Talk:Attack on German Flatts (1778)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MathewTownsend (talk · contribs) 01:03, 19 February 2012 (UTC)


 * I enjoy these articles and wish to review this one. MathewTownsend (talk) 01:03, 19 February 2012 (UTC)


 * Comments
 * background
 * "He recruited a mix of Iroquois and white Loyalists estimated " - aren't Loyalists by definition not Indian. I'm not clear what "white" clarifies. Removed  Magic ♪piano 21:32, 20 February 2012 (UTC)
 * "He began his campaigning in late May" - began his campaign? Rephrased (especially since the "late May" bit was somewhat repetitive).  Magic ♪piano 21:32, 20 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Otherwise, all is well. MathewTownsend (talk) 20:19, 19 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks again for reviewing, glad you enjoy them (there are more in this thread on the way).  Magic ♪piano 21:32, 20 February 2012 (UTC)

GA review-see WP:WIAGA for criteria (and here for what they are not)


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose: clear and concise, correct spelling and grammar:
 * B. Complies with MoS for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Provides references to all sources:
 * B. Provides in-line citations from reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Main aspects are addressed:
 * B. Remains focused:
 * 1) Does it follow the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Nice work! MathewTownsend (talk) 00:48, 22 February 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Nice work! MathewTownsend (talk) 00:48, 22 February 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Nice work! MathewTownsend (talk) 00:48, 22 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Nice work! MathewTownsend (talk) 00:48, 22 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Nice work! MathewTownsend (talk) 00:48, 22 February 2012 (UTC)