Talk:BOAC Flight 712/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: -- / MWOAP &#124; Notify Me \ 11:46, 11 March 2010 (UTC)

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To Work On list (specifics)

 * Augmented in Sec 1, please define (Criterion 1A)
 * ✅ Mjroots (talk) 11:08, 20 March 2010 (UTC)


 * George Cross Database, Dead link, replace or remove (Citerion 2B)
 * ✅ Mjroots (talk) 11:08, 20 March 2010 (UTC)


 * "Aeromoe" Geosites source, fails reliability & unable to understand, remove/resource (Citerion 2A&B)
 * ✅ Mjroots (talk) 11:33, 20 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Large Unsourced sections (1-5). Step by step explanation that does have sources. (Criterion 2C)
 * . All text is referenced. Where a para has only 1 ref, all text is from that source. Mjroots (talk) 11:35, 20 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Clarify: The sections are covered all by one source. Would like to see some kind of second source to verify the information. I assume that when you footnote the whole paragraph that you are citing the whole paragraph? -- &#47; MWOAP &#124; Notify Me &#92; 22:31, 20 March 2010 (UTC)
 * The sections are all covered by one source because that source (Aeroplane) was the source I used to expand the article. At the time I did not have Ottaway's book. Your assumption is correct. AFAIK, 1 ref per para is acceptable. Mjroots (talk) 04:07, 21 March 2010 (UTC)
 * ✅ Now understand. Clarified. -- &#47; MWOAP &#124; Notify Me &#92; 01:55, 25 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Does not cover actions from air traffic control. (Criterion 3A)
 * - ATC coverage is sparse in sources. I'll re-read Susan Ottaway's book and see if I can expand coverage here. Mjroots (talk) 13:17, 20 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Even if there is a small section of ATC, it would be better than nothing. -- &#47; MWOAP &#124; Notify Me &#92; 22:31, 20 March 2010 (UTC)
 * ✅ More added about ATC's role. I don't think it could be a separate section as it is too interwoven into the flight of the aircraft. Mjroots (talk) 08:24, 21 March 2010 (UTC)


 * 1st image does not fully explain the status of the aircraft. You could put "Engine falling from Flight 712 over ___". (Criterion 6B & 1A MOS 17.2 "Formatting of captions")
 * ✅ Caption expanded Mjroots (talk) 11:41, 20 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Dead Wikilinks (Criterion 1B)
 * ✅ All wikilinks external links now live Mjroots (talk) 11:39, 20 March 2010 (UTC)
 * You did mean external links, didn't you? A dead wikilink is a redlink, isn't it? Mjroots (talk) 07:29, 22 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Sorry meant redlink. -- &#47; MWOAP &#124; Notify Me &#92; 19:06, 27 March 2010 (UTC)
 * ✅ I've removed two of the redlinks. I don't think that either really adds to the article per WP:REDLINK, although I have no objection to them being linked if an article were to be created. Katriel Katz meets WP:BIO, and the redlink there is a valid one. Mjroots (talk) 12:13, 29 March 2010 (UTC)

Comments
Please do not change the status of the criterion, the reviewer will change that their selfs. Looks all good now. I don't re-review like this because I often miss something and it goes for reassessment or needs fixing. Sorry. / MWOAP &#124; Notify Me \ 21:10, 3 April 2010 (UTC)
 * The reason I declined it instead of putting it on hold was because that is a big list, and I usually find that that big of a lists takes editors a while to take care of. -- / MWOAP &#124; Notify Me \ 22:31, 20 March 2010 (UTC)

Questions
The GAN has a fail against "No original research". In which area do you think that there is OR in the article? Mjroots (talk) 04:02, 21 March 2010 (UTC)
 * ✅ It was the above stuff. -- &#47; MWOAP &#124; Notify Me &#92; 01:55, 25 March 2010 (UTC)

The file mentioned above as not having a complete NFU rationale and needing resizing. I don't see where either of these apply. The photo appears in Ottaway's book, but isn't attributed. Its size at 200x409 px is small enough. Mjroots (talk) 08:55, 21 March 2010 (UTC)
 * -- &#47; MWOAP &#124; Notify Me &#92; 01:55, 25 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Forget about the resize. But the Fair Use Rational needs to be detailed per GA Criteria. See WP:RAT. -- &#47; MWOAP &#124; Notify Me &#92; 19:24, 27 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I've expanded the FURs of all three fair use images. Mjroots (talk) 12:09, 29 March 2010 (UTC)