Talk:BMW Z18/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Eurohunter (talk · contribs) 19:28, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

I started review. Comments will be below. Review within 2023 GAN Backlog Drives. Eurohunter (talk) 19:28, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

Background

 * 1) BMW Technik GmbH isn't notable enough to create an article? Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 2) When BMW Technik GmbH was re-integrated back into BMW? Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 3) Add information about histor after BMW Technik GmbH was re-integrated back into BMW. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 4) "Although first developed in 1990, the concept was not shown until 1995." - any reason why? Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

Design

 * 1) "the 4.4 L (268.5 cu in) produced 355 PS (350 hp; 261 kW)" - what are "PS"? Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 2) If BMW Z18 is based on BMW Z3 I would add more information about BMW Z3 and one sentence about its next generations. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

Other

 * 1) This article may be interesting for article extension. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 2) I think it's possible to find more sources in different languages, and I would try to take more information from current references. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 3) Links to redirects in references. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 4) I made some minor fixes. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 5) What about models Z13, Z21 and Z22? Are they related in any way to Z18? From the infobox I can see BMW Z22 is a successor, but there is no any information about it in the text. Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 6) Is this possible to add more categories? Eurohunter (talk) 19:57, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 7) Replace parameter "Work" or "Publisher" with "Website" in references. Eurohunter (talk) 20:33, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 8)  It's notification. Eurohunter (talk) 16:58, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Hi, I think you should autofail this for now. I am busy for the next month, and I do not think I have enough time to improve this article within the allotted time period. Unless, of course, you do not mind. Your call. X750. Spin a yarn? Articles I've screwed over? 06:37, 18 August 2023 (UTC)

Summary

 * 1)  Fail. The article requires improvements, which will not be provided within the appropriate period. Eurohunter (talk) 14:10, 19 August 2023 (UTC)