Talk:Astrology/Archive 21

The language convention of this page
I have removed the header banner saying that this page uses American English. This matter was recently raised and from what I remember at the time several editors objected to the proposal. I was happy not to have a controversy then, following so quickly on the heels of a difficult discussion.

I've since realised that the WP Manual of Style expects that British English conventions are used in punctuation. For example:


 * Correct: Arthur said that the situation was "deplorable". (English convention)


 * Not: Arthur said that the situation was "deplorable." (American convention).

Before we reinstate the banner can we have a discussion on this to establish what the consensus of opinion really is?


 * British English - my preference --  Zac   Δ talk! 13:56, 12 August 2011 (UTC)


 * !vote - I can live happily with British English or American English - it's a detail to me. What I consider important is that whatever is written is succinct, understandable to a wide educated audience, with minimal jargon and free from anachronistic words. Short sentences! Short paragraphs! Well chosen subheadings!  Any banner with a flag flying at the top of this page is too imperialistic for my taste unless it is the Manx flag (as we never had any colonies and still have AAA credit rating)!   Robert Currey   talk  14:37, 12 August 2011 (UTC)


 * (Can I ask what !vote means Robert? Are abstaining? One way or another we have to decide on the language, because the only thing that matters is that whatever we choose is consistently applied)


 * I don't see any need for a !vote regarding this: the MOS is clear regarding punctuation within quotes, and as I understand it, this was arrived at by community consensus after considerable debate. We cannot unilaterally decide to ignore the MOS in one article. If people aren't happy with the MOS, this isn't the place to debate the issue. AndyTheGrump (talk) 15:19, 12 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Hi Andy - I'm not proposing that we ignore the policy on punctuation!! No, I accept that we can't do that. I just want to be clear about the policy we are adopting where the MOS says it depends on the language adopted.

Obviously, if many editors object tot he vote it is best ignored - I'm just not clear where we'll stand then on the policy we've adopted. Does that mean defaulting back to American English because Petersburg too the initiative to flag the page? --  Zac   Δ talk! 15:31, 12 August 2011 (UTC)


 * I'm not against the vote, but I am abstaining at this point as I have no strong opinion on this. If the vote is split on 22 August, I will try to vote so that we can resolve this question.   Robert Currey   talk  16:33, 12 August 2011 (UTC)


 * I've seen enough spelling and punctuation by editors here to tell you who is from where, except the damn Canadians who go both ways! I abstain. Ken McRitchie (talk) 01:11, 13 August 2011 (UTC)

Blind or Double-Blind?
In the sub-section Carlson's Experiment, the text goes "A different approach to testing astrology quantitatively uses double-blind chart matching tests. The most renowned[89] of these is Shawn Carlson's double-blind experiment in which he challenged 28 astrologers to match..." I believe that the first use of the word double-blind should be blind as these were blind experiments in the sense that the participating astrologers were attempting to match profiles to charts without knowing the identities of the subjects. The Carlson test, in particular, was designed as a double-blind experiment in that the researchers also could not know who belonged to the control group and the experimental group until after the data had been recorded. Robert Currey  talk  07:25, 13 August 2011 (UTC)


 * I've changed it as suggested. I will be taking a Wiki break for a couple of weeks. Thanks to all who shared in the editing this past while. Ken McRitchie (talk) 17:52, 13 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Thanks, Ken - have a good break. Robert Currey   talk  22:42, 13 August 2011 (UT

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please explain
I don't see a thing anywhere in the article saying that many people disbelieve astrology. Is there a reason for this? Alicianpig (talk) 06:32, 15 August 2011 (UTC)


 * I would have thought this is self-evident from the content of the criticisms section, and also implicit in the comments where statistics are given for the percentage of people who believe in it. But maybe this should be made more explicit. Any ideas on that?


 * Wrote the above earlier and forgot to sign. But on second thoughts, no I don't think there is a problem here. There is a clear recognition that many people don't believe in astrology as demonstrated by the inclusion of criticisms against it and the data given on what percentages of the population do.  Any improvement on the stats regarding that are valuable however. --   Zac   Δ talk! 13:24, 15 August 2011 (UTC)

Carlson review
Daniel I have undone your edit which removed the following from the article:

Initially, the Carlson experiment was criticized as having a biased design that made the astrologers' tasks more difficult than they needed to be, but deeper flaws in method and analysis emerged. Carlson had disregarded his own stated criteria of evaluation, grouped data into irrelevant categories, rejected unexpected results without reporting them, and drew an illogical conclusion based on the null hypothesis. When the stated measurement criterion was applied, and the published data was evaluated according to the normal conventions of the social sciences, the two tests performed by the participating astrologers provided significant evidence (astrologers' ranking test: p = .054 with ES = .15, and astrologers' rating test: p = .037 with ES = .10), despite the unfair design, of their ability to successfully match CPIs to natal charts. Observers have called for more detailed and stringent double-blind experiments.

Such a significant edit calls for discussion and evaluation. The only explanation you gave was in your edit summary, which read: "using fringe publications to criticize mainstream research violates WP:UNDUE." I would question your characterisation of "mainstream research"? The review of the experiment, which found it to be flawed and biased, was made by an independent, respected authority, Hans Eysenck, who has an excellent reputation as seen by his long history of publications in well known science journals. He therefore represents 'the mainstream', because his review called for a more stringent application of the standards science expects. Additionally, be careful about what you assume to be 'fringe journals'. The reference to Correlation, for example, goes to what is regarded to be the premier journal of astrological research; its remit accords with the standard academic requirements that all submissions are peer-reviewed by suitably qualified experts in the fields of astrology, physics, and statistics. The NPOV policy reads: "Editing from a neutral point of view (NPOV) means representing fairly, proportionately, and as far as possible without bias, all significant views that have been published by reliable sources." That is the case here, so it is not adhering to policy, but breaking it, to remove reliably substantiated material that is directly relevant to the content of this page. --  Zac   Δ talk! 19:48, 26 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Eysenck isn't a terrible source, what I object to is the perceived tearing apart of a legitimate study using biased marginal sourcing. I don't know about "Correlation" and I can't find anything about it aside from astrologers praising it. I'll bring it up at the reliable source noticeboard.  The Journal of Scientific Exploration is definitely a fringe source as is ISAR International Astrologer.  -- Daniel  20:38, 26 September 2011 (UTC)


 * I'm curious why you defend the flawed study as 'legitimate', given the well-established criticisms raised against it. And why are you suggesting "biased marginal sourcing" in the reporting of these criticisms? When you say "The Journal of Scientific Exploration is definitely a fringe source" you need to appreciate that the definition only applies because it gives coverage to subjects that are classed as 'fringe subjects' - in other words, it explores topics such as astrology. In a discussion of a hard science, such a journal might be deemed in appropriate; here it is not. The WP page on the journal states:


 * "Bernard Haisch and Martha Sims, respectively past editor-in-chief and past executive director, describe the Journal of Scientific Exploration as a 'peer-reviewed journal following the customs and standards of academic journals but designed specifically for the scholarly study of anomalies'.[1][4] If an article or essay paper is accepted 'but there remain points of disagreement between authors and referee(s), the reviewer(s) may be given the option of having their opinion(s) published 'subject to the Editor-in-Chief's judgment as to length, wording, and the like'.[2] The policy of the journal is to maintain a critical view by presenting both sides of an argument so as not to advocate for or against any of the published topics."


 * So it is an appropriate journal to refer to for papers published on this subject. The policy on Fringe states:


 * "One important bellwether for determining the notability and level of acceptance of fringe ideas related to science, history or other academic pursuits is the presence or absence of peer reviewed research on the subject. While a lack of peer-reviewed sources does not automatically mean that the subject should be excluded from Wikipedia, there must be adequate reliable sources to allow the subject to be covered in sufficient detail without engaging in original research. Care should be taken with journals that exist mainly to promote a particular viewpoint. Journals that are not peer reviewed by the wider academic community should not be considered reliable, except to show the views of the groups represented by those journals."


 * Again, those policies have been adhered to here. Not every reference has to be to a peer-reviewed journal, of course, where there is a collection of reaffirming references published across a range of sources with reliable reputations, it is important to represent the collection of testimonies, to demonstrate that the information is widely reported. --  Zac   Δ talk! 21:19, 26 September 2011 (UTC)


 * I've added my 2c on the noticeboard. Disagree with Daniel J. Leivick to drastically edit the article unilaterally and without discussion. SLP (talk) 23:24, 26 September 2011 (UTC)
 * See WP:BRD. -- Daniel 23:29, 26 September 2011 (UTC)


 * WP:BRD is a suggestion for a problem where "too many people are stuck discussing endlessly, and no progress can be made". Not the situation here. WP recommends that referenced material is never removed without appropriate talk-page discussion with the involved editors. --  Zac   Δ talk! 23:48, 26 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Then try WP:BOLD. The idea that I should have to clear edits on the talk page is the anathema of what Wikipedia is. -- Daniel  23:54, 26 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Not when it involves substantiated content. And please take the trouble to read the notice in the box above, which all editors here have laboured under: "Since the nature of this topic has been deemed controversial, all contributors are asked to please respect Wikipedia's policy No Personal Attacks (WP:NPA) and to abide by consensus (WP:CON). It is also important to discuss substantial changes here before making them, supplying full citations when adding information."
 * None of the material is substantiated. All of the sources cited are totally unacceptable according to WP:RS. Consensus cannot trump core policy. Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 01:10, 27 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Agreed that none of those references are reliable, and the section needs to be removed. Yobol (talk) 01:17, 27 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Most of the sources in the section "Gauquelin's research" appear to be similarly unreliable. Sigh. Yobol (talk) 01:28, 27 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Indeed. I've deleted that section, too. Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 01:34, 27 September 2011 (UTC)
 * I find all this utterly odd. Suitbert Ertel was a professor of psychology at Göttingen until his retirement and studied so-called paranormal things critically; Hans Eysenck was arguably the world's leading expert on psychological tests. As for Gauquelin, his massive research on claimed planetary effects, whatever one thinks of them, constitute the weightiest body of work on the cubject and deserves more than cursory attention.Axel 02:45, 27 September 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by AxelHarvey (talk • contribs)
 * All material added must comply with WP:RS, WP:FRINGE, WP:PSEUDOSCIENCE and WP:GEVAL. If you find this "utterly odd", I suggest you read these policies. Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 02:49, 27 September 2011 (UTC)

All of the editors that have invested their time into this article are aware of the applicable policies and how they apply. The act of dropping a few policy codes does not give you or anyone the authority to break or twist those WP policies to serve an agenda. There has also been a great deal of collaboration, consideration, and adherence to the policy that is clearly marked at the top of this talk page - that substantial changes are fully discussed before they are applied.

The notice marks this page as a controversial subject which is in need of cautious and sensible editing. A lot of work has gone into resolving problems and avoiding heated disputes, so that points of criticism can be raised and addressed calmly and appropriately. The greater part of the ruthless edits that have occured tonight, based on knee-jerk reactions, are non-constructive edits that have removed highly significant material, substantiated by numerous reliable sources. These have clearly broken WP policy. The only sensible course of action is to restore the previous consensus-driven content, with the reminder that editors working on this subject are obliged to engage in the process of objective discussion and thoughtful evaluation that the policy of this page requires. --  Zac   Δ talk! 04:46, 27 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Cautious and sensible editing means not adding material that is not backed up with reliable sources, as determined by WP policy. The rest of your arguments are nonsensical and specious. Your interpretation of WP sourcing policies is grossly deficient. Please read the policies again and conform to them. Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 04:55, 27 September 2011 (UTC)


 * What I don't see here is a discussion attempting to establish the credibility ot otherwise of a source. Who has determined, e.g., that Shaun Carlson is more credible than Professor Suitbert Ertel? A proper discussion would go into things like numbers of papers published, where published, how often cited, if one is tenured faculty, &c. None of which I see here. As for the criticism of my action yesterday - since all I did was restore text that was there previously, then that text must have been based on consesnus, no? For the reasons I have just mentioned, the comments I see above about the alleged unreliability of references does not seem based on any thorough discussion. And a final technical glitch: the robot said my comment was unsigned, but I did sign it with four tildes, after which my name (Axel) appeared followed by a time stamp. I never get a blue link when I sign. How does one arrange that? Axel 23:37, 27 September 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by AxelHarvey (talk • contribs)

Request for comment on sourcing
This request is closed. Please see new RfC section below.

