Talk:Azza El-Hassan

Peer review: You have described Azza El-Hasssan’s early life and career clearly with enough supporting details. I liked that in filmography table you provided the titles of her work in Arabic and in English. I think the viewers of the page would love to know both Arabic and English title of her works. Maybe you could add actual Arabic character titles for extra information. Other than that, I could not come up with any other suggestions. Well done! Crazy rich asian (talk) 07:44, 31 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer review: You have a strong, succinct lead section. You've made a clear division of filmography and awards. I like the inclusion of film titles in Arabic and English. Consider adding in more recent works after 2004 using information from IMDB. You should look out for words such as “maybe”, “seem to” as these offer opinions, and also watch out for comma splices. Perhaps put dates in the left-most column of the filmography table to match the awards section. I would suggest describing films and film progress in career section.Nerissa35 (talk) 18:52, 1 November 2018 (UTC)

I removed an external link to EI, if there is an argument for adding it again, I am open to it
As it is depreciated per RFC: Electronic Intifada, I removed it, particularly as it is BLP. If someone is opposed, I am happy to discuss? FortunateSons (talk) 18:37, 24 January 2024 (UTC)