Talk:Ayni

Peer Review: There are a few word choice and phrasing things that I would consider changing. For example, I would reword the phrase "for private purposes" and maybe change that to "personally help." I would also continue to expand your article, since there are still a good many questions left to explore. Overall, however, I think that it is a really interesting topic and that you do a good job of introducing it. I would just reread it and clean up some of the wording. I'm excited to see how it turns out! --Rolandcharlotte (talk) 15:15, 8 April 2015 (UTC)