Concerns have been raised about whether the content of this article conforms to WP policies concerning pseudoscientific/fringe subjects, most especially whether the sources used conform to WP:RS, and whether they are used properly. Your input would be greatly appreciated. Thank you. Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 06:14, 27 September 2011 (UTC)
 * No Is this a trick question? Johnuniq (talk) 06:44, 27 September 2011 (UTC)


 * This is too vague a question. Which sources? All of them? HiLo48 (talk) 06:52, 27 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Exactly, for the input to be useful and serve any purpose at all, editors with concerns should identify which, if any sources, cause concerns, and propose suggestions that would make the article of more value to its readers. Be aware that the policy on Due and Undue Weight weight requires that the article "fairly represents all significant viewpoints that have been published by reliable sources". Also, that in an article specifically about a fringe subject "such views may receive more attention and space".  I'm surprised that the request for comment has been made here, since there is an ongoing discussion about this issue, less than 1 day old, on the reliable sources noticeboard. --   Zac   Δ talk! 07:14, 27 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Wrong premise! DV, your request would have some validity if it had simply stated ""Concerns have been raised about whether the content of this article conforms to WP policies". No need for the "concerning pseudoscientific/fringe subjects" bit. If it doesn't conform to WP policies, it doesn't conform period. Moriori (talk) 07:21, 27 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Are you able to provide examples of peer-reviewed journals that would be both amenable to publishing articles on astrology and acceptable to you? The publication in Nature of Carlson in 1985 was an exception as the Carlson experiment was sponsored by CSICOP and the editor, John Maddox was a fellow of CSICOP. Nature, in the 25 years since, has refused to publish papers on astrology including an attempt to replicate Carlson.  Editors of psychology journals will refer studies connected with astrology to Correlation, the premier peer-reviewed journal in the field, or ISAR, unless the paper primarily involves psychology.  Correlation publishes papers that are both critical of astrology by well-known sceptics and tests that support astrology. I don't know enough about ISAR to comment.  However, it is a circular argument to claim that astrology lacks evidence, but to suppress any journal that investigates and publishes astrological tests that are conducted under scientific conditions and peer-reviewed.    Robert Currey   talk  09:04, 27 September 2011 (UTC)

Here and here are two sources which I just removed. I don't have time to look any closer right now, but I hope someone does have time. Mystylplx (talk) 07:25, 27 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Procedural comment: I'm uninvolved in this topic, got a notification Feedback request service about this RfC. The RfC is not specific enough to actually enable uninvolved editors to meaningfully participate. Could the initiatior or any other involved editor actually explain what the concerns are over the reliability of the sources? Which sources in particular? Given the points made by Zachariel about the existence of a thread on WP:RSN, I think the best thing would be for an uninvolved admin to close this RfC and then open an RfC that actually specifies what the damn point of contention is. —Tom Morris (talk) 08:41, 27 September 2011 (UTC)


 * The point of contention began last night when a new editor removed a relevant passage from the article without discussion. I restored the content, which held 5 references, on the basis that “such a significant edit calls for discussion and evaluation”. You can see what he removed and my response in the section directly above, subheaded: Carlson Review


 * The editor then raised a discussion on the reliable sources noticeboard, on whether the peer-reviewed journal Correlation constitutes a reliable source. He proposed that this article uses “fringe sources to debunk mainstream research”. If you read the discussion you will see why I consider the suggestion unreasonable and unnecessarily provocative.


 * Within a few hours a number of new editors (including Dominus Vobisdu who opened this request for comment) made blanket removals of passages of the article with little or no explanation/discussion on the talk page. This took about 1000 words out of the article, and removed 30 references. I have argued that all of those indiscriminate cuts were non-constructive edits which failed to apply to the policy ruling made on this ‘controversial subject’ (to discuss substantial changes here before making them on the main page). On that basis, the original content has been restored with the request that any perceived problems be raised for discussion and proper evaluation. That was when Dominus Vobisdu, who seems to be very sparing in his/her own comments, made the request for others to comment.


 * Hope that helps. The objective attention of uninvolved is editors is very valuable. --   Zac   Δ talk! 10:27, 27 September 2011 (UTC)


 * The point is the vast majority of the sources used in the "Research" section is sourced to pro-astrology "journals" and literature; these are not mainstream sources, and the intended effect of this is to create a significant WP:WEIGHT problem by using this large number of pro-astrology sources. How on earth is it possible that the "Research" section is nearly 3 times larger than the "Scientific criticism" section, and no one finds anything wrong with this? Yobol (talk) 12:41, 27 September 2011 (UTC)

Original Research
The following text, "Astrologers may also find it difficult to publish their research in mainstream scientific journals for several reasons, and a case has been made to underline this difficulty from a much wider perspective." was sourced to this source, which does not mention Astrology at all. This is clear OR/synth, and should not be added back. Yobol (talk) 12:34, 27 September 2011 (UTC)

Tags
I'm adding NPOV and reliable source tags to the article, for reasons that should be obvious by reading the above discussion and the thread at WP:RSN. This article is biased towards the pro-astrology point of view and uses patently unreliable sources to push this POV. Skinwalker (talk) 23:33, 27 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Whilst totally rejecting your view, the tags are fair enough. We will go through each of the criticisms systematically and sensibly. At the end of the day blanket critisms are pretty pointless - each detail has to be looked at in context. --   Zac   Δ talk! 09:00, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

Joan Quigley
An editor has recently suggested the inclusion of US President Reagan's astrologer, Joan Quigley. Here is a suggested minimal text - I am unsure if it should be included in the Modern Era (history) section or we rename the Culture Influence section or elsewhere. Any thoughts?

In 1981, after John Hinckley's attempted assassination of President Reagan, first lady, Nancy Reagan commissioned astrologer, Joan Quigley to act as the secret White House astrologer. However, Quigley's role ended in 1988 when it became public through the memoirs of former chief of staff, Donald Regan.(refs given - now in article)

Robert Currey  talk  12:37, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

This is tricky because it belongs in the Modern Era history section, which needs development. One angle we could take there is to show how astrology got established as media entertainment, whilst bombing at the academic level - during the process of which practicing astrologers continued to practice as usual, and wield their own influence in ways such as this. But right now it doesn't fit well with the content in that section, so probably the best short-term fix is to put it in the Culture section - until we can move on from current concerns and develop the Modern Era text properly. --  Zac   Δ talk! 12:55, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Unless there are objections, I will add this to the Culture section pro tem. Robert Currey   talk  17:02, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
 * I have no objection, I think this is a good idea Wendy Stacey (talk) 00:13, 29 September 2011 (UTC)

This article appears not to be about 'astrology'
Rather than being an article about 'astrology' as an encyclopaedic subject, the article instead seems to me to have become a battleground between the 'believers' and the 'sceptics' over whether it 'works'. This is bad enough in itself, but it has also ensured that a major part of the topic isn't actually discussed at all: the significance of mainstream mass-media 'star-sign' horoscopes within popular culture. As I recently wrote on Fringe theories/Noticeboard, this omission may be explained by both 'serious' astrologers' and 'sceptics' likewise seeing these as tosh, but that doesn't alter the fact that it is almost certainly how most people experience, and perceive, astrology. And it isn't just a matter of abstract 'culture' either: in the 1990s, the Daily Mail for instance was grossing around £1 million per year from phone lines plugged by its printed horoscopes. Any balanced article on the topic should be placing greater emphasis on mass-market astrology, and less on esoteric debates between practitioners of a minor branch, and 'sceptics'. The subject matter should be defined by the subject, not by the current battleground in an on-Wikipedia dispute.

It also appears to not be about 'astrology' as a subject for another reason entirely - it is confined almost exclusively to one particular 'western' form' of the practice, and relegates other traditions to the sidelines - totally unbalanced in a top-level article. If an article is to solely discuss the 'western' astrological tradition, it should be named accordingly, and any top-level article entitled 'astrology' needs to give a more balanced account of the different variations. AndyTheGrump (talk) 01:39, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * I agree with both points, though I'm not volunteering to fix them. — kwami (talk) 02:01, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * That Wikipedia references the debates over astrology does not make Wikipedia the battleground. The question here is whether the facts and circumstances regarding the debates will or will not be recorded. The history and debates over astrology are of far more scholarly interest than popular horoscope columns. Let's keep things in perspective. Ken McRitchie (talk) 02:32, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Encyclopedias do not confine the scope of their topics to the debates of a small minority of 'scholars' who are actually interested in esoteric debates over the topic. Astrology is a part of mainstream culture, and the fact that this aspect of astrology is disregarded in the debate between the 'pro' and 'anti' factions doesn't make it less significant. 'Perspective' can only be based on reality (or at least on our perceptions of it), and for every participant in the scholarly debates, there must be a thousand people reading 'their stars'. If scholars are ignoring popular culture, then it says little for their scholarship... AndyTheGrump (talk) 02:52, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Agreed. It's astonishing that the article makes no mention at all of that woman (forgot her name) who supposedly predicted JFK's assassination and who had an influence on the Nixon administration. Short Brigade Harvester Boris (talk) 03:58, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
 * The woman who made a prediction in 1956 that a democrat elected to the presidency in 1960 would die in office was Jeane Dixon. She also predicted that Kennedy would would lose the election in 1960. This selective remembering of correct, though imprecise, predictions and forgetting of incorrect predictions (the Jeane Dixon effect) may well have a place in an article on astrology. As pointed out below, the astrologer who played a role in the Reagan administration was Joan Quigley; I'm not aware of an astrologer having any influence on the Nixon White House.- Nunh-huh 22:19, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
 * I agree too, but Andy I am surprised that you don't realise that there is every intention to do this. It was previously discussed as part of the rearrangement of the content and plan for development and I thought you were involved at that time. (I will try to look through the archives and find that, but will give up if it takes more than 2 mins and will recap from what I recall). --  Zac   Δ talk! 08:09, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Nah, gave it two minutes, but too much to crawl through. You can see the theme in my post of 18 July began "It is undeniably innapropriate the way that the 'Astrology and science' section has been allowed to dominate this article on an age-old subject which has a vast cultural legacy and philosophical relevancy. We need to rethink the content from a fresh perspective which allows the reader to understand the subject - as well as the reasons why it has been hugely popular but never free from criticms and controversy. I am not suggesting this is done overnight". The way I remember is that the history section - which still needs a lot of development, will conclude with a section on modern history, which will detail the introduction of newspaper columns and how this has popularised the subject, I've stated in posts recently that the development of modern history will include its own criticisms, concerning probems with mass-marketing, commercialisation and over-simplification, etc.


 * I don't agree that this page has misplaced its focus by mainly dealing with the history and development of the Western tradition, whilst explaing that this developed in the east, and including brief refrence to other traditions and links for further info. In the English language editions of WP, we should focus on the system that has predominated in world culture as we understand it. The subject is comprehensive enough without trying to cover something like Chinese astrology, which has a very important story of its own, but falls outside the remit of what we can practially cover on this page. Likewise, other cultural versions of WP focus on the system that predominates in their regions.


 * Whilst it's good to get suggestions like this, the problem we face is a lot of work to be done. Anything realting to the overview of the subject's history and effect on culture is not ready to be critically assessed yet. A recent attempt to delete a collection of pages on the history of astrology has created the need to get those pages in good order first, so that the content can be summarised as part of the overview of trhe story of the astrology here. --   Zac   Δ talk! 08:52, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * I agree that there should be some reference to Sun Sign astrology. The income and audience of a small group of media sun sign astrologers is huge compared to all other astrologers put together.  However, it should be put into the context that it is a recent phenomenon - a youthful 81 year old :) compared to four thousand plus years, that it is practiced by a minority of professional astrologers and some astrologers do not consider it ‘real astrology’.  There is of course a WP article on Sun sign astrology.  As I see it, pop astrology is like Star Trek which is based on speculative ideas about science of the future but it’s science fiction rather than science.  It doesn’t matter how popular it is or whether some people mistakenly consider it science, it is tangential to the page, but it should be mentioned.


 * Chinese Astrology, in the form of the circle of 12 animals, is a misnomer. It is not IMO astrology since it doesn't involve the positions or cycles of celestial bodies other than the New Moon to determine the start of the year rather like Easter or Ramadan is determined by a specific lunation.


 * Reagan's astrologer, Joan Quigley should, of course, also be included - perhaps in the Modern Era - history section? Robert Currey   talk  09:50, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Robert Currey, that is nonsense of the highest order - you state that "The income and audience of a small group of media sun sign astrologers is huge compared to all other astrologers put together", and then argue that because it is "pop astrology" and because "some astrologers do not consider it ‘real astrology’" it is somehow tangential to the main page of our astrology coverage. As for your comments about it being mistaken by some for science, I think the response to that is too obvious to be worth bothering with. No we don't need to insert a paragraph or two on popular sun sign astrology into the article - we need to start again from scratch, dealing with as as a diverse phenomenon, with different traditions within different cultures, none of which has any more claim to being 'real' (still less 'science') than any other - if we are going to have an article on the belief systems and practices of some professional western astrologers, it belongs, as a minority system, in a subarticle. And no, you cannot simply dismiss the media horoscopes etc there either - they are part of the same cultural continuum that generates the funding for the 'professionals'. This article (like any on Wikipedia) isn't owned by a particular faction from within the subject matter. You don't get to define what 'astrology' is - the phenomenon itself does.


 * @Zac: I am aware that there have been discussions in the past regarding attempts to broaden the article at some point, but they are likely to remain just that - discussions about future intent that never actually get anywhere because the article is stuck in a deadlock due to its overemphasis on specific topics. Furthermore, your suggestion that our coverage of the modern history of astrology should "include its own criticisms, concerning [problems] with mass-marketing, commercialisation and over-simplification, etc" is inherently POV - you are asserting that it is somehow less 'genuine' than the older traditions, with no real justification. Wikipedia cannot make value-judgements on the relative merits of different belief systems, even if one seems on the surface to be driven by commercial considerations - that isn't our job. AndyTheGrump (talk) 13:37, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Andy, take heart and show some good faith. We will report what the sources say. It is quite obvious though, that this article is not stuck on over-emphasis of specific topics. Take a look at the content of 'Etymology and basic definitions'; 'Core Principles' and 'Cultural Influence' most of which has been recently developed from scratch, the rest of which has vastly improved the legacy of very poor quality content that existed before. Your points are taken though. --   Zac   Δ talk! 14:17, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Andy - I don't have the time to answer all your points now, but to clarify two points:
 * My analogy was with Star Trek and science. Just because ignorant people believe it is science and it attracts more interest than science, it doesn't mean we have to redefine science.
 * I don't believe sun sign astrology generates the funding for professional astrologers - either as a source of income or as a source of clients as in my experience, the emphasis on entertainment in sun sign columns tends to put people off getting into astrology. Robert Currey   talk  14:48, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm not suggesting we redefine astrology. I'm suggesting that an article that purports to be on the subject should cover the entire subject, rather than a subset of it. AndyTheGrump (talk) 15:32, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Andy, you've got it backwards. If you would understand correctly, Sun sign astrology (the Sun in signs only) is a minuscule sub-set of the entire subject of astrology and does not have an enduring literature. Ken McRitchie (talk) 21:21, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
 * As Robert Currey stated, "The income and audience of a small group of media sun sign astrologers is huge compared to all other astrologers put together". It may or may not have an 'enduring literature' but that doesn't make it less significant as a part of astrology as a whole - which is a sociocultural phenomenon extending far beyond the 'literature' of the serious astrologers. The limits to the topic of the article are the limits of the subject, not the limits of the 'literature' of a subset. If 100 people read 'their stars' in the daily papers for every person who consults a professional astrologer (a pure guess, of course), to place undue weight on the latter, while neglecting the former, is unencyclopaedic in an article which is supposed to be describing astrology as a whole. I've no objections to a properly-sourced and balanced sub-article dealing with the complexities of 'serious astrology', but it is inappropriate to treat this as the sole concern of the main article. AndyTheGrump (talk) 21:39, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Andy, You ask for sun sign astrology to be mentioned in your last paragraph due to the ‘income and audience being huge’. Your request is fair but it has been pointed out to you that sun sign astrology is not representative of astrology at all. It may well be a recent sociocultural phenomenon on the basis that it brings in money and has a huge audience but so does several YouTube hits which do not warrant inclusion on the WP music page. The Sociocultural phenomenon is about the growth in access and commercialisation and this argument has no place here. Maybe the way forward here is to include sun sign astrology as a recent sociocultural phenomenon and placed within the context of the history of astrology with a link to the sun sign astrology page Wendy Stacey (talk) 01:17, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Nope. it is claimed that "sun sign astrology is not representative of astrology at all". If it isn't astrology, what is it? (BTW, welcome to Wikipedia - I see here that you state that you are "Chair of the Astrological Association of Great Britain". Can I ask that you read WP:COI?). AndyTheGrump (talk) 02:17, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Perhaps it would be best stated that 'the practice of sun sign astrology is a very small part and recent phenomenon of the history and full body of knowledge on western astrology' and have a link through to the sun sign astrology page? Thank you for guiding me to the COI page.  As you have read, I am the Chair of the Astrological Association of Great Britain but the views expressed here are my own and not representative of the organisation’s members.  I can assure you that I am acting in good faith and that my position merely indicates my level of knowledge on the subject.  I have made no edits but only comments and suggestions with the attempt to come to an amicable agreement.  I should also point out that I have a strong background and interest in academia, particularly research methodology, so I hope my views are seen as objective, however, like any contributor, I do have an interest in the subject matter and continuing discussions and remain attentive to ensuring that information is fairly debated and reported. May I ask what your background and interest in the subject is? Wendy Stacey (talk) 12:58, 29 September 2011 (UTC)

No. This article is supposed to be about astrology in general, not about the 'body of knowledge on western astrology' - we are not going to let the article content be determined by professional astrologers promoting a particular minority branch. Regarding my background, I have a degree in anthropology, which undoubtedly shapes my understanding of the subject as the sociocultural phenomenon it is, but no real in-depth knowledge of the subject itself - but there is no particular requirement that I should have any. Wikipedia articles are supposed to be based on published sources, not personal knowledge, and the sole requirements of a good Wikipedia contributor are literacy, objectivity, and an ability to assess the utility of sources. AndyTheGrump (talk) 13:40, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * I understand what you are saying but we are talking at cross purposes here. I have no objection in having sun sign astrology mentioned and I think it should be noted but it needs to be put into perspective and the balance fair.  Examples of this were given by Robert Currey and myself. It is true that the commercialisation of sun sign astrology is popular to some of the general public and there is a separate page allocated to this on WP.  However, sun sign astrology has very little to do with astrological history, research, practice and knowledge and needs to be put into context.  There are a very small minority of astrologers who practise sun sign astrology.Wendy Stacey (talk) 18:47, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * That may be true, but it doesn't alter the fact that 'sun sign astrology' is the type that most people will be familiar with in their own experience (at least in the west) I don't see how relegating the most popular form of astrology to a sub article can be seen as 'balanced'. I'd also like to see more of a response to my comments regarding the sidelining of non-western astrologies - this is supposed to be a multinational project, and ought likewise to give a more balanced view of the different forms. Again, the top-level article on a topic should give a broad coverage of all aspects of the subject, rather than a particular subset: these can be dealt with more properly in sub-articles. AndyTheGrump (talk) 18:57, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Andy there is no intention to sideline anything of relevance here. I have probably been more out-spoken than anyone about the fact that this English-language edition of WP should place its focus on the system most familiar in English-language cultures.  My argument is that the Indian WP will place its focus on Indian astrology, ditto the Chinese WP, and so forth. But mainly its a matter of practicality that drives my concern - the subject and what we have to cover, just to give a brief overview of everything relevant, is extensive enough IMO. An additional problem is the complicated issues that this will bring in.  For example, in talking about the scientific definition of astrology, we expect to refer that which applies to the western world - not that which applies in countries like India, which defines the relationship between astrology and science differently. My view is that it is better to have one section which gives a brief overview of other cultural approaches, and then links to the dedicated WP pages that feature those in detail.


 * But that's only my view and from previous discussions I know there are other editors who are more inclined towards yours. Why don't you take the initiative and originate some content? Or give us something to kick off with? Or develop the content in the section headed: 'Other cultural systems of astrology'. This is only as sparse as it is because no one has developed it to the extent we have all agreed it should be developed. --  Zac   Δ talk! 19:47, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Oh lord - just seen the new tag. Bit ridiculous and over-the-top don't you think? You introduce a point on a day when the talk page is hit with a barrage of new concerns, and suddenly this becomes all-important too. The tag says "discuss the issue on the talk page" - well, here we are discussing.  It also says "Please improve this article". I hope you take that personally. --   Zac   Δ talk! 19:57, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * If you are referring to the 'globalize' tag, it wasn't me that added it - though I think it is probably valid. In case you hadn't noticed, India is an 'English language' culture, at least in terms of many of the more educated members of the population (who are the ones most likely to be using Wikipedia) - but that is irrelevant. There is nothing whatever in Wikipedia policy that suggests we should confine articles on World-wide topics to the interests of the English-speaking world. As for me adding to the article, I think that until we have agreement about what it should actually be about, this would be premature. AndyTheGrump (talk) 20:31, 29 September 2011 (UTC)
 * I added the tag...because the article needs to give balanced coverage to all kinds of astrology around the world. Does it not? Itsmejudith (talk) 20:46, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Andy, I apologise for jumping to conclusions that you added the tag. I did so because, so far, no one but you has shown significant concern for about this.  It seems very strange,  Itsmejudith, that you  tag the article with this supposed 'issue' having never even commented on it. Well my point applies to you then - I hope an editor who feels concerned enough to tag the article with a supposed problem, will adopt some responsibility for providing the content needed. Otherwise it starts to look like unnecessary tags are being added for the hell of it.  Is three  enough now? Or should we add another which shows a double exclamation mark and states “This article has tags at the top which may not be necessary. Please discuss this issue on the talk page and do not improve the article”. ?


 * With regards to your question – no I don’t think it does, for reasons I’ve already given. --  Zac   Δ talk! 21:07, 29 September 2011 (UTC)

Minerva20 (talk) 21:46, 29 September 2011 (UTC)I'm willing to make the necessary additions to make the page more global, and have the tag removed. I'll work on it for the next few weeks and have something by the end of the month. What type of additions did you have in mind? Minerva20 (talk) 21:46, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Thank you - that would be very welcome. My own suggestion would be to look at the section we currently have in the main space article called "Other cultural systems of astrology" and see what you can do with it. Currently this gives very scant details on other cultural systems, with just a bit of elaboration on Hindu astrology, so any addition you can make will be an improvement. --   Zac   Δ talk! 02:09, 30 September 2011 (UTC)

Recent "Obstacles to research" and "Mechanisms" Edits
A new editor Be-Critical has cut major portions of these sections without prior discussion and consensus, claiming to be correcting "apologetics". These will need to be reverted and the reasons for them explained and discussed. Ken McRitchie (talk) 03:44, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * I'm sensing a rather strong aura of WP:OWN surrounding this article. Short Brigade Harvester Boris (talk) 03:49, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * I didn't edit the Obstacles to research section. However, it's obvious that were any field to show as few results for as grand claims as astrology, people might not want to fund it.  I'm glad to discuss with you on the edits to the Mechanisms section.  Be— —Critical __Talk 04:44, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Becritical, please stop butchering the article. Your edits are not only destructive and show no respect for other editors but also against expected editorial behaviour. Given the controversial nature of this article, you first need to propose major changes, wait for consensus to develop and then (and only then) make the change. SLP (talk) 11:07, 29 September 2011 (UTC)

Here is what we should be working with, as it was before: (text removed to avoid ref/conflict - it will be reinserted into article --  Zac   Δ talk! 11:05, 29 September 2011 (UTC))

Please discuss your clarifications and suggestions on this page. Ken McRitchie (talk) 04:01, 29 September 2011 (UTC)

Reminder of policy
I am going to give a reminder of Noleander’s post of 27 September, because it covers points of direct significance to the matter of sources and deserves everyone's attention. This should put an end to the extreme position that is being taken by a few editors, that this article about astrology, cannot refer to astrological sources.

It also seems necessary (although it shouldn't) to give yet another reminder that significant changes to the main space article - especially where they affect previously agreed, referenced information - should not be made without prior evaluation and consensus agreement. Several significant changes have been made to the article in the last few hours, which ignore our need to work together, systematically, through the issues that are being raised, so that we can find objective solutions collectively.

Please take a responsible attitude and remember that this is a necessary requirement because this subject attracts strong views and conflicting opinions. (I am covering this briefly here because it has already been explained several times, and pointed out in more detail in the 'Achieving Neutrality' section above).

Each point of controversy must recieve the time and attention it deserves to get the content right. Currently we are looking at the 'Mechanisms' section, then we will progress through the other sections that have been highlighted with concerns in the recent RFC; and then we can re-evaluate the comments that have recently been edited in lede. Hopefully, that will allow us to clear up current concerns and move on to the development of the other areas where the astrology coverage needs development and expansion. Whilst this process is ongoing and passages are under critical review, I will return all previously agreed text to the article. This will ensure that we are not scattering discussions, or failing to give the due focus that these difficult and complex issues deserve.--  Zac   Δ talk! 10:33, 29 September 2011 (UTC)
 * If you're concerned about scattering discussions, stop scattering them. This must be the fifth time this text has been posted to this page.  Skinwalker (talk) 11:00, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Guidelines are not policy, and they certainly don't override core policies, which clearly state that WP articles are to be based on reliable sources. This is particularly true of scientific claims. Remember that improperly sourced material can be deleted, and the burden is on YOU to provide reliable sources. WP does not exixt to give proponents of pseudoscience and fringe "theories" a platform to promote their views or gripes. Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 11:08, 29 September 2011 (UTC)

Achieving Neutrality
Ensuring that Wikipedia policies are properly understood, and then consistently applied, is the only solution to meeting the controversies that a controversial topic like this attracts. The sensible way to move forward is to take the sections under consideration and subject each one of them systematically to critical approval and invitation for improvement. It is not possible to scatter the necessary attention that each passage requires across notice boards and various talk page sections – to get this content perfectly balanced it needs thoughtful review. If there is an inability to reach consensus about a particular source, then that source should be discussed on the reliable sources noticeboard, so it can be considered specifically within the context that it is being used. All of the sections that have been subject to criticisms (fair or not) can be reviewed in detail and the content adjusted, if necessary, as necessary. This is a time-consuming process, but this is the norm of this page which is restrained by the policy - clearly notified at the top of the page - (and with good reason) that substantial changes should be discussed here before making them to the page. This is also in-line with the Wikipedia policy on Achieving Neutrality, which states

Since the passage on Mechanisms has already had some scrutiny, that seems as good as any to kick off the process. I’ll reproduce it below with a recap on some of the comments made earlier, in the hope of stimulating other constructive suggestions that help us find the ideal solution and improve the quality of the information given in this article.

