Talk:Aztecs/2006-1

"martial arts"
Recently added "martial arts": is this really supposed to be "martial arts" (physical techniques of personal combat) or "military arts" (all techniques used in war: strategy, tactics, etc.)? -- Jmabel | Talk 02:56, 17 December 2005 (UTC)


 * I dont think the military training of the aztec would qualify as a martial art... Specially as almost nothing of it is known...  :( Nanahuatzin 18:51, 9 January 2006 (UTC)


 * Um, that would seem to suggest that Martial Law is when students and bogus twenty year old "grand masters" (twenty years of age, not experience) from so called McDojos take over the rule of a country? No, martial is an adjective which implies some form of military involvement. Sun Tzu's "The Art of War" could just as easily be called "Martial Art" but it isn't in the interest of clarity and avoiding confusion due to the colloquial usage of the term. Though, it would be just as technically correct to be called that. 24.254.163.104 06:04, 13 January 2007 (UTC)Lucy

European populations
Where do the (recently changed) populations given for European cities come from? The article now says: Constantinople with about 200,000 inhabitants, Paris with about 250,000, and Venice with about 160,000.

Previously we had some numbers cited from Top Ten Cities of the Year 1500, which cites Four Thousand Years of Urban Growth: An Historical Census by Tertius Chandler. 1987, St. David's University Press, which I would expect to be reliable. Chandler gives Constantinople as 200,000, but gives Paris as only 185,000, and if he mentions Venice it would presumably be behind the tenth in his list, Nanjing, China with 147,000.

While Chandler had some idiosyncratic views on pre-600-BCE Ancient Middle East and Greece, I'd expect him to be rock solid on anything since that date. I'd consider Chandler to have been a pretty good citation; can anyone explain why it was removed and where the new numbers come from? -- Jmabel | Talk 02:29, 9 January 2006 (UTC)

Tepanec Expansion Age omitted
I was wondering why there is absolutely no mention of the "Tepanec Expansion" under the rule of Tezozomoc, seeing how it was one of the most major events in later Mesoamerican history. Historically speaking, it created the first true nation-state since Teotihuacan 600 years before, it propelled the Mexica and Acolhua from subservant status to states in there own rights. It also led to the independence of of the state of Texcoco by the army led by Netzahualcoyotl, who defeated the forces of Maxtla in a single battle. Its an interesting period in our history, and very much so one of my favorite due to the amount of involvement by many tribes. It is also the bases for the "Triple Alliance", which is why I thought it was important.

I was wondering if I could put the basic information on the period down and expand on it (as well as the Tepanec people, Tezozomoc, and Netzahualcoyotl, a very interesting figure who comes close to being the Texcoco version of Huitzilopochtli).


 * Please do!--Curtis Clark 05:01, 9 January 2006 (UTC)


 * I have created an article title Tepanec. It's just a stub.  I will leave it for somebody else to fill it out. Richard 09:27, 1 April 2006 (UTC)


 * I agree that a Tepanec article is definitely needed. However, I believe that we have the right amount of mention of Tezozomoc and Nezahualcoyotl etc etc in this article already.  Madman 03:42, 15 June 2006 (UTC)

suspected vandalism:
suspected vandalism: "flowery wars". The term is supposed to be "flower wars".


 * Altough in english is more common used "flower wars", the correct term should be flowery wars, it,s not a war of flowers, but flowery is the adjetive applied to the war.  Nanahuatzin 16:47, 16 January 2006 (UTC)


 * I'm at a loss here. The correct translation is "flowery wars", but I've seen it more often has "flower wars" in English. -- Run e Welsh | &tau;&alpha;&lambda;&kappa; 23:16, 16 January 2006 (UTC)


 * In nahuatl Flower and feathers are used as sinonimous of "precious", in spanish "Xochiyoauh" is translated as "guerra florida", so i think the correct in english should be "flowery war". Also, the blood flowing from a wound due to war, was called "flower of war". Nanahuatzin 02:28, 17 January 2006 (UTC)


 * Although I am not widely read on the subject, prior to this, I had only read "flowery wars". On the other hand, Google gives 285 hits for "flowery wars" and 701 hits for "flower wars".--Curtis Clark 23:22, 16 January 2006 (UTC)


 * While flowery is a more literal translation of the Spanish florida, I believe "flower wars" is the more common term. FWIW, does anyone know what either the OED or Britannica use? -- Jmabel | Talk 05:22, 19 January 2006 (UTC)


 * Just question.. What image gives to you "flower war"?. To me, it sounds like a war made with flowers, but i am not shure... . the originalt nahuatl, means a war that produces flowers ( wounds).  If Flower war is the more comon term, i think it,s all right. But in the article i need to explain  the diference..Nanahuatzin 03:47, 20 January 2006 (UTC)


 * Since I've known the term for decades, I couldn't say what was my original impression of the term. I suspect that neither "flower wars" nor "flowery wars" conjures much of an image on its own, other than both suggesting something less than a full-blown war. Anyway, there is a fair chance that I knew guerras floridas in Spanish before I knew "flower wars" in English. Keep in mind that the use of nouns as adjectives is relatively common on English, unlike Spanish: "club member", "book learning", and "television personality", to give just a few very diverse examples.


 * I don't know where you got "Floere war", I've never seen that in any language, and Google gives no hits.
 * Now corrected. Jmabel | Talk


 * You say that the article needs to explain the difference; the difference between what? -- Jmabel | Talk 23:15, 22 January 2006 (UTC)


 * By what you say, seems there is not much difference in english in both terms. In the article of "Flower wars" i wrote that is more correct "flowery war"... But i am not shure now... (oh.. Floere war, was just one of my typos.. :) ) Nanahuatzin 04:40, 23 January 2006 (UTC)


 * I think it's far less important what it's called than that readers understand what the "flowers" mean in this case. From flower war:


 * "For the Aztec warriors, providing blood for the gods was a sacred duty and it was a noble occupation. In the Aztec world, flowers and feathers were the most precious things, so the word 'flower' means 'precious' and it was used as a descriptor for the activity of sacred war. The blood flowing from a wound was described as a flower of war."


 * --Curtis Clark 05:10, 23 January 2006 (UTC)


 * I had guessed that flower war was the more accepted term and still believe it more closely follows the Nahuatl original although flowery wars more closely resembles the Spanish. However, this is not the case in a leading book on the subject. In Inga Clendinnen's Aztecs: An Interpretation, Cambridge University Press, Canto Edition 1995, there are only references to flowery war or flowery wars (according to a Search Inside on Amazon.com) and not a single one to flower war: pp. 34, 97, 122 along with three refernces in the Back Matter. Interlingua 23:29, 30 May 2006 (UTC)


 * xochiyaoyotl does not means a war of flowers, but to a war blosoming with flowers, that is blosoming with the flowers of war (yahoxochitl), thats how they call the wounds flowing with blood.... Nanahuatzin 05:11, 1 June 2006 (UTC)

Pulque
just to bring something up:

"Although one could drink pulque, a fermented beverage with an alcoholic content equivalent to beer, getting drunk before the age of 60 was forbidden. While the first time was punished, reincidents could get the penalty of death."

is this for real? in a civilization without modern medicine, how many people would even make it to that age? i've read elsewhere that the life expectancy in classical civilizations was often less than 40, depending on the civ. i cant think what wikipedia article said that, but it didnt have citations either. i suppose the elite of society might live to 60 being pampered, and thus allowed to drink, but why not just make the rule that only the elite can drink? (unsigned comment by 204.95.67.67)


 * It's the average life expectancy at birth that is most often cited. Considering that infant mortality was (and in many places still is) so high, some people have to live to 60 and beyond to make the average expectancy 40.--Curtis Clark 17:13, 12 March 2006 (UTC)


 * I think i will have to put more citations... In this case.  This is from Soustelle, J. (1961). The Daily life of the Aztecs. London, WI: He  took this part from the mendocino codex, and is also mentioned in the florentine codex. Maybe i need to expand this. The penalties for getting drung were not equal to all. Comon people who get drunk were only admonished at first and could get a physical punishment and his head was saved, as a public display. It was pillis  (nobles) who could get a death peanlty if they get drunk before get to 60. From the aztec point of view, a greter status impied a greater responsability.  The mean life of aztecs was 38 years, so those who get to old age, were higly respected. Old men and woomen were pampered,  no matter their origin, They were the holders of the Huehuetlatoli.. and enyoy yo give long lecture on every festivy.  After conquest, drinking becamea very comon problem... Nanahuatzin 07:24, 13 March 2006 (UTC)

Propose consolidating Downfall section with Spanish Conquest of Mexico article
Hi, I got here as an extension of a massive restructuring of the Hernan Cortes article.

As part of the restructuring, I moved the discussion of Cortes' campaign against the Aztecs to a new article entitled Spanish Conquest of Mexico. There is also a separate article entitled the Siege of Tenochtitlan. This all started because some of the contributors to the Hernan Cortes article was getting too long.

The Aztec article is even longer than the Cortes article was before I started moving stuff to other articles.

I am now proposing to pull out the text in the Downfall section of the Aztec article and merge it into the Spanish Conquest of Mexico, leaving behind a brief summary as a stub. I would use the "main article" template to reference the Spanish Conquest of Mexico article.

Richardshusr 21:00, 27 March 2006 (UTC)

Article violates NPOV?
Sure seems to me that a great deal of this article VIOLATES Wikipedia's Neutral Point of View Policy. There are facts here and there are opinions here which should be moved elsewhere.

The above comment was made by 68.77.6.169. What 68.77.6.169 says may be true but I will point out that it is very difficult to maintain a NPOV on some topics, especially when it is easy to make a judgment based upon deep-rooted prejudices and assumptions.

I have scanned the article quickly and I don't see any blatant NPOV issues although I'm sure I could pick some out if I really tried. Is the problem that the article favors Aztecs over other Mesoamerican cultures or vice versa? Or is it that it favors Aztecs over the Spaniards or vice versa?

It would help if 68.77.6.169 and others would specifically identify the opinions that they think which should be moved elsewhere. I am open to this idea but I need help identifying the specific points which are considered to be opinions. Once we've done that, we can think about where those opinions should go.

Personally, I don't think the NPOV issues are important enough to warrant a separate article but I'm willing to be convinced. Please get down to brass tacks and specify what the issues are so we can discuss them.

Richard 18:12, 2 April 2006 (UTC)

NPOV Candidates
I am starting a section with items which I think may be NPOV candidates. Please express your opinion about these items especially regarding a possible decision to move them to a separate article. Also please add any items that you wish to be considered for removal.

