Talk:Baby Blue (Action Bronson song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:18, 24 December 2017 (UTC)

Lead

 * You don't need to link "rapper"
 * It was released on March 3, 2015 → by which label?
 * fourth and final single off his → fourth and final single from his
 * second album Mr. Wonderful (2015). It features a → second album Mr. Wonderful (2015), featuring a (to avoid repeating yourself with "it")
 * (who co-wrote the chorus) → replace the brackets with commas
 * is the closer to a three-part suite alongside → ??
 * that's preluded → that is preluded
 * many whom gave praise to → who generally praised
 * The accompanying music video → An accompanying music video

Infobox

 * The ALT is way too heavy. Resume it to just the key points
 * The release date, lable and genre are not cited in the article's body (!)
 * For "Producer(s)", only say Mark Ronson's last name

Background and development

 * Add the respective release years i brackets for "Easy Rider" and "Actin' Crazy" after each song
 * It acts as the closer to a three-part suite → what do you mean by "the closer"?
 * "Thug Love Story 2017 The Musical", about an elderly man singing to Bronson about a former love that left the streets → this sentence is way too long. And is "about..." referring to "Baby Blue" or any of the other fellow songs you've talked about?
 * was used as a reference by Ronson → Maybe I'm a bit dumb, but how can you use a beat as a reference?
 * with Bronson providing → comma before "with"
 * the featured artist in the song → credited as a featured artist on the recording
 * had previous encounters with while lending → had previously encountered, while lending

Citical reception

 * garnered a positive reception → garnered positive reviews
 * as the song stealer → as the highlight

Music video

 * for the song is in the works → for the song was being worked on
 * Murphy played throughout → replace "played" with "portrayed"

Live performances

 * Avoid the heavy repetition of "performed" with wordings like "sang", "made an appearance"...

Charts and certifications

 * fixed by myself

Copy-violation

 * 18.0% is okay!

Outcome

 * I usually pass the majority of GANs I review, but I do feel like this one needs some more work. You can renominate the article again after some time, and I'll be happy to review it again! Best; Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:11, 31 December 2017 (UTC)