Talk:Auston Matthews/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 14:06, 21 July 2019 (UTC)

I'll take this one on, will post review as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 14:06, 21 July 2019 (UTC)

Initial review

Lead

 * Is there a reason ref 1 is in the lead and not the main body? Refs are generally avoided in the lead, only the town names don't feature in the main text which is a bit odd.

Early life

 * No need to link Mexico, per WP:OVERLINK.
 * "taking in a Phoenix Coyotes Game against the Washington Capitals where he would view" > where he witnessed?
 * "his incredible hand-eye coordination made him an excellent hitter", where is this observation coming from? Is it a quote? If so it needs attributing.

Junior

 * "set by Chicago Blackhawks star Patrick Kane", star is a bit of a WP:PEACOCK term.
 * Second paragraph is unsourced.

Switzerland

 * Last sentence of this section is unsourced.

Toronto Maple Leafs

 * "Matthews had been widely expected to go first overall for over a year leading up to the event, consistently topping prospect charts and major scouting reporters", what sources are supporting this?
 * "It is widely expected that first overall selections, as well as any other highly touted early draft picks, receive the maximum entry-level compensation under the NHL Collective Bargaining Agreement." Same as above.

2016–17

 * "his historic accomplishments", historic also seems a bit like a peacock term. Accomplisments is probably sufficient.
 * "He was the first Maple Leafs' rookie to receive the trophy in 50 years after Brit Selby in 1966.", since Brit Selby?
 * Last sentence is unsourced.

2017–18

 * "with 34 goals and average over one point per game", average > averaged?
 * Last sentence is unsourced.

2018–19

 * Last paragraph is unsourced.

International play

 * Second paragraph is partly unsourced.

Personal life

 * Last sentence of the first paragraph is unsourced.