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Mechanisms
In 1975, amid increasing popular interest in astrology, a widely publicized article, "Objections to Astrology," published in The Humanist in the form of a manifesto signed by 186 scientists, sparked a scientific controversy. In particular, "Objections to Astrology" focused on the question of astrological mechanisms with the following words:

{{quote|We can see how infinitesimally small are the gravitational and other effects produced by the distant planets and the far more distant stars. It is simply a mistake to imagine that the forces exerted by stars and planets at the moment of birth can in any way shape our futures.

Astronomer Carl Sagan, host of the award-winning TV series Cosmos, said that he found himself unable sign the "Objections" statement, not because he thought that astrology was valid, but because he found the statement's tone authoritarian, and because objections on the grounds of an unavailable mechanism can be mistaken. "No mechanism was known," Sagan wrote, "for continental drift (now subsumed in plate tectonics) when it was proposed by Alfred Wegener... The notion was roundly dismissed by all the great geophysicists, who were certain that continents were fixed." Sagan stated that he would instead have been willing to sign a statement describing and refuting the principal tenets of astrological belief, which he believed would have been more persuasive and would have produced less controversy.

Few astrologers believe that astrology can be explained by any direct causal mechanisms between planets and people. Researchers have posited acausal, purely correlational, relationships between astrological observations and events. For example, the theory of synchronicity proposed by Carl Jung, which draws from the Hermetic principle ("as above, so below"), postulates meaningful significance in unrelated events that occur simultaneously. Some astrologers have posited a basis in divination. Others have argued that empirical correlations stand on their own, and do not need the support of any theory or mechanism. A few researchers, such as astronomer Percy Seymour, have sought to describe a mechanism based on electro-magnetism within an intricate web of planetary fields and resonances in the solar system that could potentially explain astrology.

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Comments, criticisms and suggestions:
(First five below are extracted from comments made earlier)
 * Criticism: The first paragraph and quote are fine. After that, however, follows yet another apologetic paragraph with an appeal to authority to Carl Sagan. The next paragraph is also purely apologetic. These two paragraphs are also sourced primarily with fringe non-peer-reviewed sources, except for the Sagan sources, which are given undue weight. (Dominus Vobisdu)


 * Criticism: the "mechanisms" section is a bit misleading because it implies there are mechanisms, and that Sagan supports that concept. The WP Policies WP:Undue and WP:PARITY make it clear that no section in this article can place more than about half the weight endorsing the suggestion that astrology is valid. (Noleander)


 * Suggestion: The remedy is to add more explicit balancing material that says "No, there is no mechanism" and name 3 or 4 prominent scientists that hold that view. The Mechanism section should be about half "maybe there is a mechanism" and about half "scientists say there definitely not". (Noleander)


 * Comment: I don't see the concern with the mechanisms section myself. Far from suggesting that there are approved mechanisms, the passage is clear "Few astrologers believe that astrology can be explained by any direct causal mechanisms between planets and people". The references to Sagan are relevant because his refusal to sign the 'manifesto' is a significant point in modern astrological history, and continues to be referred to frequently. The text clarifies that he refused to sign on a matter of principle, and not because he thought that astrology was valid. The passage offers an overview of various influential views on the matter, demonstrating the diversity of opinion. (Zac)


 * Suggestion: I would say the last sentence regarding Percy Seymour is questionable. I placed a clarification needed tag on that some months ago. Since the clarification hasn't been forthcoming, that could be removed. That would help to balance the passage I believe, since it seems to imply that a mechanism exists which could explain astrology, which conflicts with earlier assertions that astrology is not based on a recognised mechanism, and is not causal in its basis (it is not a case of giving that view an equal share of support, but clarifying that it's a red herring in terms of what the subject is about, whilst succintly covering the arguments that have been raised around that point).(Zac) --   Zac   Δ talk! 21:59, 27 September 2011 (UTC)


 * I have clarified Dr Percy Seymour's theory. Also, I think the various possible mechanisms should be numbered.  Robert Currey   talk  23:42, 27 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Thanks for this clarification on Seymour, something I've been meaning to do. Perhaps it is the word "manifesto" in the Mechanisms section that is giving a problem because it is too strong a word. The 186 scientists, 18 of whom were Nobel Prizewinners, were appealing to their own authority. They mention there is "strong evidence to the contrary" against astrology but they do not say what that evidence is. Instead, they state their belief that gravity is too weak to be a possible mechanism. They say nothing about statistical investigations of astrology, which do not need a mechanism. So this is what could be called a manifesto, an appeal to authority. This 186 scientist statement is balanced by the statement from Sagan, who unapologetically criticizes the "authoritarian tone" of the 186. He offers a different critical approach to astrology that would not depend on arguments of mechanism, which historically does not always stand up. Is "manifesto" too harsh and should it be removed? Ken McRitchie (talk) 02:16, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * I've updated the text to show last night's amendments. Since we are reviewing this passage critically right now, please don't make any more amendments to the main space text until we have ensured this passage is as robust and objective as it can be, and are satisfied that its focus is appropriate and relevant. Any more comments or suggestions on this as it stands. For the record, the 'unreliable source' tag was added by Skinwalker, with the edit-box comment: "yet another patently unreliable source for a scientific claim" --  Zac   Δ talk! 09:11, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Comment: I agree that there should be no concern with the mechanism section with regards to Sagan. The statement that very few astrologers beleive or claim there is a mechanism highlights objectivity.  The Sagan information gives details of historical debate and the references given are reliable and verifiable.Wendy Stacey (talk) 12:56, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Comment: Not a biggie, but I don't think the wiki-link to The Humanist, should remain. It doesn't go to details of the magazine in question. --  Zac   Δ talk! 14:25, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Suggestion: I have been working on a draft for the mechanisms section in my Sandbox. Comments are welcome. Robert Currey   talk  16:09, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Robert, I have been working on a rewrite of the section since yesterday, to amalgamate the suggestions and address the criticisms. I don't think it will be possible to use all your text.  It is very good, but for the sake of balance it will be difficult to use such strong arguments. However, I will incorporate what I can and will post something shortly for review and comment. --   Zac   Δ talk! 06:29, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Criticism: seems—unjustifiably, and against NPOV policy—to give more weight to the caviling of one scientist than to the agreement of 186 scientists. - Nunh-huh 23:51, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Comment There's nothing in Sagan's objection which couldn't be covered in a single sentence, if it's necessary at all. Its only function for the article is to lessen the impact of the Humanist material.  Per NPOV, this might be more justifiable if astrologers were actually objecting to the Humanist claim of no mechanism, but they actually agree with it.  The agreement by all that there are no mechanisms (known) is the important thing here and what should be emphasized, in a very small section.   Be— —Critical  02:11, 30 September 2011 (UTC)

Editing principles
One thing that's happening here is a misinterpretation of WP:BURDEN. The regular editors here are asking those challenging the appropriateness of including some of the content to justify their edits. But the burden is on those who wish to retain the text, not on those who challenge it. That's not to say that wholesale deletion of text is the correct path here. That also needs to be justified, especially when it is highly relevant and could be revised rather than deleted. I should add that I do not support the position that we cannot use unreliable/primary/astrological sources if they represent the opinion of the astrological community. We can, and we should, in order to accurately and thoroughly present the ideas of astrology. We should not censor here any more than we should at Santorum or Pregnancy (to name a couple of articles where such issues played out). Nevertheless, there's no need to justify each and every edit beforehand. Respectful edits such as I made to the Mechanism section, or those made by Short Brigade Harvester Boris (who added a bit of sourced and appropriate text) which retain information but restructures for POV issues or attribution or simply for clarity should be challenged if necessary. But there's no reason to go through months worth of rigamarole over them. There are other issues, such as the mention of negative evidence above, but I'd like to hear comments first.

Therefore, are there any objections to this set of edits? Be— —Critical __Talk 15:33, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Yes, I have many and it would take a long time to justify each one of them. I do believe that you have the right focus of approach, and your input is very valuable here, but as a new editor to this page you are unaware of its difficult history, and the reason why it is necessary to go through "the rigamarole". We all know what a pain it is, but the legacy of this page is that its content swings from one position of bias to the other, interrupted by periods of silly stalement, where no one can make any kind of edit or addtion without it being immediately reversed. To demonstrate how difficult the situation is, not so long ago there was an active and heated discussion that took a whole month to complete, just to agree a 1-word change. To avoid that being the case for ever-more, it is better to take the time necessary now, to get the content right. We do that by identifying where the problematic issues lie, what principles apply in context, and working together to find the right solution. It takes time but it gives us the opportunity to create lasting improvements that will bring an end to the long-history of discontent attached to this article. --   Zac   Δ talk! 16:14, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * I understand the page is difficult, and thanks. Can you respond to my question above?  Is that supposed to be the entire section on Mechanisms? Be— —Critical __Talk 16:23, 29 September 2011 (UTC)
 * In case you haven't seen it already - I did. --  Zac   Δ talk! 16:39, 29 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Becritical asked you to describe your concerns about a specific set of content changes, and you responded with some general observations on the need for everyone to work together, as well as "you're-new-so-you-couldn't-possibly-understand" verbiage which smacks of ownership. While collaboration is unquestionably important, it would probably be facilitated if you could describe your objections specifically, rather than reverting with a general admonition to work together. MastCell Talk 23:37, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Just as you have the freedom to interpret my comments in a negative vein if you wish, I also have the freedom to make the comments that summarise what I feel inclined to say. I didn't invent this policy, and have loathed it myself in the past. But on a controversial topic like this everyone benefits if we slow down and work on content one section at a time. This ensures that everyone gets their say. You can be sure that your point of view will be given attention and consideration, and won't be overlooked just because some other editor with an opposing opinion got 'in there' first. Bottom line: there is no other way to gain consensus. I'm not interested in owning the content; I'm interested in facilitating the process by which everyone owns the content.  --   Zac   Δ talk! 01:54, 30 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Excellent. So what were your specific objections to Becritical's edit? If you have many objections, you can just start with the most substantial one. MastCell Talk 20:16, 30 September 2011 (UTC)


 * I think it would have been nice, but I'm not set on his answering that because I also have a newer suggestion above, and because if there is consensus on the text in the section above I'm not going to fight it unless others agree. Anyways, I'd like to hear what you think here.   Be— —Critical  20:27, 30 September 2011 (UTC)

synchonicity
I removed the following from the lead:
 * Most astrologers contend there is no direct influence from the stars, only a synchronistic correlation between the celestial and terrestrial.

This was not sourced (the source that was used does not even mention synchronicity), and it does not reflect the text.

Oh, and of course it wouldn't be 'stars', but 'planets'. — kwami (talk) 02:29, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * I have reverted your changes so we can discuss them first. This statement doesn't look right to me and I think it was already changed from something better earlier. I don't think "contend" and "only synchronistic correlation" accurately reflect the writings of authors engaged in the discussion. Synchronicity requires some explanation and it seems abrupt to inject it here in the lede. Ken McRitchie (talk) 03:08, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * It also seems dubious that "most" astrologers contend this. It's only mentioned in passing in the text, but this makes it seem central. — kwami (talk) 03:22, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * It is central. Synchronicity is the best way to express the core principle of the microcosmic/macrocsomiuc inter-relation in modern terms. That was the principle that inspired Jung and it is central in all auhoritative accounts, from Ptolemy onwards. There is no way to make this very deep philosophical point in the lede, but it is already adequately demonstrated in the core principles section.


 * This is another point that needs development. Why Jung was so significant and has been so influential. Getting all these points clearly communicated in a very succint overview will be challenging though. --  Zac   Δ talk! 09:59, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

All right, here was my edit. Skipping the previous point:
 * "The 20th century brought renewed attention [to astrology] through re-kindled intellectual interest in statistically testing astrology's claims."
 * Dubious, and AFICT unsupported.
 * It was badly phrased so it seems reasonable to take it out at this point. The lede will need later revision to capture the gist of that anyway, after further development of the content that explores how, why, and to what extent a re-kindling of popular interest occured.
 * By way of explamation, the point behind the comment was that the Gauquelin research brought a mass of new attention, which raised the profile of astrology and brought interest - and attacks - from academics. The 70s and 80s were filled with perceived potential for new scientific interest, based on the results of Gauquelin's statistical work. For now, that's best left aside until Gauquelin's influence has been established. At the moment, the article only details what his work looked into, not its resulting influence. --   Zac   Δ talk! 09:26, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * "Astrology is considered a classic example of pseudoscience,"
 * This was in the lede after substantial discussion. IMO it's non-negotiable: per wiki policy we need to state that astrology is a pseudoscience, not just suggest that some people have that opinion.


