Talk:Ayer (Luis Miguel song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:10, 25 November 2022 (UTC)

I will get on with this now! --K. Peake 08:10, 25 November 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * The recording is not sourced as beginning in June 1992 in the body, nor is it as ending in May 1993
 * Only put (A & B) per Template:Infobox song on the studio parameter
 * ❌ --K. Peake 09:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)


 * The first para of the lead is out of order; place production as the seconds sentence, then release, followed by the Spanish language and ballad sentences
 * ❌ --K. Peake 09:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)


 * "The track is a" → "It is a"
 * ❌ --K. Peake 09:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)


 * "handled the track's production." → "handled the song's production."
 * ""Ayer" was released as" → "It was released as"
 * Move the music video sentence to being in the second para directly after commercial performance
 * ❌ --K. Peake 09:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)


 * "and was nominated" → "and were nominated" or mention which one if you can source it
 * Remove pipe on 1994 Lo Nuestro Awards
 * ❌ should only be linked on one occasion --K. Peake 09:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)


 * Move the critical reception sentence to being the last of the first para instead
 * Pipe 1994 Lo Nuestro Awards to Premio Lo Nuestro 1994 on the song of the year mention
 * "it became his eight number one song" → "it became Miguel's eighth number one song"

Background and composition

 * Remove the comma before Romance
 * Are you sure there should be a comma before "and the United States" in this form of English?
 * If the quote about not trying more boleros is a full sentence, then place the punctuation inside quotes and add a comma after replied
 * "He began working with" → "The singer began working with"
 * "or sing in it"." → "or sing in it."" per MOS:QUOTE
 * "he decided to co-produce the album" → "the singer decided to co-produce it" to be less repetitive
 * ❌ --K. Peake 09:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)


 * The composed sentence feels like too much of a run-on; add a comma after Aries to help with this
 * "David Foster and Jeremy Lubbock's instrumental" → "Foster and Jeremy Lubbock's instrumental"
 * "from Foster's 1986" → "from the former's 1986"
 * ""Ayer" is a" → "It is a"

Promotion and reception

 * Should there really be a comma before "and Gustavo Garzón"?
 * "the videos "takes you through the" → "the videos take one "through the" because this is referring to more than one
 * "each other intensely."" → "each other intensely"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * Either specify which video was nominated at the 6th Annual Lo Nuestro Awards or change to they were nominated
 * "On the review of album," → "In his review of the album,"
 * "called it a" → "called the song a"
 * Remove wikilink on Lo Nuestro Awards
 * ❌ --K. Peake 09:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)


 * "and as well as the inaugural" → "as well as the inaugural"
 * "Miguel's eight number one song" → "Miguel's eighth number one song"
 * Remove pipe on Billboard
 * "It was sixth best-performing" → "It was the sixth best-performing"

Performance credits

 * Make this a sub-heading instead of a sub-section
 * ❌ --K. Peake 09:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)

Technical credits

 * Same as above
 * ❌ --K. Peake 09:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)

Charts

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed, after this quick review! --K. Peake 09:26, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
 * I'll have this done either Sunday or Monday as those are my days off from work. Erick (talk) 13:23, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Requesting an extra week. Erick (talk) 02:32, 1 December 2022 (UTC)

✅ Let me know how it looks now. Erick (talk) 03:48, 4 December 2022 (UTC)
 * I have marked any changes missed as not done. Cheers, --K. Peake 09:19, 4 December 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks! I'm just confused on how the subsections for the personnel are supposed to be done. Erick (talk) 17:09, 4 December 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, I have copy edited this in so you know what to do in the future! --K. Peake 08:02, 5 December 2022 (UTC)