Talk:Aubrey Smith (Royal Navy officer)

Copyediting
The first sentence in the "Early life and career" section contains no less than seven individual clauses. Although it is technically not grammatically incorrect, I think this section would be better if the sentence were broken down into two or three shorter sentences. Likewise, the second sentence in the "Retirement" section contains no less than eleven individual clauses. Again, it is not grammatically incorrect, but it would be much clearer if it were broken down into several shorter sentences. Does anyone else have any thoughts on this matter? -- Notecardforfree (talk) 16:28, 4 August 2015 (UTC)

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