 * The reason for the above: that needs to be worked out. I was about to make an attempt when you reverted me. The ref that's already there covers the issue nicely. — kwami (talk) 03:27, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Kwami, Good to know that you were planning to restore the ref after deleting it. How am I to know unless you discuss this? Now it has Asquith/Hacking in the same note as Thagard, and neither is a full reference. Thagard should have precedence as his is the current opinion on the problem of demarcation, all previous propositions having been shot down by more recent definitions. Asquith/Hacking is very stale and doesn't belong here, dating to 1978. Ken McRitchie (talk) 18:37, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
 * I didn't remove any refs. Anyway, we don't need refs in the lead. The lead should summarize the body, and the body should be fully ref'd. — kwami (talk) 22:41, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
 * I'll go ahead and partly restore. Zac agrees w one point, there's no challenge on another, I've changed the "largely" you objected to, and am changing the last bit to fit better with Thagard. Please change the refs if you think they're not adequate, but basically they're only there to prevent POV battles. — kwami (talk) 22:51, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Actually, that's probably too much detail for why it's a pseudoscience for the lead. Someone can probably word it better. But as Thagard explained, the prior reasons we gave weren't adequate. — kwami (talk) 23:06, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Some reversions and rewrites were necessary in the lede. The change in the lede second paragraph to "including" rendered the sentence ungramatical, so was changed back to "partly through". In the third paragraph, the changed attribution to Thagard introduced an error as not evaluating "other theories." The astrologers' belief that contrasts with the pseudoscience belief was cut and so was restored. The paragraph was carefully reworded to accurately reflect the 186, Thagard, and the supportive reasons for astrology as a pseudoscience. Ken McRitchie (talk) 02:49, 29 September 2011 (UTC)
 * You changed "Some believe that celestial movements control fate...." to "Some have believed that celestial movements control fate....". Are you saying no astrologers believe that celestial movements control fate? Moriori (talk)
 * No, but to keep it as "some believe" would give undue weight to that belief, and I believe it would be very hard to find an astrologer who claims it today because it hasn't been in the literature pretty much since medieval times. "Have believed" on the other hand does not rule out astrologers believing it up until the present time, if there are any. Ken McRitchie (talk) 04:40, 29 September 2011 (UTC)
 * The archives demonstrate how much discussion and consensus-building has gone into the lede as it currently stands. So this shouldn't be tinkered about with now, but these points can all be given their due consideration. Kwami, I give you my word that I am not trying to ignore your concerns, but it is simply not practical to have too many thought-provoking issues up in the air at one time. We won't move forward and resolve multiple concerns unless we work through them together effectively. The RFC highlighted several passages that need consideration, and we can make this the next priority on the list. From what I remember the phrase "classic pseudoscience" was changed to "pseudoscience" to avoid a peacock tone, and because the references did not demonstrate that astrology is any more a pseudoscience than other subject which has been defined as such. Perhaps that something you want to explore? One of your edit summaries said "it is simply a pseudoscience" - unless there is a reliable source which defines it more colourfully than that, then it's not appropriate for us to do so. That's not to say that the whole point you are raising is not significant, I just want to give you the opportunity to check in preparation for when we can look at this collectively. --   Zac   Δ talk! 12:01, 29 September 2011 (UTC)

Go ahead and remove 'classic', then. That's fine. I'm sure there are plenty of people who could word it better than me, and as I said, that last line could certainly use some rewording. But we should state that it's pseudoscience: that has been gone over many many times. Also, the idea that "most" astrologers believe it's synchronistic is unsupported by the article. The lead should summarize the article, not make claims which are never developed or supported, and synchronicity is barely even mentioned. — kwami (talk) 12:20, 29 September 2011 (UTC)
 * I made that amendment. I don't see why anyone should have any problem with that - I agree it is a better reflection of what is said in the source. It seemed logical to retain reference to the lack of mechanisms criticsms too. Can you review it now and confirm you are OK with that? --  Zac   Δ talk! 13:16, 29 September 2011 (UTC)
 * I have two problems with it, in the same sentence:
 * "failing to offer a clear account of its physical mechanism"
 * I would delete "clear". AFAIK, astrology does not offer any mechanism at all. That is, after all, the whole point of synchronicity: there is no mechanism, and that's irrelevant. And although there may be some astrologers who have attempted to work out mechanisms, I think it's fair to say that astrology as a whole has not offered a mechanism. It certainly does not rely on one.
 * "is considered a pseudoscience because"
 * We've been over this many many times. Astrology is pseudoscience. Not "some people think it's pseudoscience" or "it's been called pseudoscience", but it simply *is* pseudoscience. We don't want to leave any wiggle room, because when it comes to pseudoscience, any wiggle room will be abused. Now, if we were to put your wording in that context, as an explanation why, I'd have no problem with it: Astrology is pseudoscience. ... It is considered a pseudoscience because ...
 * — kwami (talk) 00:55, 30 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Okay, I tried to fix per those points (not the best wording, as I was trying not to change too much), and was reverted here. That illustrates perfectly the point I was trying to make: an apologetic POV can interpret your wording as saying astrology isn't really pseudoscience, there are just some people who think it is. — kwami (talk) 12:04, 30 September 2011 (UTC)


 * I meant to reply to say I have no problems with your edit and the *is* thing. Then noticed you'd done that. That seems fine to me; I think you did a good job in making it clear and simple.
 * I started writing a response to your comments on sychronicity and mechanisms here, but it turned into a bigger point than I intended, so I'll place it below instead - in response to BeCritical's comments on mechanisms. Perhaps take a look and comment there if you wish. --  Zac   Δ talk! 12:09, 30 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Have you changed it since my last comment? — kwami (talk) 03:37, 1 October 2011 (UTC)
 * If you're talking about the edit you made that got reverted, Dominus Vobisdu, reverted it back again immediately afterwards, so yes, the main page shows your edit (I think). --  Zac   Δ talk! 03:51, 1 October 2011 (UTC)
 * No, I meant your proposal below that you asked me to comment on. Last time I went over it it seemed fine. — kwami (talk) 03:55, 1 October 2011 (UTC)

Only very minor tweaks. The section affected now reads:

"In 1975, amid increasing popular interest in astrology, The Humanist magazine presented a clear and much publicized rebuttal of astrology in a statement put together by Bart J. Bok, Lawrence E. Jerome, and Paul Kurtz.[1] This was authorized by the signatures of 186 astronomers, physicists and leading scientists of the day. Entitled ‘Objections to Astrology’, the statement offered a caution to the public against the unquestioning acceptance of astrological advice. It declared no scientific foundation for astrology's tenets due to the lack of any mechanism whereby astrological effects might occur; as demonstrated with the following words:"

Rest same as before --  Zac   Δ talk! 04:13, 1 October 2011 (UTC)

Comments on proposal
"If objections exist please outline them clearly and specifically, in a civil tone that does not generate assumptions of bad faith. Also be aware that consensus is achieved by avoiding extreme positions and seeking the objective and informative approach that is typical of a respectable encyclopaedic resource -- Zac   Δ talk! 10:54, 29 September 2011 (UTC)"


 * Just to provide some background here, the Objections article appeared when researchers, notably Michel Gauquelin, were publishing statistical results in astrology and generating great interest. By drawing attention away from this effort to the issue of mechanism, the objectionists were setting up the straw man argument that astrology should have a mechanism first before anything else, as was more typical of science before the 20th century. Since the early 20th century science has been led primarily by statistical inference first before theory or mechanism. This straw man argument is also reflected in the "problems" that Paul Thagard argues about in his definition of the demarcation problem (what demarcates science from pseudoscience), that astrology "hasn't solved." He is alluding to the lack of mechanism.


 * The Objectionists claimed there is evidence to the contrary on astrology but they did not provide any, but used the mechanism argument instead. Evidence is what resolves scientific issues. Carl Sagan was critical of the position taken in Objections, but even he did not suggest any evidence against astrology (the reason being that there is no reliable evidence against astrology), but suggested instead arguments based on scientific principles. Philosopher Paul Feyerabend in "The Strange Case of Astrology" also was critical of the Objections article, and drew a comparison to the Malleus Maleficarum, which launched the Inquisition, only claiming it to be even less objective. Science does not proceed by decree, as the 186 who signed the Objections article were attempting to do. The logical fallacy of the Objections statement also resonated with a groups of scientists and academics who objected to the Objections article with a counter article signed by 187! Ken McRitchie (talk) 12:56, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Also, perhaps more weight should be given to cosmic cybernetics, which has a tradition of consistently developed theory stretching from astronomer Percy Seymour back to Kepler. This is the theory that there are "unheard" influences from the planets that individuals do not directly respond to, yet which the Earth does respond to. We know this as the Gaia hypothesis (James Lovelock) and Kepler was an early developer of this theory. Individuals repond to the astrometerological changes in the Earth. It is untrue that there is a lack of theory or attempt to demonstrate a mechanism that would explain astrology. Ken McRitchie (talk) 13:20, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Could you confirm whether or not you OK with the proposed text Ken? --  Zac   Δ talk! 13:27, 29 September 2011 (UTC)
 * The most important part of the Objections article is "there is no scientific foundation for its tenets". It would be best if this were also quoted in the section, before moving on to the more specific statement on the lack of mechanism. Otherwise, it appears that the signatories are objecting solely on the basis of the fact that there is no mechanism. Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 14:47, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * That seems non-controversial since the statement is in the source. I've added a little extra to accomodate that.--  Zac   Δ talk! 16:38, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Zac, a little more clarification will help to frame this piece of text. The Gauquelin studies were providing a "scientific foundation" for astrological tenants at an alarming rate. In effect, Gauquelin's studies were providing statistical support and development for traditional planetary theory (the astrological properties of the planets). The authors were not so worried about Gauquelin's methods (some of them later participated in replications using his methodologies), but rather with the perception that popular Sun sign astrology was being validated. To put the brakes on this perception, the recourse they chose was not to support the scientific research and educate the public but to divert attention away from it by attacking Sun sign astrology and insisting (very prematurely) on a mechanism. A mechanism was/is not needed to continue any scientific investigation of astrology by using statistical inferences. The Objectionists did not trust their ability to educate the public, as evidenced by the efforts by the BBC to interview several of the Objectionists on their position. The Objectionists declined with the excuse they they did not know astrology well enough to make any further comment. Deep down, you might say their intentions were good, but they mishandled it and drew fire from other scientists and academics. Ken McRitchie (talk) 16:21, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * I understand Ken, and realise it is frustrating to omit the back-story, which sheds an interesting light on some aspects of the events. But it would be very problematic to go into the politics and controversies, since the purpose of this section is to outline why the failure to produce a logical theory that describes the astrological mechanism is relevant to science, though maybe not so relevant to those who have different ideas (philosophical, or metaphysical) about how astrology might work. Such details go beyond the scope of this section. When we look at each piece of text we have to evaluate it in terms of whether it's the kind of thing we would expect to find in an encyclopedia. --   Zac   Δ talk! 16:56, 29 September 2011 (UTC)

The proposed text looks good. One suggestion: since this is a controversial issue, I'd really recommend that every sentence have a footnote, identifying the source that justifies it. About 1/2 the sentences in the proposal dont have footnotes. I know that I could probably look at the nearby footnotes, and maybe they would cover that other sentence, but for a topic like Astrology, I think we should just head-off future edit-wars and cite every sentence. --Noleander (talk) 15:56, 29 September 2011 (UTC)
 * I agree. Thanks for commenting Noleander. I was very careful in compiling this to make sure it didn't steer from what is in the sources. I can add in more to qualify each comment, though they will go to the same sources. Let's get the passage approved in principle first. --  Zac   Δ talk! 16:27, 29 September 2011 (UTC)

I'm confused. Is the above supposed to be the whole Mechanisms section? Be— —Critical __Talk 16:05, 29 September 2011 (UTC)
 * No, the first part, concerning the Humanist and Sagan. I explained this in my introductory comments (see here). This process is easier if we break it down into digestible sections, which will help us identify if the real problem is related to the sources or whether (as I suspect) it is more about objectivity and balance. --  Zac   Δ talk! 16:27, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Is there any reason Sagan is so important here? Yes, he objected, but it's not needed even as a defense of astrology, since astrologists would have no objection to the Humanist conclusion that there aren't mechanisms.  And that's made clear in the rest of the section, and the discussion is like: "The Humanist says there are no known types of mechanisms and astrologists agree."  This is not an important section unless there is some central claim in astrology that conventional forces like magnetism are at work here.  The statistical arguments would be much more relevant to any debate between astrology and science.   Be— —Critical  16:43, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * In case anyone did not get the point that the Objections article was about mechanisms, Sagan, acting as a responsible scientist, did not criticize the attack on Sun sign astrology (something he himself did), but with the irresponsible and unsupportable claim that a mechanism was necessary. Ken McRitchie (talk) 16:48, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * The reason for the reference to Sagan has to be self-evident within the text. I think it is sufficiently clear from this comment "For this reason his words have been quoted by those who argue in favour of astrology retaining some sort of scientific interest.[2]" I don't think we need to develop that further and give it more space - what we have adequately covers the point that whenever this matter gets raised in ongoing debates and discussions, Sagan's stance gets referred to. This does something that most astrological sources don't do - clarify that this does not make him an advocate of astrology. --   Zac   Δ talk! 17:31, 29 September 2011 (UTC)

There's a typo in "This is certainly a relevant pointn." Other than that I agree to it. Ken McRitchie (talk) 17:41, 29 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Got it - thanks --  Zac   Δ talk! 17:57, 29 September 2011 (UTC)

I have no objections Wendy Stacey (talk) 18:14, 29 September 2011 (UTC)

Looks good to me, and I think it's a worthwhile section to add. If Ken still wants more background detail, I think that might be worth an article in itself, linked from here; I agree with Zac that it would be too much for the general astrology article. — kwami (talk) 22:05, 29 September 2011 (UTC)

I object to it because it amounts to a defense of a position which astrologers don't take. I suggest either this, or the following:


 * In 1975, amid increasing popular interest in astrology, The Humanist magazine presented a clear and much publicized rebuttal of astrology in a statement put together by Bart J. Bok, Lawrence E. Jerome, and Paul Kurtz. This was authorized by the signatures of 186 astronomers, physicists and leading scientists of the day. Entitled ‘Objections to Astrology’, the statement declared that there is no scientific foundation for astrology's tenets due to the lack of any mechanism whereby astrological effects might occur, and offered a caution to the  public against the unquestioning acceptance of astrological advice.


