Talk:Avocado cake/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wilhelmina Will (talk · contribs) 03:43, 8 March 2016 (UTC)

GA criteria
: With the issue below addressed, the article now complies with MOS policies with regards to grammar, along with general structural layout. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 10:52, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
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: The article is well-referenced, adhering to a decently-sized list of reputable sources. No signs of original research. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 07:45, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
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: As acknowledged in the discussion below, the article covers all encyclopedically relevant aspects of its topic for which reliable information was readily available. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 07:44, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
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. A neutral tone is kept, throughout the article. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 07:43, 3 April 2016 (UTC) . With the exception of some minor repeated vandalism back in January, there does not appear to have been any disruptive fluctuations to the article's content since at least last December. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 07:03, 3 April 2016 (UTC) : Both images used in this article serve relevant illustrative purposes. As both are trusted by the Wikimedia Commons, I think it's safe to say that no fair use trouble will arise from their usage in Wikipedia. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 07:02, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
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 * Advance notice – Just so you know in advance, when creating and expanding this article, I pretty much "used up" many of the reliable source coverage about the topic in the English language that is available online. Some sources essentially report the same content in different manners. Additional websites are available, but do not constitute Wikipedia's definition of reliable sources. North America1000 04:13, 8 March 2016 (UTC)


 * N.b. After a bunch more digging, I found some more usable reliable sources and have expanded the article in bits and pieces, using bits and pieces/mentions from various sources. Sources are essentially "running out" at this time, although a few more are available but paywalled, which I don't have access to. North America1000 05:42, 8 March 2016 (UTC)
 * No problem; if you'd like I'll save this review until after I've completed the other four I signed on for, so you've got more time to really iron it out. ;) Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 08:25, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

Comments

 * In "Overview", where it begins with: "Avocado is a main ingredient in avocado cake, along with other typical cake ingredients,[1][2] and various varieties of avocados may be used", I might recommend splitting the part about various varieties into a separate sentence. It feels like a self-containing portion of the sentence as is. Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 07:48, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
 * ✅. Makes sense. North America1000 09:55, 3 April 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you! Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 10:51, 3 April 2016 (UTC)

The article qualifies as GA, now. I apologize for the long wait, and finish with saying, "Congratulations!" Herein dwells the greatest dictionary ever composed! (talk) 10:53, 3 April 2016 (UTC)