeline Adams is noteworthy, not because of her amazing astrological abilities, but because she was focused upon in a legal setting having been acquited of fortune telling - in other words she's notable due to a kind of precedence being set regarding the legality of fortune telling in New York. Liz Greene should be noted because she is credited with altering a negative perception of Saturn in her book Saturn a new look at an old devil. Either way the old authors, who certainly did shape astrology, should be noted without a doubt, particularly Ptolemy. Xpaulk (talk) 10:46, 13 April 2011 (UTC)


 * How can we edit the page to include a list of notable astrologers? Xpaulk (talk) 09:19, 26 April 2011 (UTC)

Revision of Criticism
This article has criticisms of astrology sprawled haphazzardly all throughout the article. I suggest we clear up the article by creating a section for "Scientific viewpoint and criticisms", in which we can put all such criticisms. For example, the opening section, which should describe what Astrology is, suggests that "The scientific community bases astrology's pseudoscientific status in its making predictive claims which either cannot be falsified or have been consistently disproved." this is in spite of the fact that there is already a section dedicated to science's opinion of astrology. As such this paragraph is better suited to that section. I suggest the entire article is revised to place such criticisms and scientific rebuttals in their own section. This was clearly the original intent of including sections such as "Astrology and Science". Xpaulk (talk) 08:43, 21 April 2011 (UTC)
 * That is not how things are done at Wikipedia. It is not satisfactory to make an unqualified assertion in one part of an article when the assertion has received appropriate criticism from suitable sources. Johnuniq (talk) 10:49, 21 April 2011 (UTC)
 * WP:CRITICISM is worth reading. We have some flexibility but separate criticism sections are generally a symptom of bad writing.  That said, I'm not opposed to it if the section is robust and it facilitates more productive content editing. Ocaasi c 13:20, 21 April 2011 (UTC)
 * just as a note, WP:CRITICISM is not an excuse for indulging in bad writing; if the article is just being argumentative then probably what needs to happen is that excess criticism gets pruned, and a criticism section could help with that. but...  -- Ludwigs 2  17:12, 21 April 2011 (UTC)

" 'Just a pseudo-science' is a wholly inadequate characterization of ancient astrology." -- Roger Beck, A Brief History of Ancient Astrology — Preceding unsigned comment added by 91.114.97.178 (talk) 12:30, 17 June 2011 (UTC)


 * We don't say that. There was no science, therefore no pseudoscience. Astrology couldn't pretend to be something that did not exist yet. — kwami (talk) 12:40, 17 June 2011 (UTC)

Edit request from P.Ganakan, 22 April 2011
in Kerala a southern state of India, The Ganaka/kaniyar Panicker/Kaniyan community is well known for their traditional practice of astrology (Jyothisaha) P.Ganakan (talk) 17:47, 22 April 2011 (UTC)


 * Please explain the notability of such information. Moreover, Wikipedia cannot be a reference for another Wikipedia article.   Orange Marlin  Talk• Contributions 19:13, 22 April 2011 (UTC)

This WP entry is not working. A suggestion for a new approach.
Sorry to be a negferret, but this WP entry is notably bad, for many reasons. Maybe it's because there are too many images but even the layout is a mess. Huge chunks of white space between the sections. Some sections are heavily overworked whilst others have insufficient content/just a link. (Perhaps it looks fine on a laptop or differrent sized monitors?)

What is on display generates a lot of controversy - unecessarily I think. (I've just come from a page on a holocaust denier, and by comparison that page is informative and credible and lacks the emotive tone that this one does). For all the discussion assertions of NPOV etc; this page strikes the reader for its lack of clear, effective reporting. Reading through the discussions it seems that contributors are at war across conflicting viewpoints. This page has no hope of salvage whilst that remains the case. (I am an editor who wants to improve the quality of WP,BTW, I am not arguing for or against astrology).

Maybe the subject itself is too big and difffuclt to define, but the whole thing smacks of chaos and suffers from a lack of consistency. Why not consider a new approach - scrap this page down to one short introductory comment on how astrology differs from astronomy, and simply lead that into a well organised list of hierarchical links that lead to different sections. Then you can eliminate concerns such as a western notion of astrology misrepreseting eastern notions, etc; and the discussions on the science of astrology and the history of astrology can be expanded appropriately.

It looks like the group has made a half-hearted movement towards this approach but it doesn't work because it's not fully efective, and now the whole page looks like a mess of different people trying to make the page say what they want it to say. Be dramatic and segregate it all. As it is, this is not working as an introduction to the subject at all. Sorry. If there is any leg work I can help with that, but for now just passing on my view.Selkhet (talk) 09:06, 6 June 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm not a expert on this subject or very familiar with this article, but I don't consider Selkhet's suggestion to be outrageous at all. I've seen long articles burnt down to a stub for complete rebuilding a couple of times, to good effect. It is rare and is an extreme measure. Whether this article requires such an extreme measure I don't know. Maybe. Herostratus (talk) 16:03, 6 June 2011 (UTC)

Edit request from Treer, 5 July 2011
please change  

to

 

as citations 8 and 9 are broken links, i.e.

http://www.rudolfhsmit.nl/u-case2.htm should be updated to http://www.astrology-and-science.com/u-case2.htm

and http://www.abc.net.au/science/news/stories/s1623400.htm should be updated to http://www.abc.net.au/science/articles/2006/04/25/1623400.htm

Retrieved 5 July 2011

Treer (talk) 12:13, 5 July 2011 (UTC)


 * Done. MakeSense64 (talk) 12:33, 5 July 2011 (UTC)