Talk:Babel Proclamation/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tkbrett (talk · contribs) 19:49, 4 June 2021 (UTC)

After writing a couple of articles about anti-German sentiment, I'm excited to give this one a go. I'll do a review by Monday at the latest.  Tkbrett  (✉) 19:49, 4 June 2021 (UTC)

Lead

 * The proclamation was controversial: expand on this; the body mentions that the proclamation was popular among English speakers and unpopular among everyone else.
 * Image is definitely PD.

Rise in anti-German sentiment

 * Good.

Description

 * Theodore Roosevelt needs to be introduced as "Former US President", or something along those lines.
 * After World War I ended, the proclamation was repealed...: who repealed it? Harding?

Legacy

 * An op-ed published in The Des Moines Register...: when?
 * A hearing in the United States House of Representatives...: when?

Final comments and verdict

 * , a nice little article which only needs a few tweaks. I made some copy edits and slight rewordings as well.  Tkbrett  (✉) 00:54, 8 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Thanks,, I've attempted to institute your comments essentially directly. Let me know what you think. Eddie891 Talk Work 01:24, 8 June 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅: all looks and reads good to me. Congrats on another!  Tkbrett  (✉) 01:57, 8 June 2021 (UTC)