Talk:Australian weasel shark/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 18:41, 8 December 2013 (UTC)

Looks pretty strong, as ever.


 * "John Stevens and Glen Cuthbert in 1983.[2] Its scientific description was authored by William White, Peter Last, and Leonard Compagno" Do we have articles about any of these people? We certainly do for Zootaxa.
 * Added some links.


 * "The large, oval eyes possess nictitating membranes and have a notched posterior rim" Plural eyes, but singular rims?
 * Fixed.


 * "octopuses such as Callistoctopus" Callistoctopus species?
 * Added "spp."


 * "such as that sharks over 90 cm (35 in) long eat almost nothing else" Do you need "as"?
 * Removed the "as".


 * "(see above)" WP:SELF?
 * Changed to "...habitat shift toward coral reefs".


 * "particularly for smaller sharks; other cephalopods, mud lobsters, crabs, and echinoderms are rarely consumed." This reads oddly; how about adding "in addition," before "other cephalopods"?
 * Divided into two sentences.


 * I'm assuming we don't know how long they live? Are those that are caught used for anything?
 * There's no longevity data. I looked for references about them being utilized but there wasn't any, so they may be discarded.


 * Useful link? Another? Another?
 * Links added.


 * A distribution category would be good.
 * Added one.

Very good, as ever. J Milburn (talk) 18:41, 8 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Let me know of further issues. -- Yzx (talk) 21:28, 8 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Very happy with the responses; promoting now. Great work! J Milburn (talk) 16:53, 9 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. -- Yzx (talk) 01:18, 10 December 2013 (UTC)