Talk:BAE Systems Electronic Solutions

I was unaware that the page content was not encyclopedic. I'll revise it to avoid what is perceived to be advertising content. Thanks

EIS-external (talk) 21:57, 9 February 2010 (UTC)


 * The first paragraph came straight out of the marketing department. You need to avoid marketing-speak and peacock words. &mdash;ShadowRanger (talk 22:03, 9 February 2010 (UTC)

Right, OK. Lesson learned. I'd prefer that the Electronic Solutions page be deleted for now until an article can be conceived that appeals to the general Wiki audience. —Preceding unsigned comment added by EIS-external (talk • contribs) 14:15, 10 February 2010 (UTC)

Tagged for coi per user name: "EIS-external" looks a lot like the "Electronics, Intelligence & Support operating group of BAE Systems Inc" discussed in the entry. There's already an entry for BAE, I don't see any sign that this is a notable segment of that company. Hairhorn (talk) 04:54, 10 February 2010 (UTC)