Talk:Azerbaijan at the 2010 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:29, 11 July 2018 (UTC)

Will look and leave some comments. MWright96 (talk) 08:29, 11 July 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Background

 * " they have never won a medal in the Winter Olympics." - change to medalled in the Winter Olympics.
 * "Fuat Guliyev, an official, was chosen as the flag bearer for both the opening ceremony," - get rid of both since it's been established that Guliyev didn't hold the Azeri flag at the closing ceremony
 * "while Konul Nurullayera, the chef de mission performed" - need a comma between "mission" and "performed"

Alpine skiing

 * "Due to challenging weather conditions, the second run of the race was ran 'on the 25th." - on 25 February
 * "On Friday the 26th," - 26 February,
 * "and improved her time on Thursday" - the day after

That's my lot. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 07:24, 12 July 2018 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the review, . That's everything addressed.  Courcelles (talk) 12:19, 12 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Alright then. Can now promote this article to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 12:38, 12 July 2018 (UTC)