Talk:Autophagia

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Greg’s feedback (classmate)
You have created quite an impressive article so far, I have no criticisms, only some suggestions to help further strengthen it.

To start with, in the defining line consider adding the greek origin root word translation as is standard in medical articles. I actuay took the liberty of making the for you, hope it helps, just copy paste it into where you want, including the parentheses.

(αὐτόφάγειν, from αὐτό, auto “self” + φάγειν, phagein “to eat”)

I would suggest adding categories headings, the first being perhaps ==Signs and Symptoms== The second being ==Potential treatment==

If possible, specify which DSM, while the DSM-V is the newest and “gold standard” DSM-IV is still usable and acceptable to include in a patient chart. Truthfully I am not sure what changes occured between the two aside from a few new additions.

Consider including “Differential diagnosis: Trichophagia,” note the distinction that this is if it is only hair. While this was already noted on the bottom (excellent work by the way), I would consider including it in the body of the article somewhere.

Keep up the good work! Gkneiselwiki (talk) 05:59, 29 July 2018 (UTC)

Edit: the last section/paragraph maybe title it ==Animal studies== This appears to be well cited, concise and perfect for the Wikipedia in its balance of content. I see you cited DSM-4 in your references, don’t be afraid to specify DSM-4 in the body of the article just because it isn’t from the 5th ed., still valuble and considered current. Bonus points to yourself if you can find an earliest recorded occurrence of this or perhaps a nice greek pottery with some poor stick-figure devouring himself. Gkneiselwiki (talk) 06:08, 29 July 2018 (UTC)

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The above message was substituted from by PrimeBOT (talk) on 16:37, 2 January 2023 (UTC)