Talk:Awesome Kong/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 03:16, 11 June 2010 (UTC) Overall this is a good article, though I have a couple issues:
 * "On May 8 on Impact!," I'd reword to 'on the may 8 episode' or the like.
 * "They accomplished the task on the April 16 episode of Impact! Kong would turn face by attempting to retaliate." With the way it's written, it seems like a run-on, since i'm not sure if the exclamation point is meant to be the end of the sentence.
 * In the personal life section, all the sentences seem to start with she or her. Add in a couple Stevens or tweak how they start to break the repetition.

Just a couple small things; I'll put the article on hold and pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:16, 11 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. I've addressed all of your concerns. Nikki  ♥  311   02:39, 12 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Looks good, article now passes. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 22:29, 12 June 2010 (UTC)