Note: Unless a NPOV issue generates enough controversy to warrant a 2-3 paragraph article of its own, I think it would be preferable to identify the issue and characterize the controversy in this article rather than create links to articles that have only one or two sentences.


 * I know that some part of the article may seem to violate NPOV, but thats because most of the history of mesoamerican cultures has been taken from european sources. It was not until 1940 that important writen material from native writers have been translated and given pubicity. Because of this, I favored this first hand sources (by native sources), and also from archeological findings. Clearly some others points of view are needed, for example i am planing to expand the history as was written by the Tlaxcalteca. Of course this section could be perceived as "anti" aztec... but instead i thing it would provide insight in the complex mesoamerican politics.


 * Nanahuatzin 19:24, 2 April 2006 (UTC)


 * I think it is very difficult to achieve NPOV. Sometimes, there isn't a single objective truth available to us.  We must then provide as many POVs as we think are legitimate.  Of course, the Tlaxcalteca are going to see things differently from the Aztecs and quite differently from the Spaniards.


 * We should try to provide all the POVs that we know about and maybe indicate where some POVs that we think are possibly mistaken. For example, it is a fact that William H. Prescott thought that there was a "right to conquest" and that therefore Cortes did nothing wrong.   That's his POV.  We could present it as his POV.  We would be severely criticized if we presented it as a fact.


 * That is an easy example. This article isn't open to that kind of blatant POV criticism but, if we read more carefully, we might find more subtle examples of POV problems.


 * Richard 20:13, 2 April 2006 (UTC)

Improvement of welfare of common people under Aztec rule
"Although cities under Aztec rule seem to have paid heavy tributes, excavations in the Aztec-ruled provinces show a steady increase in the welfare of common people after they were conquered."

Issue: Could indicate a pro-Aztec POV. Recommendation: Reword to indicate that "some scholars believe..." and provide reference to the scholarly works.
 * Not some scholars.. Archeological findingsso far show that, it is not a belief... I will provide the cite of the work: Nanahuatzin 19:24, 2 April 2006 (UTC)

Yes, please cite the work(s). "Archeological findings" don't show anything. Archeological digs find artifacts. Archeologists, anthropologists and other scientists interpret those artifacts as having certain significance. Thus, these scholars put forth theories based on their POV. If you want the article to have a NPOV, you have to say "Scholar X put forth the theory that there was a steady increase in the welfare of the common people."

I know this can be carried to an extreme. I'm just responding to the criticism that this article violates NPOV and trying to find the places where it might so we can counter the charge. Richard 20:06, 2 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Reading this i found something interesting, but maybe it need to be explained in some form.... What the original article stated, is that "archeological finds indicate, an increase of luxury items in home (of all social strata)in the conquered populations (no just cities) some time after they were conquered" (Michael E. Smith et al 2004).


 * My first question is why this statement can be see as NPOV... Is that because aztecs are perceived as a blood thirsthy culture?.

Nanahuatin


 * The reason the above text about improvements in welfare of the common people could be POV is that there's a tradeoff: welfare of common people vs. loss of freedom especially for the victims of human sacrifice.


 * After the Communist takeover of China in 1949, the common welfare of the people improved dramatically. The tradeoff was loss of economic and political freedom.  To mention one side without mentioning the other is POV.


 * Richard 21:14, 2 April 2006 (UTC)


 * After towns were conquered, they inhabitants were no longer were candidates to human sacrifice (unless it was voluntary). The main victims for human sacrice had to be captive warriors of nahuatl language (see the section on human sacrifice). That is why Tlaxcala was spared of being conquered, and that is why they became ally to the spanish.

Nanahuatzin 07:52, 3 April 2006 (UTC)


 * This point is not explained well in the text of the article. I have inserted the above text into the "Human Sacrifice" section.  Please read it and make sure that I have captured your meaning correctly.

Also, I'm confused about what you're saying about victims of human sacrifice needing to be speakers of the nahuatl language. The Mexica spoke nahuatl, the Tlacalatecos also spoke nahuatl. What other cultures did? Which cultures didn't?


 * Richard 05:59, 4 April 2006 (UTC)
 * For example, "purepechas" and "totonacas", since they did not speak nahuatl, their warriors were not apropiate for sacrifice... (mayas were to far away...), and the Chichimecas were considered too savage. The victims for sacrifice were considered "mesengers", so they had to speak nahuatl. Aztec conquered almost all the Nahuatl speaking territories. So They decided to keep Tlaxcala free.. and "let the god (Huitzilopchtli) decided if he need fresh victims as if they were on a market" (words atributed to Tlacaelel)... It,s not surprising they get so much hate form Tlaxcala. Non nahuatl victims were sometimes used for sacrifice, since some other gods were not so demmanding.. but since they were lesser gods, those sacrifice were not so common.. Nanahuatzin 23:23, 4 April 2006 (UTC)

Of course, conquered towns were subject to tribute, but most schollars agree that after an initial period (when the infrastucture of roads were build), tributes were not specially taxing. The aztec suport the local goverments, and some of the began to considere aztec themselves. Of course, this do not means they were subject to a central goverment, like the Roman empire, but the proces was analogous. Probalby the only records that speak against the aztec, are from the Tlaxcalteca, who called the aztec, Proud and untrustworthy, that is a section i want to add, but I still need to do more research.Nanahuatzin 07:52, 3 April 2006 (UTC)

Should a discusion of how the aztec are perceived included?.. I know that there are two extreme perceptions. One is of a bloodthisrty culture.. or other of an "ancient and wise culture, destroyed by barbaric europeans" (there is a "neo pagan" movement that states that... ) Both extremes are equally wrong.

Nanahuatzin


 * My POV is that both statements are true. The Aztecs were both a blood-thirsty culture AND an ancient and wise culture destroyed by barbaric Europeans.
 * Richard 21:14, 2 April 2006 (UTC)
 * LOL... The aztec were not ancient, there were the new kids on the block, and learned all they could from other cultures. And probalby they were not more blood-thirsty or cruel than most european cultures of that time. Nanahuatzin 07:52, 3 April 2006 (UTC)

But do you think i need to expand the impact of the aztec on other cultures? Nanahuatzin


 * Yes, I think that is important. Below I proposed a section on "Assessment of Aztec civilization".  That section could have a section entitled "Impact of Aztec empire on other cultures".  I won't be sure exactly what the structure should be until I've seen the text.  Just get started and we can refine it as we go.
 * Richard 21:14, 2 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Ok.. Nanahuatzin 07:52, 3 April 2006 (UTC)

Sentiment of other Mesoamerican cultures about the fall of the Aztec empire
"The Tlaxcaltecas expected to get their part; the Purepechas and Mixtecs were probably happy at the defeat of their longtime enemy, and other cultures were equally pleased."

Issue: Could indicate an anti-Aztec POV. Recommendation:


 * Why anti?? I can provide cites to confirm this... I don,t see two sides (pro or anti) on this issue..

Nanahuatin


 * Yes, exactly. That's what I meant when I said "deep-rooted assumptions".  We assume that the other tribes were happy and pleased to see the Aztec empire fall.  They may have focused on the heavy tributes demanded by the Aztec empire and not realized the "increase in common welfare" that they were enjoying as the result of being part of the empire.  They also were unable to foresee the effect that the Spanish empire would have in wiping out their civilization.


 * As the text reads now, the reader gets the impression that the fall of the Aztec empire caused everybody to break out singing "Ding, dong, the wicked witch is dead." This may be true and it would be useful to have the cites to confirm it.  A more even-handed discussion would mention the points that I raise although it would have to be carefully worded to avoid winding up pro-Spanish or pro-Aztec.  NPOV is a very difficult thing to achieve.

Richard 20:06, 2 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Opsss. then i need to rewrite this section. What i as trying to say, is the fall of the aztec empire is usually implied as the fall of all mesoamerica as if the aztec were the only mesoamerican culture.... But in fact at first it did not had a significant impact on the other mesoamerican cultures. The Tlaxcalteca at first were important allies of the spanish, eventually, the spaniard would break the alliance, but that was decades aways.  The fall of mesoamerican cultures was a long process, the fall of the aztec empires was just the opening, not the only chapter. It was a combination of circunstances, the most significant was the deadly toll of the epidemics, more than the military power or the politic of spain, a fact that has been slowly by the schollars.
 * Opsss. then i need to rewrite this section. What i as trying to say, is the fall of the aztec empire is usually implied as the fall of all mesoamerica as if the aztec were the only mesoamerican culture.... But in fact at first it did not had a significant impact on the other mesoamerican cultures. The Tlaxcalteca at first were important allies of the spanish, eventually, the spaniard would break the alliance, but that was decades aways.  The fall of mesoamerican cultures was a long process, the fall of the aztec empires was just the opening, not the only chapter. It was a combination of circunstances, the most significant was the deadly toll of the epidemics, more than the military power or the politic of spain, a fact that has been slowly by the schollars.

Nanahuatzin 20:28, 2 April 2006 (UTC)


 * I agree that you should insert the above text. It's very good.  Just insert what you want and us native English speakers will clean it up.  (No insult meant here.  Your English is far better than my Spanish.)
 * Richard 21:14, 2 April 2006 (UTC)


 * I am confused about this sentence "The Tlaxcaltecas expected to get their part". Did you mean that the Tlaxcaltecas expected the Spaniards to give them part of the booty from the Aztec empire?  If so, were the Tlaxcaltecas satisfied with their share?


 * Richard 08:21, 3 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Exactly, after the episode of "the noche triste", when Cortez had to run out of Tenochtitlan, the Tlaxcalteca decide to suport tCortez. Tha Aztec send and emisary to convince them of the contrary, but they thought they should protect their guests. Eventually they dediced to be the allies of the spaniards, with come conditions. They would not be subject to any form of tribute, they should receive the city of Cholula i return, and they would had the right to Build a fortress in Tenochtitlan, so they could have control of the city. Initially Cortez tried to suported them, but the spanish authorities were not of the same opinion. Nanahuatzin 08:43, 3 April 2006 (UTC)


 * This is good info but not really relevant to the Aztec article so I put it in the Spanish conquest of Mexico in the "Defeat of the Tlaxcaltecans" section. Take a look if you wish.


 * Richard 00:23, 5 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Maybe it,s my fault that this sounds like a pro or anti aztec issue. I can provide citation of the impresion of non aztec people, but i did not see relevat for this.....  Nanahuatzin 20:28, 2 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Maybe we need a separate section entitled "Assessment of the Aztec civilization" where we put both pro and anti POV.
 * Richard 21:14, 2 April 2006 (UTC)

Assessment of Sources
Issue: The "Sources" section passes judgment on the credibility and motivations of various sources. This could be considered POV.

