Talk:Avraham Gileadi

Self-promotional, marketing tone
A lot of this sounds like it's ripped from promotional or even self-promotional material, rather than simply being straightforward and factual: "A ground-breaking literary approach," "The best single companion available for Judeo-Christian listeners," "A beautiful modern English rendering of the . . . ," etc

2605:A601:AE17:9C00:FC37:8F7E:352C:46D8 (talk) 17:24, 5 November 2023 (UTC)

Reason for church discipline
This article is incomplete unless it gives some explanation of the Church discipline that he underwent (even if that was later expunged). 128.148.231.12 (talk) 20:36, 17 June 2014 (UTC)