Talk:Atlantic City–Brigantine Connector/GA1

GA Review
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I am planning to begin the review of this article.SriMesh | talk  00:14, 10 February 2009 (UTC) Peer Review:
 * 1. Change the spelling of cancelled to canceled.
 * 2. Are Midtown and Downbeach sections - neighbourhoods?
 * 3. Change travelling  to traveling.
 * 4. The automatic peer reviewer thingie found a manual of style issue...these pretty  much go away if one uses the conversion templates
 * Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -  between a number and the unit of measurement. For example, instead of 7 km, use 7 km, which when you are editing the page, should look like: 7&amp;nbsp;km.[?]
 * 5. Whoops..which one is it? ...The connector is 1.98 miles (3.19 km)[1] (3.7 km) long, 3.7 or 3.19 km?
 * 6. Route 446X should also be in the infobox as other names.
 * 7. The connector consists of lettered exits from A to H. Are these exits incrementing from south to north or north to south?
 * 8. What is Brigantine, New Jersey. ...a city, town, neighbourhood?
 * 9. The abbreviation needs to be spelled out CEO and MGM
 * 10 Per manual of style... the firt time currency is used mention that it is $..If it is significant when using currency in an article use the Template:Inflation ...perhaps check the diff out in a sandbox.
 * 11. The last sentence of the lead does not read properly please re-phrase....perhaps the last was could be at.
 * 12. A map would be nice...will check to see if maps are a pre-requisite to GA or not and come back to here...Have checked and maps are not pre-requisite, rather in the same kind of status as images...nice to have but not necessary for a GA pass or fail.... so will leave the comment as a map would be nice, but if not added is not a fail.
 * 13. Images check out.
 * 14. As the speed limit is given in ref 1 it could be noted in article.
 * 15. This is a marginal reference reference as it could become circular, as it obtains its info from wikipedia
 * 16 This article mentions toll charges collected. This would be interesting to plop into the article, we don't have them here.
 * 17 In the junction box what is a G.S. Pkwy, it is not mentioned in the article, and perhaps it could be to fill out the abbreviation for those not local to the area.


 * GA review (see here for criteria)

I have placed the article on hold so that the above concerns can be addressed so that the article can be passed. Good work and kind regards SriMesh | talk  02:39, 10 February 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * see above notes
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * see also above notes re one reference
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * from what I see it is broad in coverage, and it has a few contributors as well. Will get a quick second opinion on this point.... so far will leave this aspect as aye.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I have gone back and made changes to the article. As for #9, MGM is a commonly used abbreviation. #10, same concerns over Template:Inflation as in the New Jersey Route 90 GA Review #16, there are no tolls along the Atlantic City-Brigantine Connector, they are along the Atlantic City Expressway. #17, G.S. Pkwy is a link to Garden State Parkway, the abbreviation is a part of the template used for junctions in the exit list. Dough4872 (talk) 02:21, 11 February 2009 (UTC)
 * Hello there, now that corrections are attended, the article has been upgraded SriMesh | talk  02:56, 13 February 2009 (UTC)