Recommendation: It would be useful to have any judgments about sources backed up by supporting evidence. If you say "Source A exaggerates his numbers" or "Source B was too pro-Spanish", this is POV. On the other hand, if you say "In work X, scholar Y says that source A exaggerates his numbers", this is less POV. You are now stating a fact about what scholar Y said in work X, not passing judgment on source A yourself.


 * thanks i will do that, but it will take some time, please be patient. I think i will need o expand the reference section significativally :)   Nanahuatzin 19:30, 2 April 2006 (UTC)


 * absolutely, patience is always a good thing in a volunteer effort like this. Your contributions have been invaluable.


 * I do think that it is not so much the references that need to be expanded but the linkages between the text and the references. Instead of saying "X is true", say "Scholar A says X is true".  Or at least say, "it is commonly held belief in scholarly circles that X is true".  Once again, doing this too much can make an article unreadable.  It's what makes many scholarly articles unreadable.  We have to strike a balance between readability and providing supporting evidence.


 * Hang in there, I'm trying to respond to the vague comment made by 68.77.6.169 about NPOV. It's difficult to do this without specific criticisms from him/her.  I've tried to identify the NPOV issues that I see.  I might be off-base in my assessment of what the NPOV issues are.  Further discussion from others would help.


 * Richard 20:06, 2 April 2006 (UTC)


 * My main problem in this section is how to indicate i am not trying to denounce the sources but to explain the problems that each source have. I found this necesary because not only the indian version and the spanish version of the same incidents differ so much, but because until recently only the european version are widely kwnon.

This of course can be NOPV by itself, so i will need much more help and criticism in this section. An example of this is the case for antropophagia. While there hundred of references. There are only five or six primary sources... and a few arheological findings, but nothing conclusive.

Also i want to make a distintion between primary and secundary sources. After all, what i confess is really NPOV of my part is that i prefer indian sources like Father Sahagun anonimous writters, or even Cortez, and ignore Prescot, since the more extreme opinions over the aztec come from secondary sources. The dividing line is really tenous.... Nanahuatzin 21:22, 2 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Actually, the question should be whether we are after "truth" or documenting how different people and cultures have perceived the truth to be. Your approach looks for "truth".  But what has been perceived as truth has changed over time.  I'm sure that Prescott was perceived to have been pretty close to the truth by Europeans in the 19th century.  Reading him now, his bias is patently obvious.  It's not that the "truth" has changed.  It is our perception of the truth.  This is natural.  That doesn't mean we should dismiss Prescott.  It means we should describe what he said and explain why parts of what he said are not how we see things today.


 * Richard 08:31, 3 April 2006 (UTC)


 * I will gladly help if you have the time and interest to do this. I think most of the article is in good shape and perhaps this is the area that would benefit most from additional work.


 * OTOH, the POV issues in this article are not really that bad and you should spend your time where your interest takes you. If there are other parts of the article or other articles that are more interesting to you, don't feel like the POV criticism was that important.  Personally, I think it was more somebody that had an "ax to grind".  Worse yet, he/she didn't even tell us what ax he/she was grinding!


 * Richard 21:36, 2 April 2006 (UTC)

Questions about religion and human sacrifice
I just expanded the paragraph about Ahuitzotl and the rate of human sacrifice. I assume this text was originally written by Nanahuatin. Does my expansion capture what you were trying to say?

Also, I moved the sentence "In Mesoamerican cultures, faith was an important part of their life and death." to the beginning of the Religion section. In that position, it serves as an introductory summary for the whole section. Put where it was, it seemed to be a bit of an orphan.

Richard 17:38, 3 April 2006 (UTC)


 * thanks, it´s much better Nanahuatzin 22:57, 4 April 2006 (UTC)

Question about the Ramirez Codex
Nanahuatzin,

There is no Wiki article on the Ramirez Codex which is mentioned in this article. Is it worth writing a quick one? Can you do it?

Is this the [[José Fernando Ramírez]|Ramirez] who wrote the Codex? It's not mentioned explicitly in the article.

Richard 05:23, 4 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Yes, it deserves an article, i have been postponing it, there still so much to do.. but i will give priority, sincees it,s one of then main sources. It was discover by Fernando Ramírez, while it is credited to Father Tovar, he copied from ana nahuatl source ( the mauscript has two columns, one is empty, and probably he expected to put the original nahuatl there).  Nanahuatzin 22:23, 4 April 2006 (UTC)


 * I went ahead and wrote a short article on the Ramirez Codex, part of my current obsession with Mesoamerican codices. Hope you like it - and check out the Aztec codices article itself.  I still need to write up something on the Borgia Codex.  Madman 18:55, 18 May 2006 (UTC)  (P.S.  It turns out that that name has been given to two unrelated codices - the one mentioned above I refer to as the Ramirez Codex (Tovar manuscript) ).

Another question about "other cultures"
In the articles about the Aztec empire, we speak often of "cultures" other than the Aztecs. Does this refer to cities like Cholula?

I have to say that I find this use of the word "culture" a little unusual.

I understand what is meant by "European civilization" and "Chinese civilization". I also understand what is meant by "French culture" and "German culture".

What is the meaning of these words when applied to Mesoamerica? I would have expected to see the word "tribe" and yet this word never shows up anywhere in the Mesoamerican articles.

In the Mesoamerica article, we find the following statement "Mesoamerican metacivilizations included the Olmec, Zapotec, Teotihuacan, Maya, Mixtec, Huastec (also located on Aridoamerica), Pipil, Totonac, Toltec, Tarascan, and the Aztec."

OK, fine. So what are the Tlaxcalatecos? Are they Mexica or non-Mexica Aztecs? What are the Cholulatecos? Are they a non-Aztec culture that was conquered by and paid tribute to the Aztecs?

I ask not just for my own personal learning but also because I don't think these distinctions will be clear to other readers either and I think we should make these distinctions clear in the text.

Richard 06:13, 4 April 2006 (UTC)


 * The aztec were considered a tribe when they were nomadic, but after they stablished in Tenochtitlan, they created a distintive culture. Mesomerica was formed by city states. Some of them can by grouped into a culture, of example, the Maya, like the greek, they had a comon culture and language, but they never were unified. We could also speak of the nahua culture, that could inlcude Tlaxcala, Tenochtitlan, Atzcapotzalco, Texcoco, Culhuacan etc.  But the aztec become so predominat that most of those cities were to be considered part of the Aztec empire and culturally they became the same. Tlaxala was part of the nahua culture, it was a confederacy of several city states, but they keep their own identity, enough to be considered diferent of the aztec culture.. Other mesoamerican cultures were Mixteco/zapoteca, TAjin, Purepechas, Olmeca, Xochicalco, Toltec, Cholula, Cuicuilco etc. Historians clasify those as individual cultures each own with their own language, or at lest their own variant of language. Teotihuacan was a multiethnic, and multicultural city, but it´s achivements were so unique that usually is considered a distinct culture. In the context of the history of mesoamerica, tribe is reserved for nomadic people, like lacandones, Huaves, tarahumaras etc.Nanahuatzin 22:42, 4 April 2006 (UTC)


 * OK, let me see if I understand this. The Tlaxcalatecos were Nahua and so were eligible to provide victims for human sacrifice even though they were not Aztec.  For this reason, they were not conquered.


 * The Cholula were not Nahua and therefore were conquered but were not eligible to provide victims for human sacrifice.


 * But, if this is true, then the only cultures who would be find the Aztec practice of human sacrifice a problem would be those who were Nahua like Tlaxcala and Texcoco. Those who were not Nahua would not find human sacrifice to be a problem because they were not eligible to be victims of human sacrifice anyway.


 * Did I get that right?


 * Richard 00:04, 5 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Almost... The start of the aztec empire was the "triple alliance" formed by Tenochtitlan, Texcoco and Tlacopan (tacuba). The Aztec eventually took over Texcoco, and Tlacopan so they became aztec cities. As a founder member, Texcoco had a lot of priviledges and provide the aztec with their most cultivated citizens. AS the Aztec absorved all nahua cities, that leaved only Tlaxcala (constitued by Tepetícpan, Ocotelolco, Tizatlán y Quiahuiztlan) and Huexotzingo as a source for captives for sacrifice. Cholula originaly was under Huexotzingo, but the aztec absorbed almost all the territory of Huexotzingo, leaving only Talxcala. As you see, there is still so much info to put in the article. And important part, is that the "flowery wars" originally was a treaty decided between the cities of Tezcoco, Tenochtitlan, Tlaxcala and Huexotzingo that was because  in  1450, there was a terrible hunger in mesoamerica, and it was believed that sacred wars were needed to end the hunger. By 1455 there was again prosperity in the region, so the sacred wars (xochiyáoyotl) were continued. By the way.. aztec prisioners were also sacrified in Tlaxcala and Huexotzingo...  Nanahuatzin 05:59, 5 April 2006 (UTC)

Can you take a look at this?
Here's some text from Spanish conquest of Mexico

"The Totonacs had been defeated by the Texcocans and by Huehue Moteuczoma, and they had been paying tribute since Ahuitzotl."

Who is "Huehue Moteuczoma"? I assume the writer is trying to say "Huey Tlatoani Moteuczoma I". Is that how you would read it?

Thanks.

Richard 08:52, 4 April 2006 (UTC)


 * The text it´s a bit pedantic... but correct. Huehue means Old, And it´s how the aztec refer to Moctezuma I, While Moctezuma II, was called Moctezuma Xocoyotzin, or "Moctezuma the young". The use of numerals is and european tradition unknown to aztecs :)  ....  Nanahuatzin 22:56, 4 April 2006 (UTC)

Is this a "good" article? Do we want it to be?
I think the Aztec article is rapidly reaching the criteria required to be considered a "good" article. One of the criteria for being considered a "good" article is stability. The content shouldn't be constantly being updated and it shouldn't be subject to edit wars. We're OK on the second point but I want to get your agreement about the first one. Are you more or less happy with the content so that we can stop adding content long enough to qualify as a "good" article? If so, I will nominate it to be that. We probably still need some copy editing but I think the English is adequate throughout most of the article.

The key point here is that we would need to stop adding content and focus on copy editing for a while. If that's OK with you, I would suggest that we go for "good article" status. Even if we don't get GA status, we will get someone to give us pointers on what we need to do to get it.

Read WP:WIAGA for details. Then express your opinion here.

Richard 01:15, 6 April 2006 (UTC)


 * I found there are still so many areas and holes to be expanded or at least considered and referred to other articles, as it has been done on the section of Human sacrifice, that was cut to another article. I want to coment on Aztec writing, aztec medicine, aztec calendary, and maybe more important, the aztec concept of man (wich i have begining to study). The section on aztec religion barely touches the subject, of course it should be an article by it´s own, but it would take more time. Maybe in a year it will be ready for "Good article"   if you can cope with my english....  :)  Nanahuatzin 01:46, 6 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Agree that there is ample scope for more expansion in quite a few areas, however the criteria for GA status appear to be not so stringent- each area does not need to be explored to the nth degree, as long as they are addressed in some reasonable fashion. But a GA nomination at this point may be premature (although no harm is done putting it through the process if it does not succeed). Perhaps the article ought to go to Peer Review first- it can be a little hit-and-miss, but often a few useful suggestions will come out of the process.--cjllw |  TALK  04:54, 6 April 2006 (UTC)

Related pages need cleanup and restructuring
I just found that there is info repeated in the topics of "Spanish conquest of Mexico" and "Siege of Tenochtitlan" and probably in other sections. Also some of this info if from older version of this page. Can you help me to put some order?. Specially the section of "Spanish conquest of Mexico" which seems to have been cut and pasted from other articles, like the Article on "Mexico". thanks   Nanahuatzin 09:15, 9 April 2006 (UTC)

Hi Nanahuatzin,

It is true that the Spanish conquest of Mexico article was pulled out of other articles like the Mexico article and the History of Mexico article. I did that and much more as I will explain below.

This is a good time to explain how I got involved in editing these articles. I started by helping my 9 year old son with a homework assignment on Hernan Cortes. After doing some Google searches, I discovered that the Wikipedia article on Hernan Cortes needed some serious cleanup (in fact, the article had a cleanup tag which has since been removed as a result of my editing work).

Well, as part of the cleanup effort, I discovered that the Hernan Cortes article had a link to La Noche Triste which duplicated information from the Siege of Tenochtitlan article. The Siege of Tenochtitlan article had information which duplicated information in the History of Mexico article.

So, if I remember correctly, I pulled out most of the information about Cortes, Moctezuma II and Tenochtitlan out of History of Mexico and Hernan Cortes and put it into the Spanish conquest of Mexico article. I pulled most of the info about the final battle for Tenochtitlan and put it into the Siege of Tenochtitlan article.

My systematic structure left the Hernan Cortes article with almost no text about the conquest of Mexico since that information had been moved to the Spanish conquest of Mexico article. Similarly, the Spanish conquest of Mexico article has almost no information about the final conquest of Tenochtitlan as that information has been moved to the Siege of Tenochtitlan.

Of course, you cannot talk about Cortes and the conquest of Mexico without talking about the Aztecs and Moctezuma II. And now you know how I wound up editing the Aztec article. All because of a 4th grade homework assignment that was turned in three weeks ago.

Initially, I had only intended to edit the portion of the Aztec article that was related to the fall of the Aztec empire. If you look higher in this Talk page, you will see a place (section 25) where I proposed moving the "Downfall" section out of this article and merging it with the Spanish conquest of Mexico article. That is approximately where I got started editing this article in earnest.

However, I found that the Aztec article needed a lot of help in a number of sections so I decided to pitch in.

I have tried mightily to put some order to the structure of information in the above-mentioned articles and other related articles. I think I've made some significant improvements although more work is needed.

Please identify the areas that you think need more work and we can discuss them prior to fixing them.

Richard 07:47, 13 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Hi. That explains a lot. I have hardly touch the Hernan Cortez Article, and the Aztec article has been sectiones, because it was too big.  Firt i will try to review what articles are related to aztecs, and try so asses whast should go in heaach one. Of course there should be some repetition, but now i foudn to mmany. I am on Hollydays

"semana Santa" but next week i will start on this thanks for your help Nanahuatzin 02:30, 15 April 2006 (UTC)

Apologies
By the way.. it seems my "typing" is worse than ussual in the last months... I think i need a vacation... thanks for your patience.. Nanahuatzin 10:06, 9 April 2006 (UTC)

Moved much of the "Religion" section to Aztec religion article
As if the problems mentioned by Nanahuatzin above weren't enough, I have now added to the issues to be regularized by moving some of the text from this article to the Aztec religion article.

Here's my rationale:

Before I resurrected it, the Aztec religion link used to redirect to the Aztec mythology article. However, this suggests that the most important thing to discuss about Aztec religion is a discussion of their pantheon of gods which is what the Aztec mythology article provides.

When I looked at the history of Aztec religion, I found that it used to consist of a long piece of unwikified text that was in dire need of cleanup and reorganization. So I did it. I merged the original Aztec religion text with the text from the "Religion" section of the Aztec article and put it in Aztec religion after breaking the redirect.

Now, I know there is also an article entitled Human sacrifice in Aztec culture. The next step in this cleanup process is to move the "Human sacrifice" section out of the Aztec religion article and merge it with the text in the Human sacrifice in Aztec culture article.

Though he toil from sun to sun, A Wikipedia editor's work is never done.

Richard 08:25, 13 April 2006 (UTC)

I think the Human sacrifice section should be a section aparte. While it was an important part of the religion, it was more thant that, It was a social tool and a a political tool. Iw was a speciall phenomna on it,s own. On the other hand i wan to rename the article on Azte religion, to "prehispanic religion", and explian that the aztec religion was just a busubset of the prehisnpanic religion. That is because Tlaloc, Tezcatlipoca, Quetzalcoatl, were not aztec gods. EManwhile Huitzilopoctli, and Coatlique were. Nanahuatzin 02:43, 15 April 2006 (UTC)

warnings on aztec religion
In the last decades, and probably due to the New age movement, a lot of groups are trying to revive the azte religion. In the proces they are mixing concepts from european and induh esoteric traditions, thus reinventing the prehispanic religions (you will see them every solstice in the pyramides, dressed in white, while "recharging" their "energy"). While i am trying to revert the aditions of this people, not always i succed. The simptons are, complety deny of the practice of Humman sacrifice and Antropopagy. While this practices do not seems to have the huge numbers of popular accounts, they were real, and can not by denied. Also ther took to extrems some claims by historians. Nanahuatzin 02:43, 15 April 2006 (UTC)

Moved a lot of text about "human sacrifice" into Human sacrifice in Aztec culture
Please look at the Human sacrifice in Aztec culture article.

I have merged text from both the Aztec article and the old (pre-redirect) Aztec religion article into the Human sacrifice in Aztec culture article.

I tried to reorganize the merged text and eliminate redundant text. However, the whole Human sacrifice in Aztec culture article needs extra eyes to read it over and check for accuracy, consistency and general copyediting.

Thanx.

Richard 09:32, 13 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Where is that info from ????? most of this is plainly wrong. Aztc had no shamans, nor did had a daily sacrifice, not the believe in souls nor the popol vu is the aztec bible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I ma out of town and I had little time to correct it... Can you elase restore the previous version? at least until next week when i can review te text?.. PLEASE Nanahuatzin 02:37, 15 April 2006 (UTC)


 * I was going to make the revert that you requested but it appears you have already fixed the problems you were complaining about. The text you deleted was stuff that I found in the old Aztec religion article.  I had no way of knowing whether it was correct or not.  I was a little suspicious because I had never heard of the "Popol Vuh" before.  However, since I am not an expert in this area, I fi~gured I'd let someone who was an expert decide.  Is there such a thing as a "Popol Vuh"?  If so, what is it?
 * Richard 04:49, 15 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Yes i started to clean it, became a bit overanxious, there are still several contradiction in the article. I Think i will to take time to check all mesoamerican related articles... The popol vuh is a text form the Quiche (better known as Maya)... Nanahuatzin 02:17, 16 April 2006 (UTC)


 * There are too many changes, and too fast... The section onf aztec religion, know implies that human sacrifice was a myth... It was not a myth. But he actual figures had been exagerated in popular literature.

Those are diferentet things. The actual number of sacrifices is hotly debated. There is little info about it in the primary sources ,and some of the figures are higly improbable. So it is not the fact of human sacrifice waht is debated... . Can you help my to correct it? Nanahuatzin 02:43, 16 April 2006 (UTC)


 * AAAGH!!! My profuse apologies if I contributed to that stuff being in the Aztec and Human sacrifice in the Aztec culture articles. The only explanation that I can think of is that it might have been in the last version of the Aztec religion article before it was merged into Aztec mythology.  I assumed that the last version would have been the best but the last version apparently included this POV stuff that asserted that human sacrifice never happened.  I should have read more closely before I chose the version to use.


 * I think things look better now. If not, let me know and I will try to fix it.  Hope you had a "Feliz Semana Santa".


 * Richard 08:43, 16 April 2006 (UTC)


 * I'm trying to understand what you said above about the Aztecs not having shamans. The text mentioning shamans is still in the Aztec religion article in the "Bloodletting" section.  Is any of the text in the "Bloodletting" section valid?  In other words, is it just the stuff about the shamans that is wrong or should we just remove the whole "Bloodletting" section?


 * Richard 08:50, 16 April 2006 (UTC)


 * shamanism is mainly a method of healing between naturalistic religions, instead the aztec had priest, those dedicated to healing were "ticitl" who had little to do with religion. While Shamans existed in small towns, they were looked with suspiction by the priest.
 * I do not know if the claims of bloodletting and endorfins are right. I would like to found the original source of this before comiting to the article. While bloodleting was used by the aztec, specailly priest, the most common form, was to offer maguey torn tainted in blood, which would involved only small quantities of blood. Nanahuatzin 14:29, 17 April 2006 (UTC)

Please, double check the info before commiting to the main article. There is a lot about the aztec in the wikipedia that i have not cheked in a long time. For example, the info deniying the human sacrifice, was  reworded from my own writting.... with soo much movement in the wikipedia, sometimes it,s dificult to cope with new adtitions. I am not a schollar, but an enginner, so i try to understand and double check everything before putting it here, so i move a bit slowlly. I have been adding to this article for almost a year and a half... :) Nanahuatzin 19:51, 17 April 2006 (UTC)

Peoples, I have a question. Why is everyone so intent on making it clear that indians are perfect in every way, shape and form? These people made human sacrifices for crying out loud! Yet your still pressing that its the europeans that are savages. I still can't believe how they portray those angelic native north americans at school. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 24.36.89.104 (talk • contribs).

Please review the section "The Fate of the Aztec empire under Spanish rule"
In particular, there is this sentence...

"Because of the fall of their social structure, the population had to resort to the Spanish to maintain some order."

Did you (Nanahuatzin) write this? If so, can you explain what you meant? Are you saying that the internal social structure of the Aztecs and related cultures fell apart so that only the Spaniards were left to impose order on the indigenous societies of Mesoamerica? The above text implies that but it is too terse to really get the point across. Can you expand on this point?

Thanx.

Richard 05:14, 15 April 2006 (UTC)
 * Yes that is what i try to imply. It is deliberately terse.. because

i still looking for info about the process. Of course, it was much more complex than that The great urban centers fell apart, the former autorities were drestroyed and the procces used by the spaniard to concentrate the survivors in a few population centers, destroyed the power of the upper classes. That is how mesaomerican cultures colapsed.. But.. it was not the same for all, and i sill don`t know how voluntary was this process. Certainly the mesoamerican culture were attacacek by the misioners. The educatinal system was torn apart, and instead of providing education for all, at first only those considered noble receievd some education, and then all of them were forbitten of having any education.. Their attack also was resposible of the fall of the social structure. The chichimeca fought for 60 years. And i amd still not certain of the process in the south (mixteca/zapoteca/trarascos). I will prefer to left it like this until i confirm if this was the same for all cultures. Nanahuatzin 02:31, 16 April 2006 (UTC)

Limited perspective of this entry
I find the Aztec entry very limited in scope, and it would be good to broaden the coverage. Here is what I mean by limited. (1) consideration is limited mostly to the Mexica of Tenochtitlan, with little information on the other 2 million Aztec peoples in central Mexico. For example, city-states were far more important to most Aztec people than was the Triple Alliance empire, but the entry ignores city-states. In this and other topics, the coverage follows what the Mexica said about themselves (often biased, self-serving, and even incorrect), and not what scholars have managed to reconstruct of Aztec society and culture. (2) There is almost no archaeology in the entry, but this is where the major advances are being made in understanding Aztec life, the conditions of elites and commoners, cities and urbanization, agriculture, and a wide range of economic and social aspects. (3) Most of the information is from a small number of texts (the chroniclers), with little consideration of administrative documents or codices.

The net result is an entry that only covers a small part of what we know about the Aztecs, and only a small part of what is interesting and important about this culture. I'd like to contribute more, but just don't have much time right now. I did make some additions to the bibliography, and I'll try to add some material as I have time.

Michael E. Smith


 * Yes, as stated in the entry, this articles centers about the Mexica, the other peoples, could no be extrictly called Aztec. This is a limited term,  barely used in prehispanic times. What i think we need, and is an article about the nahua in general, Tlaxclateca, Acolcua, Tepaneca, etc..., where the Mexica were just one of them.
 * most of the info i have put, is confirmed on archeological findings, but as you say, there is so much to say, that the article has to be broken in sections. I invite you to visit those parts and put from what your perspective is important. I have centered most about the mexica historical sources, since a lot of this info is unknow to most english speaking readers.
 * there are only four aztec codex, while the info is not referer directly, it has been taken as the basis:


 * Welcome. Please help us. Any new perspective would be important. Nanahuatzin 23:57, 20 April 2006 (UTC)

"Spanish" vs. "Spaniard"
I have created an RFC linking to WikiProject Mexico/Terminology to get some opinions on the use of "Spanish" vs. "Spaniard" in referring to those from Spain who conquered and ruled Latin America during the Spanish colonization of the Americas.

Richard 06:59, 21 April 2006 (UTC)

Template
In attempt to better organize the Aztec pages and make them easier to navigate, I've created a template to include in all the related pages. You can see it on this page, I will add it to the other ones as well. Neither the layout, nor the contents are finished, I need some help for this. Editing the template is as easy as editing another page, but be careful not to mess up the layout, always use the preview button. The template is here Template:Aztec. To include it in a page, add at the top of the page (without empty line following). The society section is pretty much okay, in the people section I've added the "Great emperors" list from one of the articles, maybe we can add all the emperors, maybe others, I'll leave that to you. The template should not get too long. The history section is not good at all, mostly because the articles currently are not organized well. Ideally there should be a page "History of the Aztecs" or "Aztec Empire" (currently redirect), with subpages like "Rise of the Aztec Empire", "Aztec Triple Alliance", "Fall of the Aztec Empire", maybe more, so this section in the template can give an overview of the complete Aztec History. Piet 12:27, 23 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Excelent, this helps to give a great coherence, but instead of the list of emperaror coul be put the link to "Hueyi Tlatoani"?. Many thanks. Nanahuatzin 04:32, 24 April 2006 (UTC)

I've added all emperors to the template. Of course in this form it's impossible to add Aztec people who were not emperors to the template, I don't know if this is a problem. Either we do it like this or we make it "Aztec people" and add the most important emperors and some other people. Piet 08:15, 24 April 2006 (UTC)

I've also added the template to all the emperors pages, maybe this makes the succession box superfluous. The layout will look better without it. Piet 09:17, 24 April 2006 (UTC)

Break-out History section to its own article? Yes
Fellow editors: I have been looking at ways to cut down on the article size here (present size: 53Kb; recommended size: 32Kb), and I support Piet's recommendation to move the history off onto its own article.
 * Ideally there should be a page "History of the Aztecs" or "Aztec Empire" (currently redirect), with subpages like "Rise of the Aztec Empire", "Aztec Triple Alliance", "Fall of the Aztec Empire", maybe more, so this section in the template can give an overview of the complete Aztec History. Piet 12:27, 23 April 2006 (UTC)

I will do this within the next day or so if no one minds. Madman 20:45, 24 April 2006 (UTC)


 * I support this and I think Nanhuatzin will too. The standard for modern-day countries seems to be "History of the United States", etc.  So, that suggests "History of the Aztecs".


 * There is currently no "History" page for either the Inca or Mayan civilizations. I am planning to add "History of the Inca" and "History of the Maya" (note no "s" at the end of these).  You could make the title "History of the Aztec" or "Aztecs".  The second is more natural sounding for an English speaking.  We could use "the Inca" or "the Incas" but it's either "the Maya" or "the Mayans".  I only mention this so that we can be consistent across these three major preColumbian civilizations.


 * --Richard 21:25, 24 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the speedy feedback. I guess I'll go with "Aztecs" since that is what you and Piet suggest.  Madman 21:30, 24 April 2006 (UTC)

I've just moved the history to its own article, History of the Aztecs, and I did some copyediting while I was there.

Madman 03:44, 25 April 2006 (UTC)

There should also be a references section in the history article, maybe just copy the whole block from this page. Piet 07:44, 25 April 2006 (UTC)

The same paragraphs are being crammed into multiple articles
Richard, I see you have added huge blocks of history back into this article, with numerous headers. I think it is not a good thing to have the same verbiage in multiple places. For example, look at the Great leaders section. Although there's really no information there (in fact, there's mis-information, giving numbers of 20,000 - 80,000 sacrifices), that whole section appears in 2 different articles, plus there's an entire article on each of these folks and there's a list of Aztec rulers in the template at the top or each article.

I also don't see a reason to try to summarize each little bit of the History of the Aztecs article within this Aztecs article. An overview might be appropriate, but the piecemeal tickie-checkie unconnected-sentences approach makes for a poor article, IMHO.

Similarly, the Aztec religion article is just a paste job from the Aztec mythology and human sacrifice articles (with a bit on the modern neo-Aztecs at the end). The section entitled "Assessment of the practice of human sacrifice" is appearing in three separate articles!!

All these sections appearing in multiple articles makes a frustrating experience for anyone using this encyclopedia, and has ballooned the main article back up to "too large" size -- right now it's larger than the Ancient Egyptian or Ancient China articles and is a back to being an all-over-the-map grab bag.

I would rather see us trying to create an interlocking set of great articles with largely separate content instead of trying to make each article a stand-alone crammed with as much verbiage as it will hold. Madman 12:53, 2 May 2006 (UTC)


 * I agree. It's not easy really to make these sections under a header pointing to a main article. You need to have an overview of the other article and insight in what is important, which takes quite a bit of knowledge. On the whole it's probably easiest to keep it relatively short, without subsections. For examples we'd best look at other articles such as United States, which has a very long history section (too long imho) and refers to a main article. USA is probably good but not featured; featured country articles are for example Australia and Belgium, which have a shorter history section (but still pretty long). I think the three examples show more or less what we need: an essay mentioning the main points, leaving out the details and putting things in a context. But again, this takes quite a lot of knowledge and it will probably take us some time to get it right. If there is a good example in the Spanish encyclopedia, we could request a translation. For a start I think we better take out the subsections and make it more essay-like.
 * On a side note: the USA article is 76 kilobytes long, much longer than this article before it was split. But otoh the subject probably warrants this – I still think we need to split this and bring both the main article and the side articles to a decent standard. Piet 13:48, 2 May 2006 (UTC)


 * I agree as well. I put the slightly condensed History section back because you (Madman2001) had removed the entire History section without leaving a summary or even a reference link.  You and Piet have been moving stuff out of articles without leaving a summary behind and that's not a good thing.  Articles like Aztec, Maya civilization and United States are summary articles which should provide a broad-brush overview of all important topics with reference links to subsidiary "main" articles that provide more detail.


 * I admit that I was daunted at 1AM by the job of writing a really good summary that isn't just a repetition of the text from History of the Aztecs article but, then again, that's why Wikipedia is a collaborative effort. IMO, we need to do two things: (1) make the "History" section in the Aztec article really concise and pithy (i.e. shorten it more) (2) expand the History of the Aztecs article with even more info so that the reader will feel that it was worth jumping to a separate article because there is enough additional info to make it worth reading over the same material in much greater detail.  Task #2 is probably a job for Nanahuatzin.  I may take a whack at Task #1 from time to time but I hope that the two of you (Madman2001 and Piet) will help.


 * --Richard 16:10, 2 May 2006 (UTC)


 * I agree with your 2 sugggestions. I continue to plug away at your #1 suggestion. I am just now concising and pithyizing the Tlacaelel section of the History of the Aztecs article.  We could use a better Tlacaelel article as well, but ya can't fix everything immediately,  Madman 02:53, 6 May 2006 (UTC)

Moving examples of Aztec poetry somewhere else
I would also like to suggest that we move the long quotations to another article or even to Wikiquotes. They really don't belong in the main Aztec article, methinks. Thoughts, anyone? Madman 03:44, 25 April 2006 (UTC)


 * I have thought along those lines since I came to the Aztec article a month ago. I think the problem is that the quotes are unencyclopedic.  Problem is: Where do we move them to?  I can't conceive of a suitable article title for them.  I don't know much about Wikiquotes.  Another possibility might be Wikisource.


