Talk:Avalanche Studios Group/Archives/2015

Reassessment
Came here via the reassessment request in the talk page banner; bumping this up to B-class. Ideas for improvement:
 * It's a little confusing to name the first history section 2001-2003, which implies to me that the company started in 2001 (when it didn't until 2003)- maybe a better title would be "Prior to founding" or something
 * What happened to Blomberg? There's quotes from Sundberg, but Blomberg just vanishes from the article
 * The Games section, besides the table, seems to repeat a lot of information from the history section, or at least it's not clear how you're dividing the information up between the two
 * The article could use a picture of the founders or the company's offices or something, if at all possible
 * There's various grammatical issues that should be cleaned up prior to GAN ('more than a decade ago.".[36]', 'composed of about 75 staffs') - the article as a whole needs a copyedit pass
 * I feel like the article's missing... something. Like, it's a good description of the work the company's done, but I don't get a sense of the company's goals/methods/philosophy. Maybe the sources just aren't there, or maybe the only goal is "make games to make money". I don't know.
 * I have added a philosophy section to the article, but I am not sure whether I did it correctly or not. (It is my first time writing a company article) Would you mind checking the philosophy section to see whether I had done it correctly or not? AdrianGamer (talk) 09:47, 20 July 2015 (UTC)
 * That looks good, it was exactly what I was talking about. Several grammar problems that I tried to briefly fix, though I didn't look too hard- see if you can get someone else to give the article a run-through prior to GAN. -- Pres N  12:28, 20 July 2015 (UTC)