Talk:Atherstone Hunt

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 * Added tag to http://www.mfha.org.uk/index.php?option=com_directory&listing=Atherstone+Hunt&page=viewListing&lid=112&Itemid=71
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20080516034604/http://www.pointtopoint.co.uk/go/news/atherstone_rep.html to http://www.pointtopoint.co.uk/go/news/atherstone_rep.html
 * Added tag to http://www.dlraa.co.uk/HUNT_SUPPORTS_AIR_AMBULANCE.html

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History neutrality
The history section of this article is riddled with opinion and NPOV emotive language. Needs a professional NPOV edit. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 212.187.239.168 (talk) 13:32, 4 May 2017 (UTC)

Added that all seemingly emotive language are clearly linked to true facts and can be verified.


 * This passage is even less neutral than the newspaper article that it cites (present tense, meaningful dwelling on minutiae, epithets and turns of phrase that describe a relatively mundane event like a war crime):


 * "The video footage shows the dogs chase a fox across a field. As the hounds tear into the fox with their teeth, a member of the hunt reaches down and pulls the lifeless body of the animal from underneath the pack and slings it over the front of a colleague’s horse."


 * For the purposes of neutrality and readability, and in context (the footage was offered as a proof of alleged, illegal, controversial activity; police evidence) it should read something like this:


 * "The video footage showed a pack of dogs chasing a fox across a field and killing it. Following them was a party of riders wearing traditional hunting garb; one of the riders picked up the carcass and slung it over a horse's back. AyeBraine (talk) 10:19, 1 June 2019 (UTC)"