Talk:Australia 31–0 American Samoa/GA1

GA Review
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The article looks very nice. However, some minor problems need to be fixed before I can pass this.— Chris!  c t 22:13, 27 August 2009 (UTC)


 * The lead is a bit short. I understand that this is a short article, but I believe it is possible to expand it
 * Expanded lead to sensible level and reworded 03  md  23:51, 2 September 2009 (UTC)


 * I don't like the opening sentence very much. It sounds better imo if written like this: "On XX XX, XXXX, Australia defeated American Samoa 31–0 ..."
 * Reworded 03  md  23:51, 2 September 2009 (UTC)


 * And per WP:BOLDTITLE, descriptive title does not need to be bolded
 * Removed bolding 03  md  23:51, 2 September 2009 (UTC)


 * Show FIFA's full name in its first use (show this in English, not French)
 * Done 03  md  23:25, 2 September 2009 (UTC)

I have decided to get in on this nomination and have answered all your points. Can I additionally be credited alongside the original author if this is passed? 03 md  23:51, 2 September 2009 (UTC)
 * Ok, I pass this article. As for the credit, I don't really mind doing that, but it all depends on the original author.— Chris!  c t 05:46, 3 September 2009 (UTC)