Talk:Athena-Artemis

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Thanks for adding to this. Can I just say to those who know little or nothing about this work, the current text is a little confusing.

Try and put yourself in the place of the causual inquirer, and could the article be aimed at explaining this piece bit by bit. It seems that it have been published in different ways (or do I misunderstand) that may be a the core of the problem.

I came at the article originally not sure if the title meant a "novel" or a "character" and the mention of a "manuscript" started in my mind the idea of an ancient archaeological fragment! :: Kevinalewis  :  (Talk Page) / (Desk)  10:53, 26 September 2006 (UTC)