Talk:Ayodele Awojobi/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ankit Maity (talk · contribs) 16:02, 14 July 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) *Copy-editing is required. For example, "Born in Oshodi, Lagos State, Awojobi’s father, Chief Daniel Adekoya Awojobi, was a stationmaster at the Nigerian Railway who hailed from Ikorodu in Lagos State.". Here, the phrases are unconnected. You know, there is no relation of him/his father (I couldn't understand what you meant, please clarify) with his father being a stationmaster.
 * 2) *What's the point in having common wikilinks like vibration and you know that a wikilink should point to the correct location. Such as, its completely nonsense to point "exceptionally and rarely awarded to a scholar under the age of forty" to "Doctor of Science".
 * 3) *The lead should adequately summarize the content of the article.
 * 4) *The section headings are completely weird. You can't get anything out of it. (Please change them)
 * 5) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) *Add references for all cn tags.
 * 2) *Web references need the author, publisher, publishing date and access date.
 * 3) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) *An image caption should only end with a full-stop if it forms a complete sentence.
 * 2) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) *An image caption should only end with a full-stop if it forms a complete sentence.
 * 2) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail: