Talk:Babe Winkelman

Tone
This article is definitely a good effort, by someone new to the Wikipedia project. Some sections could reorganized a bit, such as moving References up higher, but that's a quibble. See WP:MOS for more. I've added the tone maintenance tag though, since language does need to be toned down, to "just the facts", rather than waxing eloquent on Winkelman's personal great love for the outdoors. That information is better suited for Winkelman's site. For more information perhaps check WP:PAY, or ask at WP:TEAHOUSE. --Elonka 02:30, 2 December 2017 (UTC)