 * --Richard 04:49, 25 April 2006 (UTC)

Wikisource is the right place, then we can link to there. Piet 07:41, 25 April 2006 (UTC)

I placed two of the long Aztec quotations in Wikisource, with proper (I hope) links back. I also removed this excerpt below from the article, but without any source or author, I don't feel I can add it to Wikisource. Therefore, I thought I could park it here until I (or we) figure out what to do with it. Madman 16:19, 26 April 2006 (UTC)


 * sorry, my fault. Fragments from "Colloquios y Doctrina Cristiana con que los Doze Frayles de San Francisco enbiados por el Papa Adriano Sesto y por el Emperador Carlos Quinto convirtieron a los Indios de la Nueva Espanya, en lengua mexicana y espanyola. 1524" (sic. Is written in old spanish). Translated from nahuatl to spanish by Miguel Léon Portilla in "El reverso de la Conquista" pp23-28, and to English by me...  Nanahuatzin


 * thats the full name... the short name used by scholars is "El coloquio de los doce"... Nanahuatzin 23:45, 26 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Note: This fragment was moved to Wikisource.

Deficiencies in spelling and grammar
The problem here is that Nanahuatzin is a Mexican whose command of English is obviously not great. He also suffers from the fact that many words that are capitalized in English are not capitalized in Spanish. Madman2001 has complained about this before. Nanahuatzin has promised to try harder but I would guess that there are inherent limits to his ability to keep that promise.

This may be difficult for Piet to understand as an European who obviously has a good command of English. However, it is not as common for Mexicans to have as strong a command of English as it is for Europeans.

One alternative would be for Nanahuatzin to write in Spanish (possibly in the Spanish Wikipedia) and leave it for someone else to translate. I see this as an inferior alternative as the limiting factor is not the copyediting but the flow of information from Nanahuatzin to us. I have tried translating his Spanish before and my ability to translate Spanish is inferior to my ability to copyedit his English.

Another alternative would be to create a sandbox copy of each page (e.g. Aztec/Sandbox and ask Nanahuatzin to put his contributions there. We would then have to edit the sandbox and copy the edited text over to the real page.  That creates an extra level of effort that seems unnecessary given the nature of Wikipedia.

I'm sure Nanahuatzin is trying as best as he can but, look at it this way, do you see anybody else contributing substantive content? Would you prefer that we just stop here and leave the article content as is without further expansion? If not, perhaps we should be grateful and appreciative of his contributions and contribute ourselves by cleaning up his English.

Respectfully submitted, --Richard 16:49, 25 April 2006 (UTC)


 * I'm sorry, but I have to agree with what Madman has said before. Nanahuatzin did not try very hard. If he had used preview or show differences and payed attention, he would have noticed that Nahua and Aztec were not capitalized (remark has been made), that institution was missing an s (in Spanish the s is there as well) and I'm sure he knows gropus is not an English word. That's four mistakes that are hard to explain except by nonchalance. I don't want to propose that he uses a sandbox or puts changes at the talk page first, it would create more work. I notice his mistakes and I correct them, that's fine. But I found it impossible to explain the mistakes by insufficient knowledge, and that is what annoyed me. Piet 17:15, 25 April 2006 (UTC)


 * OK, we have complained. Nanahuatzin has said he will try.  At the end of the day, this is a volunteer effort and we all have other things we could do with our time.  Let us hope that Nanahuatzin will continue to find Wikipedia a worthwhile use of his time.


 * --Richard 17:48, 25 April 2006 (UTC)


 * i made have made some correction on the text about the florentine codex in the Talk:Aztec/Notes, but it need serious cleaning... i would be glad if someone would help me.. Nanahuatzin 08:03, 21 May 2006 (UTC)


 * I've copyedited it. Piet 20:14, 21 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Many, many thanks. Nanahuatzin 23:27, 21 May 2006 (UTC)

Article quality
This dialog moved here from my Talk Page so that all can participate.

I've been working on some other subjects, I'm still following the Cortes / Tenochtitlan articles but a bit from a distance. A lot has happened there in the last month, which is very good. I still intend to work on them but other things keep getting in the way. A general remark is that at the moment enormous amounts of text are added, which has led to a few articles that are too large. And we should find some images to illustrate the articles. Usually contemporary paintings are very good for this, as there are no copyrights (you can scan them from a book and use them under the { {PD-art} } license - only goes for pictures of paintings, not pictures of statues etc). Anyway, we're very good on the quantity part but we need some more quality now. But we're moving on, which is great. Piet 09:07, 21 April 2006 (UTC)


 * I agree with your analysis, Piet. We need to concentrate on bringing all the present pieces together in a coherent narrative.  That would mean removing data/words that are duplicated within articles and, to a lesser extent, between articles.  And we need images, too.  Madman 16:55, 26 April 2006 (UTC)


 * I asked a week or two ago if we wanted to push this article towards being a "good article". Nanahuatzin's response is that there was still a lot more that he wanted to put into the article.  At that point, I backed off.  However, I think there is a building consensus among Piet, Madman and myself that we want to focus on quality.


 * Here's what I propose. I'm going to create a page called Talk:Aztec/Notes.  I would urge Nanahuatzin to put new additions in that page.  The rest of us editors should watch that page and periodically copyedit Nanahuatzin's contributions and move them to the appropriate article.  The appropriate location may not be the Aztec article.  It could be a subsidiary page or even a new page if one is deemed appropriate.  We should discuss the relationship of the Aztec page with its subsidiary pages.  When moving text, a note should be left behind in Talk:Aztec/Notes indicating where the text was moved and a signature should be left so we know who did it.


 * I think we have the makings of a great series. This quality problem has been an obstacle and I think the above proposal will allow us to control quality without stifling Nanhuatzin's contributions.


 * --Richard 17:48, 26 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Thanks. I think it´s a good idea. All the movements, editing and copyediting of all of you in the last months has given a lot of structure and coherence to the aztec and related articles. I started to edit the aztec article about two years ago, and i have been building it bit by bit, with the aid of a lot of people. If you wonder why i have been strugling with english, instead of adding to the spanish wikipedia, is that this version is seen by a lot more of people, and copied into a lot of places. So I will do whathever is necesary to have quality here. Nanahuatzin 23:30, 26 April 2006 (UTC)

Copyright issues
I can submit a lot of ilustrations, but i have problems undesrtanding what can i put without problem. For Examble, i have the Borgia Codex, if I scan and clean the pictures, will it do?. And what does it cover "fair use"?. And if i go and take photographs of aztec buildings and reliquia, can i use it here?... Nanahuatzin 23:30, 26 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Your own photographs are yours, you can upload them here or at Wikimedia Commons (to make them available for other language wikis) and then link to them. It means however that you have to release them into the public domain. If you need help uploading, let me know.


 * As for scans from books, there is a distinction between 2D and 3D images. A picture of a temple (3D) is copyrighted because there has been a certain choice of angle etc. You can't scan those. A picture of a painting (2D) is seen as a replication and has no copyright. If the painter died a long time ago, the copyright of the original painting has expired and every copy / scan is completely free.


 * So, for temples etc., if you have pictures of buildings / temples that would be great. As for scans, see for example the Aztec drawing from this article or this medieval painting, which has a more correct copyright tag.

See also: Piet 09:12, 27 April 2006 (UTC)
 * Wikimedia Commons welcome page
 * Wikimedia Commons licensing page
 * Wikimedia Commons copyright tags


 * Let's focus on the question of the "Borgia Codex". Presumably, Nanahuatzin is saying that he has a copy of the "Borgia Codex" and not the actual Codex itself.  If he did have the actual Codex, any scans would be OK as long as Nanahuatzin licensed the scan according to Wikipedia policy.


 * However, if Nanhuatzin has a copy of the Codex, the problem becomes who owns the copyright on that copy of the "Borgia Codex"? Is the copy in the public domain or does someone assert a copyright on it at this time?  I think it's difficult but possible to assert copyright over the image of a public domain document (e.g. a picture of the Declaration of Independence).  I think you can't copyright the text but you can copyright the picture.  Now, what happens if you scan the picture and crop it so that the document is not evident but just the actual writing on the page?  I don't know.


 * Next, what exactly is Nanahuatzin proposing to scan? The text of the Codex or a picture that was in the Codex?  Presumably, no one posesses a copyright to the pictures or the text.


 * So, we need some clarification as to what Nanahuatzin is actually proposing to do.

--Richard 19:17, 30 April 2006 (UTC)


 * I have a very good copy of the borgia Codex, I am goin to scan, copy and clean the despition of gods and simbols (the original is very damages in some parts), This wil provide with excelent ilustation fot the aztec related topics. The fullpages are too criptic for a common radres, but the indivicual drawings are amazing. Nanahuatzin 05:39, 4 May 2006 (UTC)

No, for a 2D work or for text it doesn't matter if he has the copy or the original codex, because no one can hold any rights over this copy. If I make a copy of a painting in the public domain, and I sell it to you, I do not hold any rights over that copy. The copyright has expired and making a copy does not create any new rights since I'm not adding anything to it. That's how I understood it. A 2D copy of a 2D original can not contain anything that was not in the original, therefore there has been no act of creation and there can be no copyright.

But if I sell you a picture of a 3D work, I have a copyright over the picture because it is considered a new creation. The Borgia Codex was created long enough ago (I suppose) so we don't have to worry about it. It is in the public domain regardless whether it's text or drawings. You can always ask the question at one of the talk pages at Wikimedia Commons if you're not sure. Anyway, we should not discuss it here since we definitely need an expert if we're in doubt. Piet 22:53, 30 April 2006 (UTC)

Check out the new Pre-Columbian templates
The original template is at Template:Pre-Columbian. The "new and improved" version is at Template:Pre-Columbian/Test.

Once we have a usable version of Template:Pre-Columbian/Test, we plan to move it into Template:Pre-Columbian and then insert it at the bottom of the Aztec, Maya civilization and Inca empire articles.

Discussion is at Template talk:Pre-Columbian. Please share any feedback and suggestions that you may have.

--Richard 19:08, 30 April 2006 (UTC)

Mexica vs. Aztec (again)
I was editing the History section and realized that we have a problem with think he use of "Mexica" and "Aztec". At the beginning of the History section, the two were being used interchangeably. The most notable point was that the opening paragraph discussed the origin of the Aztecs and their homeland Aztlan. It would seem to make sense that Aztecs came from Aztlan. However, I changed the use of Mexica and Aztecs so that Mexica came from Aztlan and did not become Aztecs until the Triple Alliance created the Aztec Empire.

This represents my best understanding of how the names should be used. Yes, I know that the term Aztec was invented by Humboldt many years after the fall of Tenochtitlan but unless we're just going to change Aztec to Mexica throughout the article, we need some guideline of how to use the terms?

