Talk:Australopithecus garhi/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:52, 20 May 2020 (UTC)

Criteria
1. Prose

2. Verifiability

3. Depth of Coverage

4. Neutral ✅

5. Stable ✅

6. Illustrations ✅

7. Miscellaneous

Comments
1.
 * "and it is possible that though unclear if males" - I think this needs commas to set off the appositive. It just doesn't read well.
 * done  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 22:56, 21 May 2020 (UTC)


 * The Owen Lovejoy link is incorrect, you linked to a guy from the 1800s
 * done  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 22:56, 21 May 2020 (UTC)


 * A. afarensis is a duplink
 * fixed  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 22:56, 21 May 2020 (UTC)


 * " this is based on only 2 specimens" - MOS:NUMERALS
 * done  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 22:56, 21 May 2020 (UTC)

8 "with 3 successive," - MOS:NUMERALS
 * done  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 22:56, 21 May 2020 (UTC)

2.
 * "625–9" - This is a page range, is it standard for the leading digits of the latter number to be lopped off? I don't see that much (I also mostly edit history articles), and it's a touch confusing to look at.
 * fixed  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 22:56, 21 May 2020 (UTC)


 * 629–35." - Ditto as above
 * fixed. I see this format a lot but I don't like it so I usually change it  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 22:56, 21 May 2020 (UTC)

3.
 * "The remains are dated to about 2.5 million years ago (mya)." - Is it known which method of dating was used?
 * added  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 22:56, 21 May 2020 (UTC)

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7.
 * The archaeologyInfo EL is dead for me.
 * fixed  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 22:56, 21 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Does the guy who made the Flickr image in the External links have any sort of qualification or subject-matter expertise? If not, I'm not sure if somebody's wild guess should be linked
 * added  User:Dunkleosteus77 &#124;push to talk 22:56, 21 May 2020 (UTC)