Talk:Axe and Grind/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 06:40, 18 November 2022 (UTC)

Almost there. Just some pesky commas. 7-day hold to and also courtesy pinging. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 06:54, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ A person in Georgia (talk) 00:18, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

Copy changes

 * Casper strikes Lalo with the blunt side of an axe, but Lalo uses a razor blade to slash Casper's face, then severs Casper's foot with the axe. Lalo gives Casper his belt for a tourniquet, then interrogates him about his work with Werner Ziegler. These two sentences with ", then" sound a bit similar; maybe reword.
 * On D-Day, Jimmy intends to purchase a bottle of Zafiro Añejo tequila,[c] but is surprised to see Casimiro at the liquor store. Drop the second comma (User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences)
 * pulled, and that she should not do the same. Drop the comma — back half is a dependent clause that cannot stand alone.
 * in which her mother first publicly confronts, and then privately praises her for stealing Drop the comma
 * Rivera also made note of the pacing, and said Drop the comma
 * "an analogy of part of her whole life.", "hugely informative to who Kim is now.", Michael Hogan of Vanity Fair said "this episode may not have provided any kind of closure, but it at least brought us closer to understanding the contours of Kim and Jimmy's plan." Period outside comma for sentence fragment.

Sourcing and spot checks
Earwig turned up no issues as the most copied-from sources were attributed quotes for the Reception section.

5 refs were chosen at random from the set of 21: 1, 10, 11, 12, 19.


 * 1: Notes that these were well-worn earrings: the earrings happen to be the ones she wears all of the time. ✅
 * 10: NYT recap of Plan A notes both John and Jessie Ennis appear in the next episode. ✅
 * 11: Backs up the "analogy of her whole life" quote. I assume that I wound up drifting into it as an actor thinking, "Would I have made that choice?" And then they take a walk and there are no more words. Then the story really gets told. is the rest? ✅
 * 12: Mentions the shot-down crane filming. ✅
 * 19: Rivera/Pajiba quote is included. ✅

Other items

 * One free image and the episode poster with NFUR. Both have alt text.