Talk:Aymer de Valence, 2nd Earl of Pembroke/GA1

GA Review
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Hi there, this article quite comfortably passes GA. I have a couple of suggestions for further development below but congratulations of the new GA.
 * It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * There are a few instances of colloquial tone in the article but the writing style is in general quite high.--Jackyd101 (talk) 22:11, 31 August 2008 (UTC)


 * It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * I'd be interested in more information on his military career in Scotland at Loudon Hill and Methuven, but overall all aspects are well covered.--Jackyd101 (talk) 22:11, 31 August 2008 (UTC)


 * It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * a (fair representation): b (all significant views):
 * It is stable.
 * It contains images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
 * a (tagged and captioned): b (lack of images does not in itself exclude GA):  c (non-free images have fair use rationales):
 * Overall:
 * a Pass/Fail:
 * a Pass/Fail:

Thankyou.--Jackyd101 (talk) 22:11, 31 August 2008 (UTC)