Talk:Aubie

Narrowly focused, promotional language
The article is a good start, but is too oriented to Auburn fans who already know something about him. Peacock language like "famous," "proudly marched," "on the job," "one of the best collegiate mascots in the nation," etc. don't belong in an encyclopedia article. The article would also be improved by citing independent sources (i.e. from beyond Auburn). Aubie has been written up many times in the press. — ℜob C. alias &Agrave;LAROB  16:04, 2 August 2012 (UTC)