Talk:Authority (Law & Order: Special Victims Unit)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:56, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 22:56, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Add a comma after "April 29, 2008" per MOS:DATECOMMA.
 * Add a serial comma after "Milgram experiments".
 * "Milgram experiments" "Milgram experiment" (consistency with #Production)
 * Add a serial comma after "Grand Central Terminal".
 * "10pm" " 10pm " (10pm) per MOS:TIME.
 * If you add a quote to the lead, you have to recite a source per WP:QUOTE.
 * Done all of the above. Removed the quote from the lead, as it was from a source long gone from the article. - JuneGloom07 Talk  03:32, 1 April 2021 (UTC)

Plot

 * "voice skills" "vocal skills"
 * Remove the comma after "his ankle".
 * Without the names in parentheses, this section is 416 words. Try to get it down to 400 per MOS:TVPLOT.
 * Done. Plot should be 400 exact now. - JuneGloom07 Talk  03:38, 1 April 2021 (UTC)

Production

 * "guest starring" "guest-starring" (both uses) ✅
 * Add a serial comma after "Milgram experiment". ✅
 * Also add a serial comma after Mo Rocca. ✅
 * Various references in this section are dead. I'll point them out but an archive or replacement needs to be found for each of them. ✅
 * Reference in the caption, which is also used in prose, is dead. ✅
 * The first reference in this section is dead. ✅
 * "and who faces serious repercussions" is not part of the quote.
 * Changed.
 * The current-live reference after "like to appear on the show" doesn't show any text.
 * Not quite sure what to do here. I can try contacting the site to get a fix. - JuneGloom07 Talk  03:56, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
 * In the reference after Homicide: Life on the Street, I don't think the use of "|quote=" is necessary since it's recited later on. ✅
 * Reference after "event" is also dead. ✅
 * Why is there a summary of the episode in this section? I would remove it. ✅
 * The reference after "pillow fight" (from Just Jared) is not reliable per Reliable sources/Noticeboard/Archive 266.
 * I had this particular source whitelisted at WT:WHITELIST and thus believe it can be used in the article. - JuneGloom07 Talk  03:56, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
 * With the archive not showing any content and the link not working anymore, the reference after "appeared as himself" is dead.
 * Long story short, I saved all the HighBeam articles offline and just archived this one using dropbox and archive.is. - JuneGloom07 Talk  18:15, 1 April 2021 (UTC)

Reception

 * Try lowering the use of quotes in this section with the help of WP:RECEPTION. ✅
 * Recite sources at the end of each quote per WP:QUOTE. ✅
 * The reference from The Radio Times is dead.
 * Updated.
 * Same issues for the references after "by Rook", "grand exit", and "unsung roles". ✅

Progress

 * While I am grateful for the pass (and review), it was a bit premature. I'm working on finishing the last of the points raised now. - JuneGloom07 Talk  18:02, 1 April 2021 (UTC)