Talk:Australia's First Families of Wine

Inappropriate tone
I find this article to be written too much in a "press release" tone, and it is in need of an overhaul and some pruning. Tomas e (talk) 12:14, 6 October 2009 (UTC)

Have deleted/reworded some content + had another wikipedian attempt to edit article, more revision required in section mission statement, see links and references for material. SpringSummerAutumn (talk) 11:33, 11 October 2009 (UTC)

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