Thoughts?

--Richard 15:44, 3 May 2006 (UTC)


 * I think is my fault, i have been using more Mexica than Azteca, a least in Mexico, in archeology, few specialist use Azteca and all the museums use Mexica. But i accept taht most of the population uses Azteca. As a compromise, i think you are right and Azteca could be uses as Hundboldt intended. As the people under the Triple Alliance, and kept mexica, for the people of the individual cities of Tlatelolco and Tenochtitlan. Nanahuatzin 05:51, 4 May 2006 (UTC)

I just began to read the aubin codex, acording to this, in Aztlan, the nahua live under the rule of a powerfull elit, called the Azteca Chicomostoca. The seven tribes run out of Aztlan, to seek new lands. The Mexica were the last of them, guided by their priest "Huitzil". His god spoke trough the priest and ordered them to never called themselve Azteca, the name of theyr former masters, so they should be called Mexica instead. I will try to write somehitn about this and put so you can review it. Nanahuatzin 05:51, 4 May 2006 (UTC)

OK, I have put most of the above points into the article. As always, you are welcome to correct or expand on what I wrote. --Richard 06:50, 4 May 2006 (UTC)


 * I noticed that inconsistency in the Spanish conquest of Mexico article as well, sometimes within the same paragraph. I would agree that the term Mexica could/should be used prior to the Triple Alliance, with Aztec being the term thereafter.  During some copy-editing of Spanish conquest of Mexico, therefore, I replaced Mexica with Aztec.  In addition, per recommendation from Rockero, I standardized on "Tlaxaclan".  I hope that I have not stepped on anyone's toes.  Thanks, User:Madman2001 15:18, 4 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Yeah, I noticed the change to "Tlaxcalan" and was annoyed by it because I thought we had decided to standardize on "Tlaxcalteca" but I couldn't remember for sure and it wasn't top on my list of priorities. Please consult the discussion in Talk:Aztec/Usage.  Then let's come to a resolution.  There are valid arguments for "Tlaxcalan" and for "Tlaxcalteca" and even for just "Tlaxcala".  The best comment in the whole batch was "Generally there are few hard and fast rules for forming Mesoamerican demonyms, although there are some widely-observed conventions"


 * As for Mexica/Aztec during the time of the Spanish conquest, I would like to understand from Nanhuatzin whether there is ever any value in distinguishing the Mexica from the Aztec after the formation of the Triple Alliance. If I correctly understand what he has written, the Mexica are the inhabitants of Tlatelolco and Tenochtitlan and all the Nahuatl-speakers outside those two cities are Aztec but not Mexica.  But, is this a distinction worth making in Wikipedia?  It may be technically correct but only serve to confuse rather than enlighten the reader.


 * Thus, I would go with User:Madman2001's approach of using Aztec throughout those articles unless Nanahuatzin feels differently.::--Richard 17:53, 4 May 2006 (UTC)


 * For the time being, there is not necesary to point the diference, but as we have being reminded, the article has not touched anything about the "aztec provinces". But I hope we would be expand later, so to keep this difference in mind. Also, i think it would be interesant to remind that most of the cities under aztec ruling, abandoned the alliance since they did not considered themselves "mexica" although they could be called "azteca". Only the Tlatelolca, who were aslo Mexica, stayed loyal, even if they had a lot of disagrements with the Tenochca, since originally they were independent of them. I want to writte a more about Tlatelolco, the current article says little about their history. Nanahuatzin 22:18, 5 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Yes, this is the sort of thing that I suspected was lurking behind the Mexica / Aztec distinction. When time permits, we should put this in the article.  I think it's kind of like the Roman Empire vs. the Romans.  Just because you were part of the Roman Empire didn't mean you were Roman.  Nor did it mean that your allegiance was to Rome.  It just meant that the Romans had you subjugated for the time being.--Richard 22:43, 5 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Exactly, and another point is that the mexica were just one of the nahuatl groups, a lot of the cultural aspects were common to the other nahuas. A good analogy wold be ancient greece, where several city states had common language, gods, and culture, and from time to time one of the cities would predominate over the others, but each city state could retain some individuality. In this case what i try to remind our readers that the main cultural aspects were not created by the mexicas, but adopted and transformed by them ( mhhh.. i hope i could make it clear.. it´s 2 AM....). Nanahuatzin 07:26, 8 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Sorry, I wasn't aware of the discussion over there (Talk:Aztec/Usage). I added my 2¢ to the conversation.  I'm afraid, being Anglo-centric, that I prefer Tlaxacalan, as did 2 others, but I will most certainly follow the consensus and change back to Tlaxcalteca if so desired.  Madman     -- P.S. In the Spanish conquest of Mexico article, I found 2 or 3 different spellings of "Tlaxcalteca".

What happend to the Pochteca?
I just noticed that all the references to the pochteca (merchants) are lost, and the article about the structure of the aztec society just refers now to slaves. Any reason for this?. Nanahuatzin 22:52, 5 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Gee, I dunno. I looked back in the history of edits and I see that I started mucking around with the "Society" section around March 26th.  In this version  (before I started moving stuff around), the pochteca are mentioned.  When I get a bit of time later tonight, I will take a closer look and see what has gotten dropped along the way and put it back.  My apologies if I was the one who dropped the text.
 * --Richard 23:28, 5 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Actually, I don't think this was my fault at least not in the Aztec social structure article. It turns out some anon user from FLAGSTAFF UNIFIED SCHOOL DIST. deleted the entire "Class structure" section from that article this morning.


 * I don't know when it was deleted from the Aztec article and I don't think it's worth the effort of plowing through all the old edit history to figure out when the text was deleted from the Aztec article and by whom. Can you review the text that I just restored to the Aztec social structure article and copy the important points back into the Aztec article?  Please keep in mind that the Aztec article is supposed to be a summary article and most of the details should be in the Aztec social structure article.


 * Thanx.


 * --Richard 23:48, 5 May 2006 (UTC)


 * thanks, i was wondering what had happened... The article has now a great shape, but sometimes i get lost with all the new changes :) Nanahuatzin 07:12, 8 May 2006 (UTC)

Project Aztec
Nanahuatzin has joined Project Aztec. Nobody else has. That's OK, listing your name as a "participant" is just a formality. Hopefully you've checked out the page and will add any information that you feel is relevant.

Personally, I think creating a project for Aztec-related articles is a bit of overkill. I think there are about 25 Aztec-related pages and about 5 active editors. This is at the very low end of the range for which a project page is useful.

Nonetheless, I thought I'd give it a try partly to give a home to the decisions we've take about terminology WikiProject Aztec/Terminology.

I've just added a task "Review the History of Mexico article". I'm not sure if the discussion of the Aztecs is quite accurate. See the project page for details.

--Richard 18:57, 11 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Any reason not to just handle this under WikiProject Mexico? At the very least, I would think it should be listed there as a subproject. - Jmabel | Talk 03:18, 2 July 2006 (UTC)

Edits
I've copyedited sections Nomenclature and History, made them a lot shorter. A lot of the information was redundant, some I considered superfluous because it was in the main article. And some of the editing was just a matter of personal taste of course, improve if you like. The article is still a bit long, here's what else I would do:
 * Society and Daily life section. I would make an article Aztec society which could have most of the Daily life section and a bit of the social structure (which would remain as the main article). -- Piet 21:32, 11 May 2006 (UTC)


 * The title Aztec society used to redirect to Aztec social structure which discussed class structure and slavery. I changed this so that Aztec social structure now redirects to Aztec society which discusses class structure, slavery and daily life.  The Aztec article now refers to Aztec society as a main article for the "Aztec society" section.  However, the "Aztec society" section in the Aztec article and the Aztec society article are exactly the same.  The next step is to shorten the "Aztec society" section in the Aztec article so that it is only a summary of the Aztec society article.
 * --Richard 04:42, 13 May 2006 (UTC)

After these changes I think we have more or less the desired length and structure for this article, and we can start thinking about making it a Good Article. -- Piet 21:32, 11 May 2006 (UTC)
 * I think Tenochtitlan should not have a separate section in this article, we could maybe mention some more about it in different places but not in a separate section.
 * I have trimmed the Tenochtitlan section a bit. I think it's OK now.
 * --Richard 04:42, 13 May 2006 (UTC)

I agree that we are very close to a good article. Dare I suggest that we might even be close to a featured article? --Richard 04:42, 13 May 2006 (UTC)

When applying for featured status (maybe for good article status too), we will get the complaint that there are not enough references in the text. It is not enough to have a big list of references at the bottom. Ideally, we would have to say in almost every paragraph what source the information is from. Take a look at Red rain in Kerala – which is not featured. Guideline is Citing sources. I would try to improve this a bit, then request a peer review. Other things: relevant picture in every section (not bad as it is, but maybe not enough to be featured); and to get featured, we probably need something about architecture (isn't that a big gap in our article, or is it not as important as I would think?). Piet 09:19, 13 May 2006 (UTC)


 * This article needs:


 * A good review for accuracy. For example, the population decline due to epidemics is much too high, at least as a consensus:


 * The first epidemic, an outbreak of smallpox (cocoliztli) occurred in 1520 and 1521, decimated the population of Tenochtitlan and was decisive in the fall of the city. Two more epidemics, of smallpox (1545-1548) and typhus (1576-1581) killed up to 75% of the population of Mesoamerica. 


 * An overall copyedit to make the article flow -- a consistency of tone and information, removal of repetition, no obscure references requiring prior knowlege (e.g. I cut a reference to "the Twelve"), italicize the Nahuatl words, etc. etc.


 * Among other changes. Madman 03:31, 15 May 2006 (UTC)


 * * Why do you think the estimate of the population decline due to epidemics is too high? :: --Richard 11:50, 15 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Check out this article, which says


 * A fair-minded cross-examination of the broad range of primary sources for the epidemic of 1520 leaves little doubt that smallpox swept throughout the Central Mexican Basin, causing enormous mortality. The epidemic ranked with the deadliest disasters that native annals customarily recorded. Whether the fraction of smallpox deaths was one-tenth or one-half, we have no way of knowing, but from my reading of the texts discussed here, the true fraction must fall within these extremes, perhaps near the mid-point. 


 * One-tenth to one-half is quite a bit below 75%. The 75% figure is close the the total population decline in the 80 years after the conquest from all sources.  (See this)


 * * What are examples of "obscure references requiring prior knowlege"
 * Piet mentioned one, where the Nahuatl term for prostitute appeared without explanation.