 * Few astrologers believe that astrology can be explained by any direct causal mechanisms between planets and people, and have various conceptual frameworks in which to put their art.


 * Acausal, purely correlational, relationships between astrological observations and events, for example, synchronicity.


 * Divination.


 * Some astrologers say that empirical correlations might stand on their own, and do not need the support of any theory or mechanism.


 * Electro-magnetism within an intricate web of planetary fields and resonances in the solar system. Scientists dismiss magnetism as an implausible explanation, since the magnetic field of a large but distant planet such as Jupiter is far smaller than that produced by ordinary household appliances.

End of section. Be— —Critical 02:27, 30 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Be-Critical, tenants are the organizing principles that enable mechanisms (and statistical inferences) to be described, not the other way around as you are trying to suggest. Ken McRitchie (talk) 03:57, 30 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Can you relate that to something? Be— —Critical  05:51, 30 September 2011 (UTC)


 * One reason why I hesitated go into the mechanisms text right now, is that it is a more complicated than we are admitting. It really needs a lot of consideration and with current demands I'm wondering whether we can afford to open up a potential can of worms. Maybe a quick and uncontroversial fix of the current text is better in the short term, even in the knowledge that what we are publishing is wrong. This is what I am personally struggling to decide for myself.
 * The problem is, astrology only has no mechanism if it is incorrectly defined. In essense astrology is not a 'system' or a 'technique' but an area of investigation. Not all astrologers use the zodiac, and not all of them use houses, so I think it is wrong to mention these right at the start of the lede as if they are its definitive elements. From the original 'formal' definition established by Ptolemy, it is described as a branch of knowledge based on a liberal use of science and conjecture together. So on one level there is the philosophical principle of synchronicity, and that always applies, but that doesn't mean that astrology ignores gravtitational effects or other proven mechanisms where they are relevant. It is just that it can't be reduced entirely to such a principle. The main division of the subject is into the natural and judicial branches. Only judicial astrology is correctly described as having no physical mechanism, which astrologers are not interested in anyway. Natural astrology has always been associated with using the best of the knowledge that science provides, to look at how the relationship between the earth and cosmos creates reliably predictable shifts and changes. It is really a dis-service to the subject to imply that a partial definition of half its concerns gives the definitive position, and not correct that misrepresentation where we present it on the page.
 * But I am feeling the pressure of the underlying politics associated with this page, having got the impression that Wikipedia will not allow misrepresentation of this subject to be corrected, even on the page where the subject is supposed to be explained properly according to its own respected sources. Instead, because 186 hostile scientists defined it in a certain way, without even investing enough intellectual effort into their criticism to hit the salient points of criticism (think Sagan), WP wants only that hostile misrepresentation to get coverage. This is justified as preserving the interests of science, with the assumption that if someone has bothered to understand this subject then they cannot possibly have an interest in/concern for/respect/love of science too. We are being forced to separate the subject from an important element of its own concern, and describe it as some sort of enemy to itself. This is surely wrong. The word science means 'knowledge' and true science doesn't aim for things to be presented falsely, but looks to explore the truth of the matter as sincerely as it can.
 * Consequently, I am struggling with how to propose the amendment for the next passage of text that we need to consider. How to present 'alternative ideas' (which are actually not 'alternatives' but mainstream to the subject) in such a way that we don't allow any implication of questioning the authority of those 186 scientists. By describing the statement as important and significant to astrology, which it undoubtedly was, we hit the reason why its is just as important for the other side of the issue to be properly explained. --  Zac   Δ talk! 12:52, 30 September 2011 (UTC)
 * First of all, WP articles are to be based on reliable third-party seconday sources, and astrology must therefore be defined and described as it is in such sources, not in sources originating from proponents of astrology itself, which are by their very nature promotional and self-serving. Self-published sources are to be used only when they are supported by reliable third-party sources.
 * Wikipedia is not a platform from which proponents of pseudoscientific and fringe "theories" are allowed to "present their case" or promote their cause in any other way. If there is to be any mention of the objections of proponents to their scientific critics, every sentence must be backed up by reliable third-party secondary sources. There are surely enough independent academic sources available that we do not have to resort to questionable and unreliable sources to write a matter-of-fact and informative article. If there is no mention in such sources, it must be assumed that the objections are not notable enough to include in WP. Special pleading and apologetics have no place on WP whatsoever.
 * This is handled very well in WP articles related to Creationism, largely thanks to the fact that there are many knowledgeable, vigilant editors with scientific backgrounds who keep watch over those articles. The same criteria that apply to Creationism-related articles should apply here.
 * As for determining notability of persons and alternative "theories", this, too, must be determined solely on the basis of substantial mention in reliable third party sources. Notability within the astrological "community" is of no significance according to WP policies. Nor is notability within the population at large. It is only notability within the mainstream academic community that counts, most especially when claims or objections related to science are the subject.
 * Last of all, when mention of objections to scientific claims are made, they must be clearly identified as non-mainstream views and be clearly attributed. Any attempt to usurp the voice of WP would be a gross abuse of the project. Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 13:40, 30 September 2011 (UTC)


 * I'm aware of WP policy, but this does not mean that a valid dilemma does not exist, since any attempt to usurp the voice of reason would be a gross abuse of the human intellect. By "present their case" I presume you mean, explain the logic of the subject, because that is what I am talking about. This concerns the very definition of the subject, which is given in the subject's own most authorative and influencial texts. Are you suggesting that we are not to give reference to those? Can you find me the reliable third party sources that record the change of the subject's main theme and definition, and when it is supposed to have occured? If not, then it is entirely appropropriate to quote the essential definition of the subject's leading historical authority, (because there are plenty of reliable third-party references that define him as such) and give comparison to how the mechanisms argument relates to the principles of that, along with the other points. This is not advocacy but fulfilment of the WP objective: "we describe multiple points of view, presenting each accurately and in context, and not presenting any point of view as "the truth" or "the best view"." After consideration I realise that this is do-able, working within the policy-restraints, and that it should be done as part of this process. --  Zac   Δ talk! 14:38, 30 September 2011 (UTC)

"If there is to be any mention of the objections of proponents to their scientific critics, every sentence must be backed up by reliable third-party secondary sources" No, not at all. Just as you would be able to cite the ideas of a religion based on the scholars of that religion, so it is with Astrology. We can use in-universe sources to describe in-universe ideas, merely taking care that the sources are representative of the in-universe POV. These are not to be promoted, just described, and care taken to set them in context relative to the wider scholarship and context both of science and society as a whole. However, Dominus Vobisdu is right that if there are third party sources describing astrological ideas in a way which in-universe sources would agree with them, those sources should be used. We aren't here to promote a POV by censorship either. If a third-party source says something with which all astrologists disagree, we need to note that disagreement even if it comes only from in-universe sources. The test is whether they are representative of the general in-universe opinion. Let's get this straight from the start, so that we don't have to argue about it anymore. Else, for example, remove the first and second sources on the Intelligent design article. Be— —Critical 16:00, 30 September 2011 (UTC)


 * The passage in question has to do with a scientific dispute between Carl Sagan (and Paul Feyerabend and numerous others, which there is not particular need to mention) and the 186 scientists. These are all third party sources. Sagan was a vehement astrology skeptic but in this case he was defending the authority of science based on evidence rather than decree and influence peddling. Science cannot just decree that a mechanism is required for astrology when it is not required for science. Statistical inference is a perfectly scientific method and it has been by far the main means of scientific advancement for the past hundred years. There would have been no dispute if the 186 had asked for statistical evidence, but they asked for a mechanism. That is a straw man argument and Sagan is pointing it out.


 * The proposed rewording by Be-Critical is something else. It has a logical flaw to assert that mechanism is needed to support fundamental tenants, which Sagan was referring to. That is an epistemological error, and not what Sagan intended to mean. Ken McRitchie (talk) 16:58, 30 September 2011 (UTC)


 * You're right that science begins by observation without reference to explanation. It might be justifiable to say something to that effect.  As I see it, my suggested text says "scientists assert there is no mechanism, astrologists agree there is no known mechanism."  What you want to add, is that a thing is not inherently pseudoscientific/unscientific just because no mechanism is known.  That is a reasonable addition if it is sourced, and Sagan is a good source.  But let's not go into detail about Sagan: there's no need for defensiveness on either side.   Be— —Critical  17:18, 30 September 2011 (UTC)


 * You keep referring to persons who rent their accommodation. Do you mean tenets, by any chance? Britmax (talk) 17:52, 30 September 2011 (UTC)


 * @BeCritical: I don't have any problem with the emboldened text addition you suggested.


 * On the other hand, I am very opposed to the idea of cutting the Sagan comment. Primarily because it is notably relevant, in the way it is connected to the astrological reports of this matter. On another level, I think it should stay because it is interesting. It allows the passage to read well, and gives a break in what could be heavy-weight content.


 * I think we've done a lot to neutralise this, and it now reflects the sceptical view much more clearly than before. Bear in mind that we're also not adding more info that some of us would like to add, about the situation behind this.


 * Since most editors have shown themselves to be in agreement with the changes, I hope you'll be willing to compromise on that. It would be good to get this one to bed and move on the next section, which may be more tricky than this. --  Zac   Δ talk! 18:47, 30 September 2011 (UTC)


 * I rather think the rewrite above special pleading by WEIGHT and redundant, but I'm not going to object, at least for now, unless others also have a problem with it. Be— —Critical  19:31, 30 September 2011 (UTC)
 * I sort of agree that the Sagan section is a bit to long. Dropping the whole sentence including the quote about Wegener would not detract from the article, and it would get rid of some of the semblence of special pleading. Actually, the paragraph also flows better without it, too. Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 19:55, 30 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Yes, I meant "tenets" :P thanks. Let's get some comments by other editors, especially on "no scientific foundation for astrology's tenets due to the lack of any mechanism whereby astrological effects might occur." The tenets of astrology have to do with macrocosm-microcosm, synchronicity, etc. These tenets are principles whereby astrological observations are organized. Without them there can be no "astrological" observations at all, let alone mechanisms or statistical effects. Mechanism do not describe tenets but tenets are necessary to describe mechanisms. The point Sagan is making is that it is not necessary for science to be defined by mechanisms. Mechanisms can describe only simple systems and cannot deal with the complexities that statistical methods are capable of investigating, which is why statistics has become the predominant investigation in all areas of science. No one doubts that Gauquelin's statistical methods were scientific and no mechanism is involved. Though he put forward some of his own theories, they weren't really necessary. Sagan is suggesting that even in geophysics, which is pretty hard science, Wegener had scientific evidence for his theories before the mechanism was discovered. Sagan was was not defending astrology at all but rather the integrity of science against a false representation of what science requires. Let's hear some other voices. Ken McRitchie (talk) 00:21, 1 October 2011 (UTC)


 * My suggestion: There are a few minor gripes but no major and significant problems with this piece of text. Can we agree to include the comment about "no scientific foundation" and then accept this for now as preferable to what is on the main page? This does not imply that there are no other principles such as synchroncity, etc. I read it to mean there is no scientfically established foundation, (according to modern science) and with reference to things like physics/ celestial mechanics, etc. Others may read it differently, but we don't need a debate about that.


