Talk:Baby, Please Don't Go/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 08:29, 25 June 2015 (UTC)

Hello, I'm Calvin999 and I am reviewing this article.


 * Review
 * One suspicious link
 * Is linking to a disambiguation page intentional?


 * Chicago, October 31, 1935 → Put a semi-colon after Chicago and put the date so it goes underneath it (Example: I Was Here (song)
 * Structurally, I think you should follow "You Don't Love Me (No, No, No)" as an example for this article
 * songs, which → Remove comma
 * with recordings by several blues musicians. → Such as?
 * as well as → and
 * What is a race records chart? Needs linking of possible It's a precursor to the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart we have today.
 * the song an electric → There's a word missing here, doesn't make sense
 * at that time a studio guitarist, → a studio guitarist at the time,
 * as performing for the recording, → Doesn't make sense
 * "Baby, Please Don't Go" is likely an adaptation of "Long John", → Why don't you say this in the lead?
 * "I'm Alabama Bound","Elder Green Blues", → Needs to be a space between Bound and Elder
 * "Don't Leave Me Here", and "Turn Your Lamp Down Low". → Don't need a comma when using 'and'
 * guitarist Lonnie Johnson never → Comma after Johnson
 * Original song seems odd to be called this for a section when it's not an original song? Perhaps say that he re-arranged it into what is now known as the original version of "baby, Please Don't Go". Would you agree?
 * The song became a big hit → Too informal
 * Boosted by the B-side, → Boosted?
 * The single was issued → The song was released
 * In the AC/DC version, the block quote isn't being indented because of the picture. Either do something else with the block quote, such as in a sentence as a quote, or move/remove the picture from the left
 * I'd combined the AC/DC version section and Aerosmith version section as a 'Other versions' section.
 * A music video, directed by Mark Haefeli, was produced to promote the single. Subsequently, the song has become a staple of the band's concert repertoire. → This needs sourcing

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
 * Summary


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

On hold for 7 days — Calvin999  08:57, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Outcome
 * I'm satisfied that this article meets the GA criteria now. Well done. — Calvin999  08:00, 1 July 2015 (UTC)


 * Pass or Fail:

Non-reviewer comment: This could use more reviews from critics. One review for Williams, one for Janovitz, one for AC/DC, and one for Aerosmith doesn't seem like very much. Snuggums (talk / edits) 04:04, 26 June 2015 (UTC)