 * * I don't remember a reference to "the Twelve", what was it?
 * Not sure what article it was in, perhaps [[Diego Duran], but it said something like "he was not one of the Twelve", with no explanation of what these "Twelve" were. The Twelve, I eventually learned, was a term for the the first group of friars to arrive after the conquest.


 * In addition, in my review of the Diet section, I changed "cocoa grains" to "cocoa beans" and removed a reference saying that the Aztec chocolate drink was "like beer". My point is only that this article needs a thorough review.  I certainly think this article is getting there (I hope so with all this work), but there is some additional work.  Thanks for listening, Madman 12:59, 15 May 2006 (UTC)

Architecture
Nothing about architecture in this article. Could anyone write a few words? Maybe here on the talk if you don't know where to put them in the article. Piet 21:37, 11 May 2006 (UTC)
 * I've renamed the Tenochtitlan section to "City building and architecture" and added a few words. The more knowledgeable among us can probably expand it a bit. Piet 15:57, 13 May 2006 (UTC)

Question about "Skybearers" in Aztec mythology article
In the list of Aztec gods, "Skybearers" is the only god listed with English name first. Isn't there a Nahuatl name for this? --Richard 05:06, 13 May 2006 (UTC)


 * it should be Tzitzimime Nanahuatzin 02:34, 16 May 2006 (UTC)


 * then, something is wrong. Here is what the Aztec mythology article says...
 * * Skybearers - associated with the four directions, supported the vault of the sky.
 * * Tzitzimime - star demons of darkness that attack the sun during eclipses and threaten the earth


 * Please clear up this confusion. Thanx.


 * --Richard 04:41, 16 May 2006 (UTC)


 * please erase the reference to "skybearers". The concept of skybearers as described there is not really aztec but maya. :(   Nanahuatzin 08:25, 16 May 2006 (UTC)

Use of Nahuatl words
I think too many nahuatl words are used. I some sections it is difficult to know what is meant. Example: Fathers admonished their daughters to be very clean, but not to use makeup, because they would look like ahuianis. I don't know what ahuianis means and it is not explained in that place. I'm guessing it means prostitute, if so I would use that word or a similar English word. In general, I think we should use English except when it is impossible for lack of a good translation. We should limit the number of Nahuatl words to a set that is small enough to handle for the non-expert reader. Piet 10:34, 13 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Sorry.. My fault, for not explaining.. not all agree that ahuani (bringer of hapiness) were protitute, since there are also references to common prostitues in the streets for the common folks... It seems they were in charge of the "happinnes" of the elite warriors... Of course none of this ocupations were well apreciated by aztec mothers... Sometimes it is translated as a less compromising "coourtisan" (if my enlgish is correct, that is a woman of the court.). Old ahuanis try to keep their beauty with makeup, hence the reference. Ussualy when old they sell themselves as slaves to buy more makeup and try to maintain little more their way of life. Originally the section explaining about ahuani was nearer that text... Nanahuatzin


 * Strongly agree. In addition, the Nahuatl words should be italicized.  Madman 13:57, 13 May 2006 (UTC)


 * How do you italicize a word? --Richard 11:46, 15 May 2006 (UTC)


 * two single quotes around it. Piet 12:15, 16 May 2006 (UTC)

Requested map
I've put up a request for a map of the Aztec empire. I'm not sure where the data will come from however. Maybe someone could create it from an existing (copyrighted) map. Or does anyone have a very old map where the copyright would be expired? Piet 15:56, 13 May 2006 (UTC)


 * I can put together a map, based on copyrighted material.   Madman 03:31, 15 May 2006 (UTC)


 * We have a map! Well done, Madman. Piet 12:43, 23 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Thank you, thank you! It was a bit easier than I expected.  It would be nice to have some map-making software, but this will do for a while.  Let me know, anyone, if you have any suggestions for improvement.


 * I would also like to put together a map of the Lake Texcoco area with the various city-states circa 1428, when the the Mexica allied with Texcoco and Tlacopan.


 * Thanks again! Madman 12:57, 23 May 2006 (UTC)

Images
I upload some images.. but i forgot how to used them...


 * http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Ahuiani_FlorentineCodex.jpg
 * http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Pochteca_FlorentineCodex.jpg
 * http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Cortez_Malintzin_LienzoDeTlaxcala.jpg
 * http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Quetzalcoatl_Ehecatl.jpg
 * http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:ToltecaChichimeca_Chicomostoc.jpg

(note: this las is choped.. but i will replace it later..)
 * http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Image:Huanitzin.jpg
 * http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Image:Codex_florentino_51_9.jpg

Nanahuatzin 07:15, 16 May 2006 (UTC)
 * New images in commons: I've fixed the category, it's "Aztecs" not "Aztec". Unfortunately Commons uses different categories than Wikipedia. Piet 20:12, 21 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Thanks Nanahuatzin 23:36, 21 May 2006 (UTC)

simply or, better,. Piet 12:20, 16 May 2006 (UTC)


 * When you upload more images, consider uploading them to Wikimedia Commons, then they can be used in exactly the same way, but from the Spanish and other wikis also. You can also put them in a category like with wikipedia pages. For example, this is the category of Aztec images in Wikimedia Commons. Piet 12:25, 16 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Thanks i will do it. I am planing a "photographic safari" at the "museo de antropologia" and "Museo del templo mayor". I hope it will be useful Nanahuatzin 15:23, 16 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Photo safari?? Great.  Wonderful news.  I would only ask that you continue to document your images with contextual information, the way that you did your recent codex uploads (for example, Image:Ahuiani_FlorentineCodex.jpg).


 * As a counterexample, here is an image of an Aztec mask in the Commons, but the picture is slightly blurry and there is absolutely no information concerning this mask, like when it was made, where it was made, what it was used for, etc. So, I am reluctant to put it in an article.  If you can gather that sort of contextual information along with your photos, I would be very grateful.  Muchas gracias, mi amigo.  Madman 17:46, 16 May 2006 (UTC)  - Oh, and please upload them to the Commons, so we can use them on other language Wikipedias.


 * Thanks, Piet. There are some images in Wikimedia Commons that might be useful.  How do you reference them from a Wikipedia article? --Richard 14:59, 16 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Just as if they were in the English wikipedia: [[Image:xxx.jpg]] . The software will look for them in the Commons as well. Piet 15:09, 16 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Richard, over the past week, I have indeed been inserting some of the Commons images into Aztec-related articles. However, I only want to use great images that also have contextual information (like Nanahuatzin supplied with his recent uploads (source, description, etc)).  I complained about the Aztec mask image above.  The Aztec Education image from this article is also weak.  Ideally the images we use should be as educational as the text.  Thanks for listening,  Madman 17:46, 16 May 2006 (UTC)

Article name
Has there been a discussion about this article's name? Somehow I'm not very comfortable with it. I would prefer Aztec civilization like for the Mayas. I know we should not go lightly over this, but there's no use postponing the discussion. Piet 12:35, 16 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Yeah, it's bothered me forever. I'll try to look to see if there's anything in the archives on this question but I definitely vote for Aztec civilization.  We can move this article and then put a redirect from "Aztec" to "Aztec civilization".

--Richard 14:48, 16 May 2006 (UTC)

Mexico collaboration
I nominated this article for the Mexico collaboration back in April but it only got one other vote besides my own. Now may be a good time to vote for this article. Getting some extra eyes on it can help with any copyediting problems. --Richard 14:55, 16 May 2006 (UTC)

Tenochtitlan - Palace of Moctezuma
In the Tenochtitlan article, I found the following sentence...

"The palace of Moctezuma also had two houses or zoos, one for birds of prey and another for other birds, reptiles and mammals."

What is "the palace of Moctezuma"? Is it the palace of Moctezuma I or Moctezuma II? I would presume that it is the palace of Moctezuma II but it could have been built by Moctezuma I so I figured I should ask for clarification.

--Richard 06:15, 17 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Let me check, but if i remember correcty, the palace was built by Axayacatl and was the residence of Moctezuma II. I was there where Cortez and the Tlaxcalteca (about 3,000 people) stayed. Adding to the confusion... Moctezuma also has two royal houses. Which sometimes are alss refered as Moctezuma Palace. Let me double check this... Nanahuatzin 20:15, 17 May 2006 (UTC)

Mixtec-Aztec
User:Madman2001 put a caption on the mask image in Aztec mythology that reads, in part, "of Mixtec-Aztec provenance". I interpret this to mean that archeologists don't know whether this mask is Mixtec or Aztec in provenance. Am I reading this right? (Yes, you are. I was trying to say that in as few words as possible.  Madman 16:44, 17 May 2006 (UTC) )

I can imagine a couple different ways to interpret this. Since the Mixtec were conquered by the Aztecs, it could be that we don't know for sure whether the mask is purely pre-conquest Mixtec or a post-conquest Aztec-style mask found in Mixtec territory. It could even be a post-conquest Mixtec-style mask found in Aztec territory outside the Mixtec territory.

My real point, however, is that there is darn little discussion of the Mixtec in the Aztec article or in the History of the Aztecs article. Yet, in the Mixtec article, we are told "In Pre-Columbian times, the Mixtec were one of the major civilizations of Mesoamerica."

I think we need to insert a list of all the "major conquests" of the Aztecs into the History of the Aztecs article and to summarize the most important ones in the Aztec article.

--Richard 15:58, 17 May 2006 (UTC)


 * I, for one, am still a bit confused/ignorant about the differences and similarities between all these cultural groups (if that the right word) in Mesoamerica at the time of the Spanish conquest, e.g. Aztec, Mixtec, Zapotec, Tolteca-Chichimeca, and probably more. They apparently shared common cultural elements, like dieties and languages, so much so that archaeologists have a hard time determining whether some artifacts (like that mask or like several codices) are Mixtec or Aztec, say.


 * Which is a long-winded way of saying I would be very interested in reading an essay (and having an essay in Wikipedia) discussing the similarities and differences between these cultural groups (or whatever they should be called). Madman 16:44, 17 May 2006 (UTC)  (The work never ends!)


 * I agree. The Triple Alliance of Tenochtitlan, Texcoco, and Tlacopan would, in the next 100 years, come to dominate the Valley of Mexico and extend its power to both the Gulf of Mexico and the Pacfic shore. Over this period, Tenochtitlan gradually became the dominant power in the alliance, and the Triple Alliance territories became known as the Aztec Empire. This is the only thing about this period while the earliest history receives a lot more attention. We could fix this a bit using information from Aztec Triple Alliance, but without making the history section as a whole longer. The period is not well covered in the other articles either, there's room for expansion there. And we need a map. Piet 07:36, 18 May 2006 (UTC)