 * I'd like to suggest that we return to the remaining content in this section later; because I think it is more important to tie this up and move on to the text and references in the Carlson study section.--  Zac   Δ talk! 01:09, 1 October 2011 (UTC)
 * To which proposal are you referring? There are at least two. Short Brigade Harvester Boris (talk) 01:23, 1 October 2011 (UTC)


 * I've put in an edit break that goes straight to it: Proposed text. This has incorporated proposed changes, including the addition "due to the lack of any mechanism whereby astrological effects might occur", which BeCritical suggested. --  Zac   Δ talk! 01:41, 1 October 2011 (UTC)

After making the addition BeCritical suggested, one sentence was getting very clunky. I just made a copy-edit which keeps all the relevant words but reads more smoothly. This is what we had:

"Entitled ‘Objections to Astrology’, the statement declared that there is no scientific foundation for astrology's tenets due to the lack of any mechanism whereby astrological effects might occur, and offered a caution to the public against the unquestioning acceptance of astrological advice. Its criticism focused on the question of astrological mechanisms with the following words:"

Now it reads:

"Entitled ‘Objections to Astrology’, the statement offered a caution to the public against the unquestioning acceptance of astrological advice. It declared no scientific foundation for astrology's tenets due to the lack of any mechanism whereby astrological effects might occur; as demonstrated with the following words:"

The change is shown in the section "Proposed text" which is showing exactly what is being proposed as the edit for the change. Am happy to change it back if anyone thinks the edit affects any weight given to word order, etc. --  Zac   Δ talk! 04:26, 1 October 2011 (UTC)


 * If you're talking about the text in the link as it exists at this moment, no way. It seriously dilutes the message of the statement. The previous version was better was better. The whole point and PRIMARY message of the scientists' statement was that "there is no scientific foundation" for astrology. That must be mentioned as soon as possible in the paragraph, and not be buried or minimized. Also, the English is horrible. "Offered a caution to" isn't English, and it's wimpy to the point of blatant apologetics. You mean "warned". Also, change "due to the lack of any" to "and there is no". It simplifies the sentence structure and reads easier and clearer. Also, mentioning the title of the statement is not necessary. The title is banal, anyway.


 * Try this (right after "day"):


 * They declared that there is no scientific foundation for the tenets of astrology and warned the public against accepting astrological advice without question. Their criticism focused on the fact that there was no mechanisms whereby astrological effects might occur with the following words:


 * Also, far too much weight and far too much space is given to Sagan. Delete the "cosmos" clause. It's superfluous and a bit PEACOCKy. Please delete the Wegener quote in its entirety. It adds nothing to the article and, without abbundant context and explantion for which we have no room in this article, can be misinterpreted and misused (as it has been many times). Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 06:55, 1 October 2011 (UTC)


 * Here is my proposal for the Sagan paragraph:


 * Astronomer Carl Sagan declined to sign the statement. For this reason, his words have been quoted by those who argue that astrology retains some sort of scientific validity.[2] However, Sagan’s stance was not taken because he thought astrology was valid, but because he thought that the tone of the statement was authoritarian, and that dismissing astrology because there was no mechanism was not convincing. In a letter published in a follow-up edition of The Humanist,[4] Sagan confirmed that he would have been willing to sign such a statement had it described and refuted the principal tenets of astrological belief. This, he argued, would have been more persuasive and would have produced less controversy.


 * Much more terse and to the point, and less subject to misinterpretation. Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 07:29, 1 October 2011 (UTC)


 * There are two classes of question to be settled here: the objections to astrology and related subjects (and, where relevant, their refutations of course); and the policy towards discussion of fringe or questionable topics in WP. So far I doubt that I am saying raises many hackles or novelties. As far as objections are concerned, I am so dismissive of astrology that I have to mention the fact if I am to discuss the matter in good faith. The mechanism argument is of course important in two ways: unknown mechanism is only a disqualification when notionally every possible mechanism is refutable, which generally is not in principle possible; however, when the effect is to leave us with nothing falsifiable, that is not much of a recommendation either — it leaves us squarely in wishful thinking, homeopathic, invisible pink unicorn, territory.  This raises a question immediately: on what terms do we tolerate IPU-type topics? (Hah! It just occurred to me to look up IPUs and good grief! There is such an article! Fair enough; the IPU article is a sort of meta-article, in which form sociological, philosophical, etc articles on fringe subjects are tolerable as long as each topic is sufficiently notable and the treatment sufficiently encyclopaedic...)


 * OK. Mainstream science has its own IPUs of sorts, QED/RT fundamentals, dark matter, strings, multiverses, GUTs & TOEs etc, but in spite of the exchange of much spittle & ink, neither the participants, the critics, nor the audience of such controversies and programmes suggests that such topics are in principle disqualified from serious research. However, think of N-rays and polywater to name but two in real science: when they were falsified they languished by the wayside. In this respect they differed from the real fringe topics, which clots and crooks resuscitate indefinitely. The Jacques Benveniste affair was doubtless innocent, but a good example of how far beyond reasonable doubt partisans can rationalise negative results in illogical fields. The astrological research that I have heard of, struck me as less innocent, but similarly persistent.


 * You see, scientific research techniques are like maths and stats: ask a nonsensical question, and you get a nonsensical answer; every second self-important idiot thinks he has what it takes to research anything on any topic, and not one in dozens realises how treacherous the traps are that the real world of experiment design can be, traps for anyone who does not properly formulate, not merely the research protocols and methods, but the fundamental assumptions of a research programme, even after statistical analysis to destruction. If anyone is interested enough, I can elaborate on the point, but those who have done it will know what I mean.
 * Now, the research on astrology isn't even based on nearly well-defined assumptions etc, and the assumptions are inconsistent both within any one work and between separate workers. No independent workers independently come up with consistent or self-consistent, let alone identical assumptions. Straight away that leaves us with poor prospects for meaningful research. Dud results are easy to rationalise away with demands for meaningless, let alone unattainable precision, such as the how to define the moment or location of birth. There are unresolvable questions about whether the moment of conception, gastrulation, quickening, or even birth itself is the crucial time for calculation. Then the very same protagonist will present detailed rationalisation of horoscopes for ancient historical figures, whereas there are whole armies for whom they have exactly as precise data. And in birth, what constitutes birth? Rupture of the membranes? Emergence of the head? Severance of the cord? The proponents shift effortlessly and repeatedly between demands and claims for tremendous, if meaningless, precision on the one hand, and the airiest hand-waving on the other.  And then some of them have the naked cheek to apply statistics! Stats is an enormously powerful discipline, but it is an utter slave to GIGO, so not one of the studies yielding favourable conclusions is worth a cup of cold spit, except in terms of monetary gain to the perpetrator, as long as he concentrates on avoiding every approach to experimental virtue and presenting only trappings impressive to the unthinkingly impressionable.


 * In short, where the scientific merit of the field of study is concerned, no WP author or editor need apologise one bit for dismissing the allegedly scientific evidence for astrology, as radically as a professional chef might dismiss a little girl's mud-pies in a Michelin evaluation. There is more where this came from, but I should say that it is unnecessary to flog the dead unicorn any further for now.


 * But remember also and always, the crooks have been at it longer than you have, and not one worth his salt but can tie up a whole team of well-meaning callow scientists in any reasonable forum. It is their job. Why does the rabbit run faster than the fox? The rabbit is running for his life, the fox only for his supper. So watch it!!!


 * The second question deals with policy towards dealing with topics beyond the fringe, not to mention crookery and exploitation of the public. It is a difficult matter, ethically, socially, and legally. Except when legal counsel advises otherwise, WP should avoid naming names and should speak in terms of generalities such as "No study in this field has demonstrated any merit, and many victims of practitioners have died penniless..." rather than "Xenonradon's machine is a criminal scam...". Conversely, to say that "Many practitioners and patients claim great effect, and it is hard to prove them wrong..." is quite enough to fatten whole armies of criminal parasites. Anyone who has tried to cross-check the validity of WP articles by scanning Google, will have been shocked by the degree to which our pronouncements get uncritically plagiarised and recycled as being conclusive in blog after blog. It is quite worrying.


 * I have no easy answer, but we can probably achieve a reasonable degree of control by being a bit picky about our standards of admission of sources. As long as we are careful in preparing our criticisms up front, challenging and removing dud citations and demanding proper support for dud arguments, and keeping a few dozen rotten apples on our watchlists, I think we can achieve enough control to make it worth while. We need to sweep carefully in front of our own doorsteps though — there have been cases where senior editors have misused their powers to advance PC nonsense and suppress opposition (no names, no pack drill) and if we are to watch the standards of others, we need to watch our own with double care.


 * So someone has perpetrated something we are sure is nonsensical, but cannot instantly torpedo? Like the so-called research that supported astrology for example? Going beyond WP:BURDEN, I suspect that some sort of limbo status should be recognised or established (if it doesn't already exist; I am not deeply into such matters) by which one can read something, doubt or deny its merits, and if unable to establish the matter alone, one can mark it for attention by interested parties (a committee? A bit like this request for comment thing perhaps? Or maybe exactly this?)  If no support materialises within a day or two, the material gets undone (it is of course still in the history file) but with an invitation for favourable partisans to try again and try harder if they think they have sound material. And of course critics would be similarly welcome to post material that meets WP standards without shrillness or vindictiveness. I don't know how to be fairer and more realistic about such things. JonRichfield (talk) 15:57, 1 October 2011 (UTC)


 * I see on another WP page that Zac  has suffered a personal family tragedy and is therefore much indisposed to continue this discussion. I wish Zac and his family well.
 * I will support the suggested edits by Dominus Vobisdu for the text under consideration. They are further clarifications of Zac's proposed edits. I must say that I also enjoyed JonRichfield's colorful metaphors and cautions. This is an extremely complex subject and it would be most useful if more editors could become familiar with the historical context and the content of the sources that are cited. Ken McRitchie (talk) 00:18, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you. I am about to catch a flight, and thought I would put an explanation here of why I need to drop out of this for a while. Bottom line, a member of my immediate family died today in unexpected circumstances, and I have a lot of arrangements to make and support to give elsewhere. The post above looks very interesting, another time I would have given it more attention.
 * BeCritical, I just reverted a bunch of your edits - too many didn't make sense.  You can't change the title 'core principles' to 'cosmology' for example; and why insert a phrase like "before it split with astronomy" into a phrase like "When it began"? Very little made sense to me and I don't have the time or energy to explain. Whilst Dominus Vobsidu's seemed OK (so I left those) all of you should propose edits here and give a 24 hour opportunity for comment; otherwise you will start a free for all on this article that will turn into an editorial blood-bath. --   Zac   Δ talk! 00:42, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh, to tie this up; I liked the Sagan quote within the text, but I would also accept Dom Vob's proposed edit. It is well written, and reliable; so that's fine. Please though - do the same with your other suggestions, and don't just put them in the main page without consensus. More heads are better than one.--  Zac   Δ talk! 00:52, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm sorry to hear about your loss Zac.


 * The change you mention needed copy editing, but I feel it continued a theme from the rest of the article, to note that astrology and astronomy were the same thing to begin with.  And that was an historical section. And why can't I change the heading?  It looks like cosmology to me, and it looks like cosmology describes the content a lot better than principles.   Be— —Critical  01:29, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
 * It looks like we have consensus for the rewrite. I've introduced the changes into the article. Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 07:06, 2 October 2011 (UTC)

Change proposals
Editors can propose changes below.

diff
Propose this change, per request by Zac. But seriously folks, there's no reason this page can't be edited collaboratively. There's no reason to revert wholesale just because someone didn't follow your idea of the right process. Be— —Critical 01:19, 2 October 2011 (UTC)


 * I'm not sure if Zac requested these particular changes. Cosmology is a misleading heading for the section on basic principles. This section is about how to analytically think about astrology, in particular the organizational premises behind astrological observations. It has to do with the astrological understanding of space, time, unity, number, and other very fundamental concepts. Renaming this Cosmology invites the insertion by less informed or careless editors of unrelated creation concepts and "activities of the gods," which will corrupt the section and cause confusion. The original "Core Beliefs" was better than Cosmology but not as good as Principles. Ken McRitchie (talk) 14:47, 3 October 2011 (UTC)


 * The suggested wording "Astrology, prior to its differentiation from astronomy, began as a study..." does not make sense. It seems to suggest that differentiation from astronomy had an effect on how it began. Please suggest something better. Ken McRitchie (talk) 14:59, 3 October 2011 (UTC)

Time for formal request for Arbitration Enforcement?
This article is seeing multiple instance of uncollaborative behavior. The main problem is akin to article ownership, insisting that almost all substantive edits be discussed first and then overwhelming the ensuing discussion in repetitive walls of text. (In fact, when posting this I edit-conflicted the section immediately above that illustrates the point.) I think formal action under the Arbitration Committee discretionary sanctions for this topic area could be helpful in producing a more constructive environment. But I would rather not go the formal route if there is a possibility that things could be worked out in an informal and amicable way. I would be interested in hearing others' thoughts on this matter. Short Brigade Harvester Boris (talk) 01:28, 2 October 2011 (UTC)
 * I too have been concerned about this behavior where nearly every edit is reverted on sight with numerous WP:SPAs/new editors coming out of the woodwork. Hopefully this behavior will stop. Yobol (talk) 02:43, 4 October 2011 (UTC)

SPA edits nearing vandalism
User:Neckbrace has popped up today with a surprisingly good knowledge of WP for a newbie and has reverted a number of my edits and those of others. The most annoying is the reversal of the essential moves towards globalising the article. Actually, it is clear that this headline article Astrology has the main purpose of summarising the different traditions. The Indian and Chinese systems need to be given roughly equal weight to the Greek-Arabic-European tradition, and the popular "sun-sign" astrology also needs to be covered. All the detail that only relates to one of these practices should be in an sub-article. Itsmejudith (talk) 08:17, 4 October 2011 (UTC)


 * Itsmejudith, there has been a lot of 'bold' editing lately. 753 editors watch this page so there are bound to be reverts if your edits are incorrect as several were or controversial and without consensus or full discussion on the talk page.


