Talk:BS2000

Rewrite Intro
The article is about BS2000, not about mainframes in general. Suggestion: Add a link to the general page and remove the unneeded information. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 87.66.115.217 (talk) 20:48, 19 April 2009 (UTC)
 * Agreed. Link was already present, so incidental material removed. — DragonHawk (talk|hist) 00:31, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

Users
This is what runs on the British PNC (Police National Computer) - A Fujitsu mainframe. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 134.36.93.46 (talk) 15:17, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Rewrite
Generally English Wikipedia articles should be written in full sentences with a noun and verb in each. This is just a timeline. W Nowicki (talk) 22:45, 3 June 2013 (UTC)

Still written like an ad?
It doesn't really seem to be written like an advertisement to me - it's not the best-written article in the world, but nothing in there makes it seem like it has an editorial agenda. Should this be removed, and if not, what needs to be changed to get to that point? Kiralexis (talk) 16:05, 12 January 2014 (UTC)