Talk:Azotobacter/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer:  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  10:28, 27 October 2010 (UTC)

Not much to fix, I think  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  10:28, 27 October 2010 (UTC)
 * [[File:Azotobacter cyst.jpg]] doesn't appear to exist
 * It was deleted after nomination (nice fair use image). Sigh. Commented out.
 * the following need links or explanation: microbe, autonomic, intima, pH, cocoon
 * Wikilinked all and explained autonomic and intima. pH is a standard term, which is not easy to explain in a few words. Microbe and cocoon are relatively common words.
 * The outer part is called exine has a hexagonal crystalline structure. &mdash; doesn't quite make sense
 * Rewrote. Thanks for comments! Materialscientist (talk) 11:05, 27 October 2010 (UTC)

I've linked Ph, no other concerns, so I'll send it on its way  Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  12:16, 27 October 2010 (UTC)