 * Now I support your objective that the Astrology page should be universal. However, by what criteria do you consider that the Indian and Chinese systems should be reported compared with the Mesopotamian-Egyptian-Hellenistic-Roman-Islamic-European & Western tradition?  Number of practitioners, followers, history, number of books, cultural impact, world-wide spread by continent or as this is the English WP - should it be books and publications in the English language? In all cases, western astrology predominates.


 * Also, keep in mind that what is popularly known as Chinese astrology - the year of the Rooster, etc is a misnomer. It is not astrology as it is based on an annual cycle, whose only celestial connection is the New Moon to determine the start of the cycle (like Easter or Ramadan) - there is no astro and it is closer to numerology.   Real Chinese (celestial) Astrology exists, but it is quite specialised and recent reports suggest that western astrology is more popular in mainland China (as indeed it is in Japan and throughout most of the world outside India). []   Robert Currey   talk  10:45, 4 October 2011 (UTC)
 * It's not "my" objective. It's policy. And no, number of sources in English is not a factor. And it doesn't matter if Chinese astrology is technically a misnomer, it is still a massive global phenomenon and should be covered adequately in this top-level article. It may be that we end up with only two or three sentences on each tradition, with links to sub-articles. Itsmejudith (talk) 11:02, 4 October 2011 (UTC)


 * What is the policy on this? Robert Currey   talk  12:49, 4 October 2011 (UTC)
 * The problem is that this a top-level umbrella article, yet it seems to default into Western Astrology, which already has its own article, as do Hindu astrology and Chinese Astrology. Detailed information specific to Western Astrology belongs properly in that article, and the top-level article should contain only a brief summary of that material in this article. The biggest problem is the History section, which deals exclusively with the history of Western Astrology, and which also has its own article, History of Astrology. The relevant policies are WP:CFORK and WP:SPLIT. In other words, this article should be an introductory-type article about astrology in general introducing common features, and briefly overviewing each subtype without going into depth. For detailed information about any of the subtypes, readers should be directed to the subarticles. This is to avoid redundant material in multiple articles, which is hard to keep reconciled, as well as POV forking. Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 13:24, 4 October 2011 (UTC)


 * Yes, this is not the place to go into detail about astrology, just give the basics and refer to the sub-articles. We need to include Chinese astrology, or rename the article. Be— —Critical  18:20, 4 October 2011 (UTC)

Lede
User:Neckbrace keeps adding the sentence "a search for meaning in the sky" to the lede. I have reverted twice. I think it sounds terrible, even if sourced, and unnecessary. I also think it's kind of a vague and meaningless statement. If astrology in it's broadest sense is finding meaning in the sky, does that mean that looking at the shapes that clouds appear to make is astrology? If I find meaning in the color blue and I see a blue sky, am I an astrologer? Those do sound silly, yes, but that's what you get when you have vague statements. Other opinions? N o f o rmation Talk  03:24, 5 October 2011 (UTC)


 * It bothered me and I changed it once too, so Neckbrace may be pushing 3RR? Be— —Critical  03:37, 5 October 2011 (UTC)
 * He just added it back in, has broken 3RR and the warning has been left on his page. I hate making 3RR reports, does anyone want to do it?  N o f o rmation  Talk  04:10, 5 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Don't look at me. I just want to know why people don't want to call it "cosmology," and prefer core principles, unless it's just to make it sound more formal.  But cosmology seems more appropriate to the content to me.  Be— —Critical  04:21, 5 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Since he did it again I went ahead and made the report. This is getting pretty ridiculous.  N o f o rmation  Talk  04:25, 5 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Anyone else find this "new" editor jumping into this dispute at this time suspicious? Yobol (talk) 04:50, 5 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Clearly suspicious, but I haven't been around this article long enough to notice any trends with any specific editors. Did you have anyone in mind? He should be blocked for edit warring shortly, after that if the behavior continues with no discussion perhaps an SPI will be necessary.   N o f o rmation  Talk  04:52, 5 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Yes, it does seem rather vague - one can search for meaning anywhere. Astrologers seem on the other hand (bye and large) to claim to have found it there, by studying specific extraterrestrial objects (e.g. 'stars'/planets). This distinguishes astrology from meteorology, which searches for another 'meaning in the sky' - as in 'does that ugly black cloud coming this way mean that it is likely to rain?'. As a statement, it may well be true, but it doesn't tell us much. So no, it doesn't belong in the lede. AndyTheGrump (talk)


 * I agree that "search for meaning" is vague. It also gives it the feeling of a TV show introduction on alien visitations, crop circles etc. I have no problem with "belief" as it is stated now. Tampering with the lede is just inviting more careless editing and more trouble at this point. There are already too many changes being made without discussion. Ken McRitchie (talk) 14:14, 5 October 2011 (UTC)

Content dispute
I've applied temporary page protection to the article due to the content dispute mentioned above. Appears to be a consensus forming above, but this brief protection will allow time for all parties involved to discuss rather than edit-warring over the content of the page. --- Barek (talk • contribs) - 05:17, 5 October 2011 (UTC)
 * I appreciate the attention but I don't know if full protection is what is needed here. We have a single editor that has been reverted for the same edit by three different parties, three of us have attempted to discuss on his talk page but he refuses.  Since he's somewhere between 8RR and 13RR, I think a block until he actually responds on a talk page is in order.  We have a lot of work to do on this article and it's been going decent for the last couple days until this happened.  Would you consider unprotecting the page and blocking the reverting editor? Again, thanks for coming by, admins seem to be in short supply tonight! Nevermind, it looks like Fastily took care of it.  Thanks Fastily!  N o f o rmation  Talk  05:21, 5 October 2011 (UTC)


 * Um, it looks like you protected it for 3 days, just because one editor broke 3RR? That's not brief, maybe till sometime tomorrow would have been okay.  Would you mind unprotecting sooner than the 8th?  Be— —Critical  05:22, 5 October 2011 (UTC)


 * It's not just that one editor violated 3RR, though that didn't help. It's almost as if editors who were watching could not tolerate the sense that the active editors were approaching a consensus, however distantly. The article has been decimated by editors who seem to have come out of nowhere and are not discussing their changes. Ken McRitchie (talk) 14:22, 5 October 2011 (UTC)


 * There may be consensus about one new editor to this page, but I am concerned about the tendentious editing of some of the mob of seven new editors who have appeared. Though some of their edits are constructive and necessary, most are without reference to the talk page, without consensus and with little understanding of the points.  In most instances, these editors are pushing their personal beliefs about astrology rather than any knowledge.  Astrology is a more complex field than it first appears.  A lot of well-cited material that arouse through collaborative editing and research has been deleted without any explanation and sometimes replaced with original research or factual errors or points that contradict the lede. While some may consider this a victory for rationalism, the failure to make a case on the talk page and the desperation to bend WP rules to cover up uncomfortable facts suggests the opposite and that this is ultimately a loss to Wikipedia.  Robert Currey   talk  16:33, 5 October 2011 (UTC)
 * While controversial edits should probably be discussed here, there is nothing wrong with being bold and enforcing policy where it is blatantly being violated. This article is rife with policy violations, especially WP:FRINGE violations.   If someone makes an edit you disagree with, you are free to revert it and discuss it on the talk page - nothing is ever permanent on WP, so I'm not sure why you're complaining.  I came here, I think either from AN/I or from the fringe noticeboard and honestly I can't figure out how this page lasted as an advertisement for astrology for so long.  That Dominic had to start and RFC just to demonstrate that fringe sources cannot be used the way they were goes to show that the regular editors of this page seem not to get or care about wikipedia policies on pseudoscience.  Lastly, as far as pushing personal beliefs or knowledge goes, the point of NPOV is that neither knowledge nor belief goes into the article, but rather that of reliable sources as defined by WP:RS and guided by WP:FRINGE.  Astrology is only as complex as the sources that we're allowed to use present it as.   N o f o rmation  Talk  18:52, 5 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Discussion is fine, but my experience here has been that those who revert were not willing to discuss their problems with the edits. However, the focus on removing sources was partially wrong I believe, and the focus should have been more on attribution and context.  Also, there is the issue of using this article merely as a jumping off point to other more specific articles, and also globalizing it.  Anyway, if you aren't willing to go over the edits such as mine point-by-point, there isn't much else we could do besides what's been happening.  Just reverting all the time is only going to get you accusations of WP:OWN.   Be— <span style="background:black;color:white;padding:0px 5px 6px 0px;cursor:pointer;cursor:hand;letter-spacing:2px;">—Critical  19:18, 5 October 2011 (UTC)
 * I think with the work that you, Dominic, and yes even Neckbrance, have done over the past week has made a huge improvement to the article. Sometimes it can be hard to go over things point by point but assuming the sourcing is correct it's just a matter of working out the details.  As far as disputes go, I've seen much worse, I think in a month this article will be awesome and maybe even GA status.   N <sup style="color:red;">o f o rmation  <sup style="color:black;">Talk  20:00, 5 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks. I appreciate that Becritical and others would have liked to have had a point-by-point discusiion so as not to throw out the baby with the bath water, but that was impossible considering the sheer amount of blatant nonsense that had to be removed. When Yobol and I made our initial bold deletions, we cut more than a quarter of the article, almost all in the extremely apologetic "research" section, which was basically, as Noformation said, just an advertisement which violated countless WP policies. I'm happy that the RfC atracted attention to this article so that it is now being overwatched by editors familiar with sourcing of fringe subjects, and confident that the article can be brought up to GA status. One project that lies before us is cutting a lot of the material that is specific for Western Astrology and merging into our article under that title. There's no problem with reinserting material later if proper sourcing is found. Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 22:07, 5 October 2011 (UTC)
 * I just want to mention that I didn't purposely leave Yobol, Judith or anyone else out in my post, I wrote that in a hurry right before I left for class so it was just a minor oversight.  N <sup style="color:red;">o f o rmation  <sup style="color:black;">Talk  00:10, 6 October 2011 (UTC)


 * Noformation – As you state, I am technically free to revert. However, whenever I have reverted edits that have not been discussed on the talk page with a request for discussion, I have simply been reverted notably by the new editors who have recently materialised.  I have even been warned by one new editor that I was edit warring for doing so - please give me a break!  Since this new editor neglected to warn the other new editors engaged in tendentious editing, he was clearly posturing to push his POV.  However, argument by assertion and repeated reversion rather than by reason is the natural resort of a fundamentalist.


 * There is no way that this page could ever have been called an advertisement for astrology. It has always contained huge criticisms of astrology which are frankly not supported by evidence.  Have you ever seen an astrologer advertise him or herself as a pseudoscientist?  It is a controversial claim and pejorative term - yet there have been many instances where I have reverted or argued with editors who have tried to remove the reference to astrology as a pseudoscience – even if it is open to question (more on that in another post). However, to an extreme sceptic facts about astrology (that are not critical) may seem like an advertisement.  Anyone who believes that it was an advertisement is going to edit selectively to redress their perceived bias.    At the moment the page reads like an article from the Skeptical Inquirer and not an impartial Encyclopedia.


 * I am more than willing to discuss edits, though the onus is primarily on the editor to make their case for their edit on the talk page before making the edit. At the moment, the frenetic editing activity with so many editors makes it impossible to raise all the issues, though this can be done over time.


 * Dominus Vobisdu, your claim that it was impossible to discuss points “considering the sheer amount of blatant nonsense that had to be removed” sounds like an excuse to avoid trying to justify your edits in a way that could lead to any consensus. There is nothing bold about this behaviour - if it is such 'blatant nonsense', then you should have no problem making a persuasive case.  As it is, you are using selective interpretation of WP rules and force of numbers using editors invited onto this page (many who fundamentally misunderstand the subject or the context or the history of the arguments) to bulldoze your POV and cover-up verifiable facts that challenge your personal beliefs.  Robert Currey   talk  12:42, 6 October 2011 (UTC)